I'M BEING SERIOUS!!! I WANT THE BEST!!!!!!!!!
show me your best.
give me your best.
make me love every single word your the poem.
I want to have the urge to read it over and over again.
Hint: I love dark poetry. but you can always make me love something else. it's going to be tough, but I know you poets can do it!
imagery. emotion. metaphors.
I want to love you & your work.
simple as that.
rules:
1.sorry, no erotica. I'm only 15, for goodness sakes.
2.no humor. I see no beauty in humor, just laughs.
3.be confident in your work, I will comment if I don't feel lethargic. I will try to comment everyones! please don't be offended if I don't.
4.no dirty pretty. I like it, but I just view it as something fun...but prose is a yes. I like prose poetry ALOT.
**paint me a picture. let me see the beauty. let me feel it.
-pre-writes are allowed.
-enter as many entries as you want-just make sure it's worth my time.
&& please take a look at my other contests, I'd highy appreciate it!
best of luck to everyone
-lovesong
I will comment/view every piece & then I will look them all over and judge for finalist.!
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don't get too excited to be a finalist, at anytime, I will remove your peice from the list in order to eliminate some..
show me your best.
give me your best.
make me love every single word your the poem.
I want to have the urge to read it over and over again.
Hint: I love dark poetry. but you can always make me love something else. it's going to be tough, but I know you poets can do it!
imagery. emotion. metaphors.
I want to love you & your work.
simple as that.
rules:
1.sorry, no erotica. I'm only 15, for goodness sakes.
2.no humor. I see no beauty in humor, just laughs.
3.be confident in your work, I will comment if I don't feel lethargic. I will try to comment everyones! please don't be offended if I don't.
4.no dirty pretty. I like it, but I just view it as something fun...but prose is a yes. I like prose poetry ALOT.
**paint me a picture. let me see the beauty. let me feel it.
-pre-writes are allowed.
-enter as many entries as you want-just make sure it's worth my time.
&& please take a look at my other contests, I'd highy appreciate it!
best of luck to everyone
-lovesong
I will comment/view every piece & then I will look them all over and judge for finalist.!
{{{{{P.S
don't get too excited to be a finalist, at anytime, I will remove your peice from the list in order to eliminate some..
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 29, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: sorry this contest took so long to judge. i also apologize for not commented everyone's piece, i tried my best. but i now ended up with 17 finalist & i can't cut it down anymore....but a bad thing is that i don't have any pts left... so i added 2 hm's...because that was all i had left.
congrats to the winners every single entry was wondeful...to tell you the truth, i wanted to give everyone trophies!!! you are all very talented & gifted writers.
keep on writing!
p.s. i have approx. 5 different contests i'm running, & i'd appreciate it if you checked them out!
thanks everyone & congrats once again.
-lovesong
Contest Winners
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Sitting on the old tire swing on our tree / In the forest of our youth / The tire swing, where we first met / When I cursed you with cootieby Kaleidoscopeyes 22 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 10 3:42 PM 2007. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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How far down can you really go?
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He gave to us all, a set of wings' / with which he wanted us to sing. / He gave to each of us a string, / in which to pull,when we need him. / He gave to us a set of wings' / in case we need to be set free.by Shirley Shaw 27 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 15 9:37 PM 2007. In Spiritual, 'Gods' Love, And 'Friendship, Peace, And Blessings...• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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She's dangling between the lines of awake and alive. / Fallen from a different cloud, unlike the other angels, she crawled into a hibernatby love.elizabeth 14 lines, 10 comments, on Jul 11 1:47 PM 2007. In PROSE attempt• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
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Innocence is not what lurks in those eyes, / Innocence worn like a mask of man made perfection, / The flux of light in the eye shimmer maliby Nobody Royale 8 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 29 8:38 PM 2007. In Dark, Fantasy, My own style, Inspirational, Collaboration, Weird• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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She's lost him in broken Valentines / Still frames, water stained, on the floor / Past lives with fake smiles / [[Memories]] / Torn in halfby BenziRae 69 lines, 5 comments, on May 4 3:34 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Maybe you refuse / I can see in your eyes / The love they feel for me / They searched my face thrice / Maybe you don't wanna come / When I invited you to the dance / 'Cause you know your feeling / And you d• Viewed by judge.
