Deep Dark Thoughts

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on August 11, 2007
• Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 20, Bronze: 10, Honorable mention: 2 people
• Final notes:
  look guys i;m soooooooo sorry it to in the end i gok me so long to judge the contest but currently i am stuck without internet and i had no way to judge i actually had to comment 81 poems in 2 hours and let me tell you it was not easy but i tried my best in the end i got it done by using my friends computer hope your heppy with my last wishes.

Contest Winners

1. "V" is for Vanity

   Dramatics are addicting... but what happens if you drop it and make the enemy go cold turkey?

   by AutumnsFlame 51 lines, 27 comments, on Mar 17 1:02 PM 2007
   Gold trophy winner

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2. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2315730, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
3. In The Morning/Mourning (With and Without the You)

   In the morning, the light will show / What she never wanted you to know. / What she kept inside, / Her beautiful but tortured mind. / The p

   by TaintedBeauty 34 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 15 11:31 PM 2007. In Dark, Love, Sad, Contemporary
   Bronze trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
4. Anguish.

   Call it Guernica, call it pain.
   Believe it or not, it’s rooted with distain.

   by Susie Statutory 12 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 18 4:42 PM 2007
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [57]

• Sanctuary

  To burn your image into others heads / Is what you’ve always wanted / Something not to be forgotten / Something messy something grotesque / It seems you’ve done your best / This rope just wasn’t enough / You alway

  by platypusking 77 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 2 9:12 AM 2007. In Dark, Pain, Sad, Angst

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• "Dancing With The Devil"

  by Bohemian Complex 22 lines, 23 comments, on May 23 11:55 AM 2007. In Adult, Erotica, Dark, Fantasy, Spiritual, Thoughts

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• 'Holy' war

  Give me that razorblade
  I'll commit YOUR suicide

  by JadalaStar 56 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 7 9:55 PM 2007

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• The Black Cross Fields

  As I gaze across
  The Black Cross Fields

  by Trapped Under Glass 50 lines, 9 comments, on Feb 17 10:24 AM 2007. In Lyrics, Dark

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• My Suicide

  by MagazinesFall 22 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 3 7:29 PM 2007. In Contest, Adult, Death, Dark, Pain, Sad, Thoughts

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• More

  by My Darkness 15 lines, 13 comments, on Jul 3 7:44 PM 2007. In Personal

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• Blood Red Sunset

  Too early to go home just yet,
  she takes another path.

  by Angierie 59 lines, 23 comments, on Apr 19 5:23 PM 2007. In Abuse, Rape, Murder

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• I'm Destroying this, aren't I?

  Watch me fall / because i've done it again, / haven't I? / I shouldn't speak / I shouldn't Think / because now all I'm doing / Is hurting y

  by Soten-Jaganshi 37 lines, 13 comments, on Jun 26 2:12 PM 2007

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• Another Drink and You'll Be Gone

  Hate boils over to much to keep in / to much to hide from / the words form and bubble frothing at the mouth / pouring out in a single involuntary puke like action / that sends them hurling at the target / far from

  by mcw120588 33 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 4 12:12 PM 2007. In dark, lyrics

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• Dead amongst the living

  Every breathe is as though amoungst the living

  by Salem 12 lines, 36 comments, on Apr 28 10:28 PM 2005. In Personal

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• Death stricken

  Grief stricken and heart broken I have been / too many times over, my soul has been crushed. / Many roads of happiness I have walked, / tha

  by th3sl4y3r 40 lines, 16 comments, on Apr 28 7:13 PM 2007. In pain, death, life, love, friendship, thoughts, personal

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• Darkness screams ...

  by poetic-enigma21 70 lines, 14 comments, on Jun 30 2:50 PM 2006. In Dark

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• Everyday

  All around me / There is no walls / Yet my soul is caged / For freedom / How long I have wait / But like a crush bud / Never bloom into flower / Like ruin forts / Never to be rebuilt / Tears swept

  by prettyktm 29 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 17 12:34 AM 2007. In Pain.

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• Full Moon

  Full Moon - delirious diseaster / I am your servant. You're my master. / The saddest face - the darkest tale / About a girl in yellow veil

  by Anastasiya 11 lines, 17 comments, on May 28 1:31 AM 2007. In Dark, Love

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• As The Blood Drips to the Floor

  How would it feel to slit my wrists? / Would the pain inside just go away / Would the horror of the day just fade away? / I can’t help but to think the thoughts that I have / As the blood drips to the floor

  by April Vampi72 28 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 29 10:17 PM 2007

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• The Dark Side Of Love

  Death, hatred, Revenge, Sabotage...Torture
  The darkest side of love

  by GlowstickOfLove 84 lines, 11 comments, on Jul 17 2:54 AM 2007. In Pain, Dark, Contest

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• The Night That Changed Everything, Forever.

