Falling inlove with someone you shouldn't.
It might not have happened to everyone, but it sucks when it does happen. When it's a friend and they're just not interested, I've gotta say, it sucks BIG TIME!
So, the rules:
1. Limited swearing, I don't mind it in moderation.
2. No adult poetry, I'm 14, I can't view it.
3. No SiLlY WrItTiNg! I hate it and no full capslock either.
4. Commenting on my poetry won't earn you brownie points but it would be appreciated.
5. Believe your poems! They're always better from the heart!
So, you've got all you need, get writing!
It might not have happened to everyone, but it sucks when it does happen. When it's a friend and they're just not interested, I've gotta say, it sucks BIG TIME!
So, the rules:
1. Limited swearing, I don't mind it in moderation.
2. No adult poetry, I'm 14, I can't view it.
3. No SiLlY WrItTiNg! I hate it and no full capslock either.
4. Commenting on my poetry won't earn you brownie points but it would be appreciated.
5. Believe your poems! They're always better from the heart!
So, you've got all you need, get writing!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 31, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 4 people
- Final notes: Thankyou to eveyone that entered, this was such a hard contest to judge with the large variety of talent filled poems, I struggled to choose.
Thankyou so much.
Much love,
Emily x
Contest Winners
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You notice I'm standing here
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Your dark hair hides the rage behind your eyes. / Your crooked smile has a hint of loneliness and a touch of embarressment. / Your postureby darkangel7567 16 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 7 1:10 PM 2007. In Lost love, Love, Life, Thoughts, Dark, Pain
Bronze trophy winner
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Everyone tells me you're bad. / Everyone tells me you're a drug addict. / Everyone tells me you're a drop out. / Even though it's all true,• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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Here was the chance / The girl to be with / The porcelain doll / Her heart was made of glass / To bad the boy was constructed of ice / And melted away at her smile / Her heart remains so strong / His so goneby mcw120588 10 lines, 2 comments, on May 29 10:36 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Honorable mention
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Distracted by your charming smile / As your sharp tongue / Strikes the fatal blow / Attracted to your fiery spirit / Though was met with an• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The safety of security / No risk or thrills / The love fades to a companionship / that lacks connectivity / I chose for companionship / early on / yet not wanting a physical relationship with it / But I staby DarkOneShadow 29 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 17 4:38 PM 2007. In Angst, Contest, Life, Personal, Sad• Commented on by judge.
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the scars you've created
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SO often I look in envy / so often at night I cry / My thoughts are occupied by your face / and nothing but your voice / I think I need you / so much my heart aches each day / when Iby hogwarts-hottie09 29 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 16 10:00 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Feeling your touch, soft and thin / Feeling deep into your skin / What is the difference between wrong and right? / Between clean and dirty / Lust / Trust / Happiness / Sorrow / All lost / Until tomorrowby bonniegurl42 27 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 14 8:18 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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this is all that you had to say
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by SixtySevenMustang 36 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 26 12:11 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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Dear Martin, / I'm attempting to find a reason to stay, / Why'd you turn away? / Why didn't you listen to what i had to say? / Sometimes i• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A heart is pierced and destroyed
A product of my own insanity
by alexandra. 28 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 25 10:47 AM 2007. In *love*• Commented on by judge. -
I loved you the day we met
I'll love you till I dieby bluecollarlove 23 lines, 23 comments, on Feb 20 9:16 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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He makes suicide look good / He makes death look easy / He makes me scream / He makes me cry / He makes me think because he's deep / He mak• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I thought we were happy
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was it right i fell for a guy that was eight years my senior? / was it okay that i was in middle school when he was a high school senior? / the more i got to know him the more i fell / the more he got to know me the morby camo.egg.army.gurl 15 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 30 11:11 AM 2007. In Personal• Commented on by judge.
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Oh Broken Angel of the night, / Your soul shall not be saved, / Lost within dark and wretched blight, / You live a life depraved. / Oh Darkby Intravenous Jesus 34 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 3 8:45 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Hiding out under the bed / mourning for the loss of my one. / I saw him today / his eyes locked on an other. / He said he loved me, / he said I was his. / The storm approaches / the outline of the doo• Commented on by judge.
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How many poems can we enter? And yes it does suck, Majorly><
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Each? you can enter two at the most.
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everyone falls in love with someone who doesn't love them back, but some don't deal with it. others move on, and some make a sepctical of it. To be frank I didn't make a spectical of when I fell in love with mister wrong for me, in fact he never knew I cared. I figured out how he felt then dropped it like a rock
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Thank you for the silver!
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