I'm going away for a few days, so I'm gonna set you all a challenge to keep me entertained when I get back.
I challenge you to make me cry.
The winner will be the person who can make me cry or feel the most.
This isn't going to be easy, I don't let go of my tears easily.
So enter your most emotional, painful, heartbreaking poems.
I'm more likely to cry if I can relate to it.
I have a very short attention span.
So you know the challenge, now for the rules:
- No sticky caps or net speak
- Anything goes subject and form wise
- Background information is always good
- The poem has to be full of raw, painful emotion
So there you have it, enter and have me in floods of tears, prove to me I have a heart
Lawl, good luck.
I challenge you to make me cry.
The winner will be the person who can make me cry or feel the most.
This isn't going to be easy, I don't let go of my tears easily.
So enter your most emotional, painful, heartbreaking poems.
I'm more likely to cry if I can relate to it.
I have a very short attention span.
So you know the challenge, now for the rules:
- No sticky caps or net speak
- Anything goes subject and form wise
- Background information is always good
- The poem has to be full of raw, painful emotion
So there you have it, enter and have me in floods of tears, prove to me I have a heart
Lawl, good luck.Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on August 2, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 450, Silver: 250, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 3 people
- Final notes: Thank you very much for all your entries, I'm especially pleased with my finalists, though all the poems I received were great. No one managed to make me cry though, so I guess I really do have a heart of stone
Thanks again, and if I didn't comment anyone, message me and I will =]
Contest Winners
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by Crook Oneil 35 lines, 14 comments, on Apr 15 6:27 PM 2007. In Adult, Contemporary, Love, Pain
Silver trophy winner
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I. / the earth is shaking out of its sphere / from the heavy thud thud thud stop / thud of soldiers’ boots on the streets / of paris, gunsby aeolia 218 lines, 17 comments, on May 7 5:39 PM 2007. In tragedy, spiritual, life, thoughts, the world's end, spirit of man, doomed love
Bronze trophy winner
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These clouds are like my cloudy eyes
Both hide their suns
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It was snowing that day
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Touch the softness of my cheek
as the silence grows.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
I had to have an ultrasound,
To find out what was wrong.by slipperssun 26 lines, 26 comments, on Dec 18 5:56 PM 2006. In Love, Personal, Goodbyes, Loss, Dedication, Pain
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I beg you please don't hit me / I won't do it again / I never meant to do it / Like me, it just happened / I never meant to break it / To shatter it into a thousand parts / It wasn't meant to be so brittle / But• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Honorable mention
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Why did you die,when I was so young / That's all that raced through my mind that unfortunate day / Wish I could have seen you one last time• Commented on by judge.
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The Forlorn Love Song / w. peter Sanci July 14 / 2007 / I dedicate this poem to my beautiful wife leni. Who has stuck by me in the / Good times and the bad. Leni I love you• Commented on by judge.
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This happened yesterday. please comment on this.by Clinging-to-Life 67 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 14 11:44 AM 2007. In Personal.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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We where always there for each other / We always loved one another / I was always caring for you, always worry about you / “I love you” words I would hear so often / I would repeat them daily for you / Then you wouby curlydevil 18 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 8 4:05 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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How could this happen? / Why did this happen? / The pain, I am going crazy. / It feels like my life has been destroyed. / How am I to keep on living? / How am I to keep on going? / Every thing thatby writer-of -poems 26 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 16 7:03 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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I went to the window . / I looked out side. / It was raining hard . / I almost cry-ed. /• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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It’s been eight years daddy, with all those loving memories we’ve once had. / I cry sometimes thinking of you, thinking of the father we’ve once had. / I try not to cry, but it hurts! It’s hurts my heart. I stil• Commented on by judge.
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Just one person who is tired of it allby Dark Dragon of fire 42 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 25 5:07 PM 2006. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I could always talk to you
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Comments
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thank you for the award and the points
I'm glad no one made you cry
congrats to the winners
peace Muddy -
Congrats to everyone who placed, and thanks for the bronze! Made my day, that did.
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