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wedding vows

i need the most perfict poen 4 a up comming weding so can you pleas help me and if you would comment on my work and on the work of others that enter it must be frome the heart good luck

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on July 28, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 20 people
  • Final notes:
    i am so moved by what i have read i thank you all verry much
  • To judge this contest, you need to have at least as many finalists as you have rewards. You have 4 awards but only 3 finalists.

Contest Winners

  1. The softness of your touch / The sweet whispers in the night / I knew when we first met / I never wanted to have you out of my sight. / The way you listen to my words / The way you kiss me goodbye / The way y
    by badddgirl 26 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 11 1:43 AM 2007. In Wedding vows
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3181010, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  3. As we embark on this epic journey / As you slip your hand in mine / I will walk step mirroring your step / And support you when you may lose your balance / This road will be frought with difficuty / We will fal
    by adorasmum 13 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 13 6:16 PM 2007. In Love
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • badddgirl
    July 11, 2007
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    Cool contest I am in for sure.


  • pattyann4500
    July 11, 2007
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    Oh, you've come to the right place. There are certainly some wonderful poets here to help you with that. I'll try to write something, too. Congratulations on your upcoming wedding. Patricia


  • badddgirl
    July 11, 2007
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    Yes Congratulations indeed!


  • Shenton silver member
    July 11, 2007
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    wife

    D'you want us to write real proper, or like you does?

    Shenton


    • robert bolin
      July 21, 2007
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      I think you are an ass hole, And that you should imunize your self from the rest of the world, Unless you can learn that all poets and people in general have the right to spell
      Look or even talk how ever they please, Robert bolin


  • blue20bunny
    July 11, 2007
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    wedding vows...

    you better get a divorce from your husband first... what religion are you?


  • Danna Hobart
    July 11, 2007
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    I make it a point not to enter contests where the holder can't even spell the word "perfect."


  • dustookie2
    July 11, 2007
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    Compassion Like Chivalry Is Dead

    Well Jesua da bloody Christ you thinka you know betta eh?........

    Sarcasm is born of arrogance and self-delusional indulgence. Surely if poetry is an expression of the soul expedited by emotion and clothed in the language of those who live it then it behooves us to look behind the facade of mere words into the diorama and plethora of feeling held within. Or if you like stop being a smart arse and look to the meaning not the words.

    We are all seeking – epistemologists.

  • robert bolin
    July 21, 2007
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    Before you judge a book by it's cover remember this please

    The people who throw these contests, And acculate the right to spell how ever they damn well chose have that right, If they spell it wrong so fuckin what, who gives a shit, Look at your self in the mirror for a fuckin moment and realise, Some people do what they do because that is their way,
    Thank you robert bolin


  • SeptemberFaith
    July 24, 2007
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    Did you skip grammar class?

    Maybe you should replace your original with this one (even though you are not supposed to solicit comments)...

    I need the most perfect poem for an up and coming wedding. Please help me. Also, please comment on my work and on the work of others that enter. It must be from the heart. Good luck.

    p.s. weding is spelled wedding. FYI.

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