Read the poem below! I want something like that
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I see all the models on TV
Seeing all that some girls yearn to be
They're all skinny and look like twigs
Making some of us feel like pigs
Does beauty even come in my size
Or will I never feel that suprise
Just because I'm not itty-bitty
Doesnt mean that I'm not pretty
So Im not so skinny but that doesnt mean that Im a freak
Just a little bit different, special, unique
You may hate me but I dont hate you
Why dont you try a day in my shoes
People mock me
They humiliate me but I guarantee
Most of them dont care
They dont know what it feels like to be compared
To be exiled out from everyone
Yet nothings been done
To feel lonely and hurt
To be thrown out and kicked on the dirt
Does anyone even hear my cries
Does beauty come in my size?
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Do you believe that beauty comes from the outside or does beauty dwell within? What do you think?
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RULES
1 NoNE oF tHIs NaSTy PleAse!
2 Put Im sewing myself together because Im falling apart in your authors box so I know you read my rules!
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I see all the models on TV
Seeing all that some girls yearn to be
They're all skinny and look like twigs
Making some of us feel like pigs
Does beauty even come in my size
Or will I never feel that suprise
Just because I'm not itty-bitty
Doesnt mean that I'm not pretty
So Im not so skinny but that doesnt mean that Im a freak
Just a little bit different, special, unique
You may hate me but I dont hate you
Why dont you try a day in my shoes
People mock me
They humiliate me but I guarantee
Most of them dont care
They dont know what it feels like to be compared
To be exiled out from everyone
Yet nothings been done
To feel lonely and hurt
To be thrown out and kicked on the dirt
Does anyone even hear my cries
Does beauty come in my size?
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Do you believe that beauty comes from the outside or does beauty dwell within? What do you think?
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RULES
1 NoNE oF tHIs NaSTy PleAse!
2 Put Im sewing myself together because Im falling apart in your authors box so I know you read my rules!
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Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 17, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50
- Final notes: Okay Im sorry I ended the contest early but I realized I wont be here when its supposed to end and I already had and idea of who was going to win. I really enjoyed holding this contest I wrote the poem in the contest and it made me wonder what others thought about the subject so I was like "Im going to hold a contest on it!" And wow I was soo amazed on everyones entries! I loved them all and I wish I could give you all points but I dont have enough points for that many honorable mentions! Well I loved all the poems and I was really really impressed on everyones enthusiasm! Congradulations to the winners, and to everyone else. You all get the point that beauty comes from the inside its deeper than skin makeup and hair! You dont have to look like a twig! Everyone is Beautiful!
Thanks
Natalie
Contest Winners
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I see all these diets / and the high prices / The actors and actresses on TV / so tiny and skinny, are they trying to make me see? / Are they telling me I need to lose more weight? / to scrape all my food• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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My beauty might fall outside of your norm, / My body might be in an unpleasant form. / But beauty is not found just in your skin, / It's something that lives deeply within. / It's a bottomless trust, a love, andby NotAMolly 11 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 14 6:23 PM 2007. In Hope, Life, Thoughts
Bronze trophy winner
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Pretty does as pretty, pleases. / Many found the pretty, only does the teases. / Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. / Blind in one eye, and too much older. / The lady is wby mcheadle 24 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 14 7:21 PM 2007. In Fantasy, Hope, Life, Humor, Pain, Nature• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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You may tag the size of my body / You will never measure the size of my heart / And when I'm not seeing through these celebrity frames / Iby FelineMuse 15 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 15 12:35 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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by AliceinPoetryLand 45 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 16 8:31 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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When I look in the mirror, / I can see within, / What I thought had never been, / Appered one morning, / Saw the beauty in my eyes, / That• Commented on by judge.
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Loved the poem and the contest theme! I will be back to write for this one!
Blessings,
Azlyn -
Being more voluptuous myself I cam assure you there are som men who prefer it. However with all this aside it suprises me that you would limite the poems submitted to rhyme only, isn't that just like limiting the body to one size,that everything must fit into one little nitch. Just asking.

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I totally didnt think about that and thanks fer pointing it out i will change the rules!
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Sweetie!
Love comes anywhere, anytime and to who deserve it.
I'm happily a size 14, not a twig atall and I've found love and happiness
The media is wrong to have oppressed people with their Deadly Looking Models, in my opinion all of them should eat a good Big Mac! And stop giving teen's freaking eating disorders..
Lol
xxx
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bookmarked!
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I love the poem you used as a theme..this contest is amazing. It'll get girls really thinking. Good job sweetie
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