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I feel sorry for all the pain I put you through / I feel sorry for my unjust cause / when I stared at your lifeless body I cied for you andby Only In Dreams 6 lines, on Jul 16 11:59 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Talk to me / ask about my fantasies / as what i want / take my hand / and stare into my eyes / kiss me lightly / then more passionatly / hold me and tell me just why your here / feel my body next to&nbby blueangel569420 21 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 17 12:38 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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She talks to Jesus' / cause she feels so incomplete. / He's the only one, that she really needs. / She bows her head before him. / She gets down on her knees, / and begs him to forgive her please. / Sheby Shirley Shaw 38 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 15 8:48 PM 2007. In SONG/POEM, Love, Spiritual, Gods'Love Means So Much, He's All We Really, Ever Need....• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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There's no reason I can think of, / And no excuses that apply, / To my sordid situation, / 'coz it's a case of do or die. / When you're cau• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Essence of ORnament / essense of NAMEe / essense of MENTality / All about ORder / All about NAviby Anastasiya 17 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 17 1:39 PM 2007. In Conceptual, Abstract, Acrostic, Pattern, Lost in thought• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You are my light which show's my path, / lighting up my life so fast, / i walk this path with hopes soo strong, / That nothing will ever go wrong, / ill follow your steps ill be right behind, / Ill follow yourby coolballen17 16 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 17 1:17 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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by Kaleidoscopeyes 16 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 5 3:50 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The band plays on / Our music / You pull me tight / Your numbing eyes / Commit me / Souls tangle / Breathing synchronizes / Gliding, coastiby Kaleidoscopeyes 18 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 8 9:05 PM 2007. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Kaleidoscopeyes 12 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 28 12:50 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I never knew when the day was done i would have listened to that outrageous nun, in class i would and watch the time pass. And who would guess? That i'd never know that the time could pass quite so slow. I never knew when theby skull8686 0 lines, on Jul 17 1:59 AM 2007. In cool rhymy• Viewed by judge.
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i wake up each night
wide awake from the nightmareby MarimbaMiss 13 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 15 1:16 AM 2006. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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The moon feels like / your tender embrace / Calm, relaxing me… / Every moment it dances / and I allow mooneyes / to see, all these moves /• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You're all I need in my life The one that makes me smileby Wolf Mistress 24 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 19 5:50 AM 2007. In Personal, Love, The Titles Challenge Group• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Wolf Mistress 28 lines, 15 comments, on Feb 5 4:04 AM 2007. In Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You felt it right? That instant spark? / A gift wrapped in flesh, with just a few scars, / I stayed wrapped in you, alone in the dark, / My• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Secrets,
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Severe emotion, liquefied
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by Whispered Devotions 81 lines, 32 comments, on Nov 15 1:20 PM 2006. In Personal, Dark, Contemporary• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I quietly open the door
So that she does not hearby ur worse nightmare 26 lines, 18 comments, on Feb 17 4:50 PM 2007. In Dark, Personal, Other, Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The feelings that I'm fakeing
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Lighten up baby, / don't be so tense. / The night of your life, / will soon commence. / Drove for miles, / one-hundred more. / Underground• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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White knights in shining armor, / White knights with shining steel swords, / Heroic knights with noble steeds and lances long and straight; / The evil dragon with fatal claws and wicked teeth, / The fair maiden wanby Horseartist7 25 lines, 10 comments, on Jul 10 10:34 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Moonstone oh moonstone that fell from the sky, / Please tell me the answer to life, / Why can't people fly? / Does space go on forever? / I must ask oh moonstone, why? why? why? / Why you may ask, oh youngby Horseartist7 22 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 11 4:39 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Away! Away! / Through the woods, / And over the hills! / Away! Away! / Far Away through the rocks, / And through the stream! / Though sometimes you will dream! / Away! Away! / We run Away and never eveby Horseartist7 20 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 16 11:26 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You have died and are now resting in a bedby trytothink 74 lines, 34 comments, on Apr 26 12:36 PM 2007. In Death, Pain, Friendship, Personal., Loss, Suicide• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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He told me he loved / while i cried into the others arms / He wishpered words of passion / into ears of forgetfulness / He told me all this / wanting my every thought / But my mind was else where / he wanted my• Commented on by judge.