  We got in an argument, / Last night was bad, / He made her choose, / I hit my dad. / He said him or me, / How could he make her choose, / I

  by Jessi-desensytized 86 lines, 14 comments, on Jul 17 7:19 AM 2007. In Sad, family, hurt, suicide

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• Hypocrisy Is the New Lie

  Walking closer to the edge, / she stares with but an opal glare, / down below, / she does not care, / for the swirling essence, / that tran

  by Gay-Militant 49 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 17 2:41 AM 2007. In Angst, Personal, Sad, Spiritual, Thoughts, Weird, Hope, Pain

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• Exhume My Heart

  Save me.dig up my heart.it is still alive.i promise.

  by Lady Nightshade 44 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 12 6:11 AM 2007. In Lyrics, Love, Dark, Sad

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• Love Kills

  I watch you in obscurity, / Your bedroom light repels, / Me from seeing your body. / I cannot be in your sight, / It would only stop my sho

  by Sorath 55 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 17 6:10 AM 2007. In Abuse, Death, Romance, Angry

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• A Warrant of His face

  Last they heard he left here / / with a smile on his nose.

  by trytothink 44 lines, 17 comments, on May 11 3:53 PM 2007. In Dark, Death, Weird

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• Sought After Screw

  by rerouni66 41 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 29 2:26 PM 2007. In Angst, Dark, Adult, Life, Love, Nature, Pain, Thoughts

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• Blood, Gore, Pain, and Rot.

  There was much blood splattered on the floor.
  It was fresh and the smell intoxicated me so.

  by Teufelstamme 48 lines, 22 comments, on Dec 10 8:49 PM 2005. In Abuse, Dark

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• One Last Reflection

  I am such a worthless boy, / Pathetic, not insane, / How is it that what brings me joy, / Does also render pain? / So far gone, I fear not

  by Intravenous Jesus 14 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 16 9:26 PM 2007

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• An Unimaginable Form of Evil

  by ur worse nightmare 27 lines, 13 comments, on Jan 7 4:41 AM 2007. In Dark, Erotica, Life, Sad

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• "You thought you knew me" (Dark adult)

  by getsbetter 27 lines, 19 comments, on Dec 17 4:28 PM 2006. In Adult, Dark, Other

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• A Question of truth

  You thought I might, / Just break down and cry. / So you left me all alone, / Without a helping hand. / But now the pain is evident, / Life won't be the same. / In a dark corner, / Waiting for the light. / But

  by Greson De Winter 31 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 24 6:00 PM 2007. In Dark, Life, Pain, Other

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• No simple words ©

  No simple words atone for my disease,
  not even one a tributary ease ~

  by EyeRaven 18 lines, 19 comments, on Mar 11 9:30 PM 2007. In Dark, and very Dark, Personal, Thoughts, Weird.

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• the inner battle

  Somewhere beneath the shards of my innocence
  there was a demonic part of you

  by HangingSoul 42 lines, 29 comments, on May 14 8:27 AM 2006. In Fantasy, Weird, Dark

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• Here's to a Life, Gone and Forgotten

  The blood gushes out,pouring down
  Her arm, and leaks onto the floor.

  by torieshawesum 17 lines, 22 comments, on Feb 19 9:16 PM 2007. In Abuse, Other, Sad, Weird, Dark

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• Failure

  Failure... / That's all I am. / My friends call me annoying, / So I failed to be a friend. / They say that I'm annoying, / Like I'm nothing

  by LeonXwabbist 34 lines, 10 comments, on Jul 17 4:42 PM 2007. In Pain, death

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• Unfathomable

  Earth thrust into a breathing gloom / From horizon to horizon / An unbroken aroma of death and doom / Thick drips of acid rain / Puncturing

  by Kaleidoscopeyes 18 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 27 7:42 PM 2007. In Lost love, Depressed

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• Harem of the Underground

  by Sapphire Rose 14 lines, 4 comments, on May 26 6:43 PM 2007. In Dark, Adult, Pain, Thoughts

