wow me in 20 lines or less. make it beautiful, touching, etc.
no rhyming unless you think you can truly amaze me.
no rhyming unless you think you can truly amaze me.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 21, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 75, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: Thank you to everyone who entered. it was enjoyable to read all your entries, and see what would be captured within 20 lines.
Contest Winners
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Liquorice clouds hung / over the man with piercing eyes / who was about to empty out.... /• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Entries [19]
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He held me prison / In my heart I knew I was wrong / I said he loved me / I was bruised and hurt from the Devil / Rode off on my white horse / To seek my one love / He held me through the times / When I cried,• Commented on by judge.
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the quick beet of me heart / the touch of your skin on mine / the soft kisses / that kept me pulling you back to me / you left me to go bacby DancingRain1692 16 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 17 10:16 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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Let me hold you for a minute, so your touch will last forever. / Let me kiss you twice, so I can treasure it better. / Let us hold hands and gaze at each other. / Let me fall in love with you, so my heart will be puby EvErLaStiNg DeSiRe 3 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 18 12:48 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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She came to me silently in the night / Took my hand, roused me from sleep and gently / Led me to the waterfall of delight, / Tumbling from the spring of life, temptingly. / We stood together, close but not touchiby Rossetti 13 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 18 2:03 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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The roses on the floor / your falling with all the grace in the world / Somehow running and dancing / there's no chance / I'm just standingby Wonderwhenitllrain 15 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 18 10:18 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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Thanks so much for the silver, I'm well chuffed!
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A delightful pathway with steps of a wonderfully shocking comment first of all it was to the Gold
Giggles with bright colors against my profile! My first gold feels like my first trophy at all because of your willingness to make a convenient description of my poem. I love that you said that that's what you were looking for in your review. Wow, it sure was fun watching the judging lol. Thank you... I am very happy that my hard work meant something to you too,
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congrats all
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