Give me poems about people who have hurt you. I just found out my fiancee has been lying to me and may well be cheating on me. I'm pretty broken hearted. Wallow in misery and rage with me please.
Give me ANYTHING, as long as:
It's readable
It's emotional and from the heart
It isn't about love and forgiveness and happy shit like that
You use proper english
That is all I ask. Curse all you want, put in sex and violence as much as you want, make death threats, suicide pacts, anything you want to put in there as long as it's good.
If you want to get a slight idea of what I want you could read the song on my profile.
****POINTS WILL BE ADDED AS SOON AS I GET THE RESULTS OF THE CONTESTS I'M IN****
Thank you.
Give me ANYTHING, as long as:
It's readable
It's emotional and from the heart
It isn't about love and forgiveness and happy shit like that
You use proper english
That is all I ask. Curse all you want, put in sex and violence as much as you want, make death threats, suicide pacts, anything you want to put in there as long as it's good.
If you want to get a slight idea of what I want you could read the song on my profile.
****POINTS WILL BE ADDED AS SOON AS I GET THE RESULTS OF THE CONTESTS I'M IN****
Thank you.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 11, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 625
- Final notes: OK so..... as it turns out.... i was wrong, he was honest and faithful, and now I feel bad.
But hey! GREAT job everyone who entered. I absolutely loved all the poems.
Contest Winners
Entries [11]
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Here I am sitting in my room thinking of you once again / Thoughts of you make me smile / I close my eyes and memories flood my mind / I find a smile creeping onto my face / As I start to laugh out loud / Tear formby mandeedawn 84 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 11 2:37 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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Far off in a distant land / There lived an enchanted princess / all alone, no one to talk to / Her heart was filled with lonliness / Untilby LadyLeviathan 48 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 6 11:35 AM 2007
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One Last Kiss / Please; / Darling. / Lipstick / Would Splatter / On The / Walls / And / We'd Have The Perfect / Massacre' / Smile; / Sweetheart. / You Have Her Now; / Yo• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Is there someone out there? Is it just me?
Maybe it is just me, or perhapes a very long, very, very bad dream.....• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
enraged inside i swear i could kill everyone around me / im proud though 'cause even though im pissed as fuck, today a tear you wont see / damn i hate men, and yes all the motherfucking men of the world / i want to go• Viewed by judge.
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Fuck forever, forever is dead. / It died with you, and all you said. / It lies beneath me, underground, / Now that I, the truth have found.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Does it hurt you to hear my voice? / Cause I'm-a wonderin / how long it will be until / you acknowledge me again. / You tell me you love and care about me, / but sometimes I wonder / is love strong enough• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I thought what we had was love / I thought you loved me as much as i did / I was ready to have your name / I was ready to say "i do" / Butby Caroline Samar 43 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 11 4:44 PM 2007. In Dark, Personal, Thoughts, Suicide, Depressed, Freewrite, Sadness, Depression• Viewed by judge.
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Black eyes watching me, / Red heart beating on the floor boards, / Crimson blood dripping from your mouth, / Ice cold rose stabbed throughby icequeen101 28 lines, 2 comments, on May 21 9:54 AM 2007. In Sad, Love, Life, Fantasy, Dark, Angst, Pain, Other, Weird, Thoughts, Emo• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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what changed? content with all the lonely nights, / knowing that i at-least had you finally; how could / i give up? after all that time, after all the work / i tried so hard so somehow reach your level / i stutte• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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then its a good thing you didn't marry him yet.
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