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An Islamic sliver of moon rises-- a scythe without a hammer. In the Indian-corn-blue sky of early evening--by J. Peoples 43 lines, 16 comments, on Nov 29 3:35 PM 2007. In Society, Personal, Contemporary, Beat• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by ebbandflow 39 lines, 13 comments, on Jan 19 8:14 PM 2007. In Adult, Contemporary, Fantasy, Life, Nature, Thoughts• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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You see a girl with tears in her eyes
in her heart are secrets and liesby XsweetpeaX26 16 lines, 18 comments, on Jul 13 8:58 PM 2004. In Other• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Ropes twisting like vines, or vipers / A perfect creature, gentle blade sharp and innocent / Slice expertly, see the beautiful potion seep through / Watch it trickle flawlessly down / They call me sadist, mad / Tortby chugglepuff 26 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 23 8:01 AM 2007. In Dark, Fantasy, Hate, Sadness, Abuse, Death• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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For every ten people, / One is thinking of suicide, / One is about sex, / One is scared of getting hurt, / One is a fake, / One is a jock,by Ignis Corpus 12 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 17 7:14 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Legs so soft, / Plastered with fishnets. / Lips so dark, / With the deep red. / The Gorgeous hair, / With loose black curls. / Seducing eyeby Ignis Corpus 15 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 26 11:29 AM 2007. In RHPS• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Each breath I take fills me with you / Each time I wake I'm thinking of you / You fill me with your fire / That equals my desire / Each wor• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I travelled down to Alabama / Looking for a change of pace / Took the Greyhound into Hoover / So I wouldn't have to face / Anymore more of• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by myriad-dark 44 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 3 12:01 AM 2007. In Lyrics, Personal, Spiritual, Thoughts• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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In the night where dreams are vacant lots / And the city calls the tune / The women there smoke cigarettes / Whispering invitations in the• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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a sweet addiction
kills the painby XsweetpeaX26 17 lines, 9 comments, on Apr 14 1:39 AM 2006. In Angst• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
She never knew that after giving everything she could, and more, one day, it wouldnt be enough. She never thought that he would leave her the way he did. She could only sit and wonder what she did wrong, and remember how amazby XsweetpeaX26 0 lines, on Jul 20 1:37 AM 2007• Viewed by judge.
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Those words he spoke / Those words I heard / Cut deep into my skin / Into my soul,into my heart / Hurting me with with every vengence in itby lexie like woah 24 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 19 4:14 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I like him / I want him to like me / It's so obvious / How can he not see? / She likes him too / She feels my pain / It's his love, we're aby lexie like woah 18 lines, 9 comments, on Jul 21 12:28 PM 2007. In Love, Pain, .. well its not really that painful but ohwell..• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Cradled In my Mind.
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So... You say you want to know me? Do you really? For I want to give you a little taste of the life behind the scenes. I want to give you a wake up call- a bitt• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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We all to Heaven want to go, / and most will fall short. / But before we're all judged. / We all to Heaven's Hell must go. / Where darkness falls everynight. / And the oceans are filled with tears.by nerd42189 16 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 21 11:05 PM 2007• Viewed by judge.
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My heart feels like it's lost a friend
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