Mmmmk. A contest. Points will go up!!! In this contest I want to feel your pain.. I want to know how you feel.. and what makes you feel that way.. I DON'T want to hear
"You left me
I cried
Then I cut"
No. Terrible. I'll probably DQ you just because I don't like it.. {my contest.. my rules.. my judgement.. DEAL}
Soo.. I like the dark poetry.. you know.. cutting, suicide, pain, hate, abuse {not graphic.. more about the feelings} etc. {I like love poems too.. but they better be good} I love ryhming poems, but If you have something that doesn't ryhme, don't worry, free-verse is great too, as long as it fits what I want.
Prewrites are allowed.. but I'll probably be a little more picky {just a little}. You've had more time to work on them, therefore they should be better...
{almost done, I swear}
I am going to be very honest in my comments.. angain my contest.. my rules.. my judgement.. DEAL.
If I don't like it, or I don't think that it fits my contest.. I will be nice about it.. but you'll know.
KK.. Now the nasty.. rulEs
~No StICky Caps.. I gET MigRanEs eAsy.. If YoUR PoeM giVeS mE a MIgraNe cUZ You tyPeD LikE thIS.. YoU'Re geTtIng DQ'd
~Please don't argue with my judgement.. if you get DQ'd, and You'd like a chance to fix it, ask nicely, I might let you enter something else.
~Please Put "Blackend Heart" In your authors box so I know you read all the rules... no warnings my dears.. if your poem suddendly magically dissapears from my contest.. i sugest you fix your mistake and re-enter it..
~No dissing other poets.. DQ'd {will not be nice about that one}
~No complaining about anything
~Please no erotic stuff.. i want dark.. not sex crazed
KK, that's it. Points will go up, and I may extend the contest time. EVERY poem will be commented. Kthnx.
"You left me
I cried
Then I cut"
No. Terrible. I'll probably DQ you just because I don't like it.. {my contest.. my rules.. my judgement.. DEAL}
Soo.. I like the dark poetry.. you know.. cutting, suicide, pain, hate, abuse {not graphic.. more about the feelings} etc. {I like love poems too.. but they better be good} I love ryhming poems, but If you have something that doesn't ryhme, don't worry, free-verse is great too, as long as it fits what I want.
Prewrites are allowed.. but I'll probably be a little more picky {just a little}. You've had more time to work on them, therefore they should be better...
{almost done, I swear}
I am going to be very honest in my comments.. angain my contest.. my rules.. my judgement.. DEAL.
If I don't like it, or I don't think that it fits my contest.. I will be nice about it.. but you'll know.
KK.. Now the nasty.. rulEs
~No StICky Caps.. I gET MigRanEs eAsy.. If YoUR PoeM giVeS mE a MIgraNe cUZ You tyPeD LikE thIS.. YoU'Re geTtIng DQ'd
~Please don't argue with my judgement.. if you get DQ'd, and You'd like a chance to fix it, ask nicely, I might let you enter something else.
~Please Put "Blackend Heart" In your authors box so I know you read all the rules... no warnings my dears.. if your poem suddendly magically dissapears from my contest.. i sugest you fix your mistake and re-enter it..
~No dissing other poets.. DQ'd {will not be nice about that one}
~No complaining about anything
~Please no erotic stuff.. i want dark.. not sex crazed
KK, that's it. Points will go up, and I may extend the contest time. EVERY poem will be commented. Kthnx.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on August 5, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 50, Bronze: 35, Honorable mention: 1 people
- Final notes: Wow. Ok so I finally got the conttest judged. {Sorry It took so long.. I was at band camp for a week.. no computer.. I almost died.} Anyway, The contest was pretty half and half. I was somewhat, ok, pretty dissapointed with the number of people who didn't follow my rules. That didn't make me very happy. Thank you though to the people that did. Some of the entries were pretty amazing, and I enjoyed reading every one. Thank you to all.
** I am holding a follow up contest for the people in the FINALISTS LIST ONLY! If you are not a finalist, please do not enter. It will be up today, for I am starting it right after I send this comment. finalists ONLY! I mean it. Everyone in finalists please enter. More info soon.**
Thank you everyone!!
}{aley
Contest Winners
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How will you know I am hurting / If you cannot see my pain? / To wear it on my body / Tells what words cannot explain / How can I ask for your help / When I cannot find the words? / These scars are their ownby AaliyahSparrow 24 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 16 1:58 AM 2007. In Angst, Dark, Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts
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Dramatics are addicting... but what happens if you drop it and make the enemy go cold turkey?by AutumnsFlame 51 lines, 27 comments, on Mar 17 1:02 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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We got in an argument, / Last night was bad, / He made her choose, / I hit my dad. / He said him or me, / How could he make her choose, / I• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Alone in my room without any light, / In the still of dawn from the passing night, / My thoughts drift back to the things I saw, / When the shadows were out and the darkness was law. / When the moon was new and the sby Alikilie 24 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 31 6:18 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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i promised you i would stop / i told u i will live for u / but now that ur gone / i have no reason to live / i grab my blade and slide it aby kaceyzgurl 18 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 21 9:56 PM 2007. In Pain• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Why'd you leave me? / We seemed so perfect for each other, / All the fun we had; the time we spent together, / But I guess it was all a lie• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Helplessly Shattered / Blood dripping through / The cracks among the glass / I lie here alone / Broken in the rain / Love has pierced / This heart again / Drowning me in crimson sorrow / Reaching out• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A thousand times to live this moment over again / Creates more chances to break my skin open. / Lies kept inside for so long, until this story is told / I slash, I cry, I wanted to die in misery / No twinkle in mby forgetmenow 34 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 15 3:29 PM 2007. In Dark• Commented on by judge.
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I howl for my beloved
the red-haired lady that forgave me
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I sit on my golden chair waiting / for the life to drip through the air / wanting nothing more then to see / the world turn away from me /• Commented on by judge.
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Crawling, / Searching, / Scanning the horizon, / Looking for you, / The whore who left me here, / Broken, / Defeated, / Consumed by my rageby Cool.Indifference 17 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 20 9:53 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Looking not for the abyss, / clutching for sanity. / Hoping not to miss, / Roses of insanity. / Sweet knife, hideous blade, / my sanctuary• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Wandering though darkened night,
Empty and sucked dry of life,by Vampstress 25 lines, 15 comments, on Jun 3 12:37 AM 2005. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I laugh at the thought of losing you, / For it is something an already-maddened woman / Refuses to do. / I see you in every damned reflect• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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OhMyGosh!!
Thank you so much for the gold, this was such a brilliant contest. I'll make sure to enter the next one.
iChewGlitter - x
