* * ! * * & It Still Hurts To Breathe * * ! * *

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on August 23, 2007
• Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 75, Bronze: 25
• Final notes:
  Congrats to all

Contest Winners

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2. How can you leave me?

   How can you leave me, / when you promised never to hurt me? / How can you say im possesive, / when you hung out with your friends / more th

   by Onyx Lina Rose 33 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 17 9:53 AM 2007. In pain, love, sad, life
   Silver trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
3. My confession

   you looked at me / you spoke to me / You made me smile. / I was there when there was no one else / who could of possible cared / I was ther

   by blueangel569420 47 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 17 12:52 AM 2007
   Bronze trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
4. ♥::-[[&& It Still]]-::♥

   I don't know how to say this / But I don't know how to breathe without you / You were my / l\u / n\g / s\ / && Your kisses, my ♥bloo

   by BenziRae 39 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 16 10:32 PM 2007. In Life, Pain, Personal, Love

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
5. Mend Me

   You took my heart / & made it bleed, / the blood I'd spared / for you and me. / In four short words / I broke in two, / one half was taken / when I lost you. / I've carved your name / into my skin,

   by Wulfareika 28 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 17 8:37 AM 2007. In Life, Love, Personal, Sad, Thoughts

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
6. The Night That Changed Everything, Forever.

   We got in an argument, / Last night was bad, / He made her choose, / I hit my dad. / He said him or me, / How could he make her choose, / I

   by Jessi-desensytized 86 lines, 14 comments, on Jul 17 7:19 AM 2007. In Sad, family, hurt, suicide

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [20]

• My Breath

  It still hurts to breathe, / Three months from then, / When you left me, / To go to heaven. / It hurts to cry, / All thoughs fake tears, / Although threw the years, / I did. / I'd

  by Lariahs the 1 18 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 16 10:03 PM 2007. In Sad, Love, Pain, Life, Personal, Other, Thoughts

  • Commented on by judge.
• And It Still Hurts to Breathe

  I see you everywhere, / in my dreams, in my wake. / Its been so long since I've seen your face, / yet Fresh it lies in my mind, / your name

  by vampire of thought 18 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 17 12:24 AM 2007. In personal, sad, hurt, pain, relationships

  • Commented on by judge.
• What Used To Be, Just You And Me

  My hand runs over the wooden carvings in the frame / Behind the glass, a once happy couple looks back at me / Deep down, I know that things

  by LunaAmara 24 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 17 9:35 AM 2007

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• ♥It Hurts♥

  I sit here and wait for time to pass and my life to mean something more. / it may have been something when you were here but now it's all g

  by Sle3p 14 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 17 11:54 AM 2007. In Love, Sad, Hurt

  • Commented on by judge.
• Hearts Revenge

  Your life deteriorates, / As you sit hopelessly, / Love has lied, / It has lied and left you, / You are alone, / Feeling pathetic, / Foolish and helpless, / Why put in effort to live? / Would it be easier to d

  by Tpgm 39 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 17 5:18 PM 2007. In Love, Pain, Dark

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• I did the only thing a mother could

  Yesterday was devastating / today it still hurts to breathe / I can not understand why I feel so cold / thing were said with anger and hate / now I am wondering if I should just bend and break / my life is upside

  by April Vampi72 24 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 18 2:01 AM 2007. In Pain, Sad, Thoughts

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• Etched

  and it still hurts to breathe / these bones won't stretch / under this scarred tissue / i'm etched with marks / i act like they aren't there / that they don't bother me / and so do you / and it sti

  by -MrsWonka- 27 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 27 7:24 PM 2007. In Angst, Depressed, Suicide

  • Commented on by judge.
• y did this happen

  y did this happen / noone knows / really noone cares / but me / iono what to do anymore / u make me sad and u make me happy / but i cant have u anymore / so now all u do is make me sad / i wanna cry when i

  by AmyMarie123 27 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 29 5:45 AM 2007

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• Wonder, wonder.

  I've fallen for a product of imagination. / A tangible fantasy, destroyable by realism and conflict. / And to touch such a delicate piece, / To kiss the lips of my dream, / Would only shove me back from wonderland.

  by A Poison Tree 10 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 14 4:35 PM 2007. In Sad, Love, Personal

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• A Forever Pain

  Leave me alone, just end it now / Im sick of this pain, how much can I allow / Im already broken, in every possible way / And my life is le

  by RazorBlade19 28 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 28 6:19 PM 2007

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Torn and broken

  As the clock reads 8:50pm. / I stare out the front door window, / Waiting to see you. / Hoping you would come, / Even if it's for a min. /

  by Hells Bells 67 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 2 6:40 PM 2007. In Sad, Pain, Emo, Angst

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  Jessi-desensytized
  July 17, 2007
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  i think i have seen you before???? lol
  do you live in kitchener ontario??? lmfao i could be wrong but yea lol
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  Jessi-desensytized
  July 17, 2007
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  nvm i looked at ur page, Illinois is kinda far lol... wrong people... but i swear i recognized you both!!!
  
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  ItsalltheSame68
  July 29, 2007
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  Can you enter more than once?
• Poetryintheblood
  August 25, 2007
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  Thank you for hosting a wonderful contest and for awarding me gold, congratulations to the other winners, Josephine

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