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• Calico Road

  by myriad-dark 39 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 15 11:32 PM 2007. In Lyrics, Life, Fantasy, Dark

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• Scars

  Dances of knife blades
  waltzes of glass

  by vierna 15 lines, 12 comments, on Mar 28 12:38 AM 2006. In Dark

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• "Candice"

  Only fifteen, a frail little thing, / being a sex toy for her step father. / also molested by her mother, / no way out, no help in sight. /

  by TexasMomma 17 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 18 2:24 AM 2007. In Abuse, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Life, Pain

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• The Dark Shadow That Covered the Bastard

  Those words he spoke / Those words I heard / Cut deep into my skin / Into my soul,into my heart / Hurting me with with every vengence in it

  by lexie like woah 24 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 19 4:14 PM 2007

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• Sweet Abyss

  So bad the pain. / Why bother with it? / Release into the sweet abyss. / Let go of dreams and hopes. / No one cares. Why bother / with the

  by VampQueen 56 lines, 9 comments, on Jul 13 11:38 PM 2007. In Dark, Suicide

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• The Final Grief

  It's about a guy who has a bad case of a broken heart, after he found out that his girlfriend was cheating on him.

  by C.I.M.A Punk 21 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 28 3:21 PM 2007. In broken-hearted, love

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• Vampire

  The Vampire crouched down / Awaiting its very unique prey / He has laid out her new gown / When she sees her face turns ash grey / His smirk is almost as bad as a bite / His eyes almost like a mirror / His gr

  by Followthebutterfly 24 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 29 3:23 PM 2007

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• my apologies

  I started this letter that had many words titled "My apologies"...lying on the floor, yet hanging from my knees. Blisters bound me to my ce

  by lostinthevoid 42 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 6 6:52 PM 2007

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• Thorns

  In my side, in my head, on my mind / piercing me deeping I die inside / wondering what did I ever do to deserve such a thing / born into th

  by Ephiphany 52 lines, 20 comments, on Jul 17 11:32 AM 2007. In Sad, Thoughts, Life, My Way

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• Baneful Void

  Hollow / As a fallen tree / Long since forgotten to time / A vast emptiness surrounds / What once was the membrane of my heart / But now, a

  by DancingShadowCorpse 29 lines, 9 comments, on Jul 21 11:11 PM 2007. In Dark, Depression, Escape, Empty

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• Beasts Desires

  As the beatst scratches agaisn't the metal caged
  I locked it up for many reasons

  by Hells Bells 53 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 24 6:16 PM 2007. In Dark, Fantasy, My life, Friendship

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• Self-Defense

  Some men don't deal with innocence. / They grab hold of its baby flesh, / mold it to their exact specifications; / pinch its cheeks too har

  by lepos in iocando 21 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 29 11:07 PM 2007

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• Rag Doll

  by Rainy Days 28 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 20 2:47 AM 2007

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• Tranquility

  Deep woods in the forest / So also the valleys / Cuts the noise to size / A bird calling the mate / Swims in deep silence. / Slightest whis

  by Venugopal 21 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 23 11:33 PM 2007. In Nature

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• Mirrors I bleed

  by lustfulviolets 35 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 28 8:54 PM 2007. In Adult, Dark, Pain, Weird

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• Destroyed

  Standing in the moonlight, / Such agony I can feel. / Smell the death around me, / This scent it helps me breathe. / On the ground lies their bodies. / Pool of blood so deep. / I lap the blood unto my mouth.

  by Swintha 22 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 29 6:09 AM 2007. In Contest, Dark

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• Vent Arianna... Vent

  by Whispered Devotions 89 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 9 12:27 AM 2007

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• Requime

  Cursed for an existence I never wanted, / Lives i've watched taken away in a instant, / This is my head, so watch your step. / Watch where you tread here the ground is not safe / one false move could seal your fa

  by Forsaken wings 24 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 17 9:36 AM 2007

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Comments

• By me, right now

  Adding your comment:
• 
  Sorath
  July 17, 2007
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  Is it too late to enter?
• 
  rerouni66
  July 29, 2007
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  Good luck to all the entrants.
• 
  xxRainbowDawnxx
  August 12, 2007
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  Thanks for the Silver! *silver*
  well done to the other winners
  Best wishes and glad you liked my deprived mind!
• 
  prettyktm
  August 14, 2007
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  Congrats to the winners!
  Take care,
  Pretty
  
  PS. WOLF. Do something about your internet.

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