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Niki FM

write me a poem about how this song makes you feel

Niki FM by hawthorne heights

Lets go down now
Into the darkness of your thoughts
Hurry up now, we’re waiting for us to fall

(I fall to pieces now) I fall to pieces now
A broken mirror
(I fall to pieces) in your life

The silence in black and white
Falling forward as she walks towards the light

I know Im outside of your window with my radio

I sleep with one eye open so I can
(I sleep with one eye open) see you breathing
I follow your chest home
(So I can see your breathing) until I
I can see you
I can hear you breathe in, exhale

The silence in black and white

I know Im outside of your window with my radio
I know Im outside of your window with my radio
Im outside of your window with my radio
Im outside of your window with my radio
Im outside of your window with my radio

Im outside of your window with my radio
You are the only station, you play the song I know
You are the song I know

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on July 27, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300
  • Final notes:
    great job

Contest Winners

  1. All Alone
    The eyes stare at him in anger and painful rejection / He can't look at them no longer / The blood in my heart pusles faster and faster, wh
    by Fey Absinthe 14 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 29 5:25 PM 2007
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. Know Me
    Open your eyes / To cry. / Hold on tightly and never / Let me go. / Too far away to catch you, / Yet I still see you fall. / Curl up, / Cry yourself to sleep. / Dream of me. / My lips move but you can't
    by Shiro Okami 24 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 13 5:56 PM 2007
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. Flying Into Darkness
    Waiting for darkness to fall / Only capable of reaching in your dreams / Where everything falls apart / I've finally arrived / Everything i
    by Dovina 30 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 14 8:39 PM 2007. In Other, Sad
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. The Silence Of Tradgedy
    My eyes are involuntarily closed, / Yet my heart still beats against my chest. / I feel you all around me, / But your gone, gone to be the best. / Your fingers trace my body, / But are you really there? / Goo
    by -shiningstars- 56 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 26 2:13 AM 2007. In Lyrics
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [5]

1 - 5 of 5
  • outside my window
    you envy me so / everywhere I go / you follow me there / but why can't you look me in the eyes? / you love me, yes / or is my chest / outside my window is best / stay there if you won't just go aw
    by Papyrus 16 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 16 1:55 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.

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  • Dovina
    July 13, 2007
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    Reserve my spot please

    I LOVE this song! Great Idea! REserve my spot, I'll be back, as I have to leave shortly -

    -missjilleen


  • Shiro Okami
    July 13, 2007
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    I like Hawthrone Heights, but I can't help prefering their newest album. December makes me cry.


  • LoveLikePoetry
    July 13, 2007
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    love this song, love this band. can you please reserve a spot for me while i think about what to write? i'll either enter later today or tommorrow. thanx