i need the most perfict poen 4 a up comming weding so can you pleas help me and if you would comment on my work and on the work of others that enter it must be frome the heart good luck
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 28, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 20 people
- Final notes: i am so moved by what i have read i thank you all verry much
- To judge this contest, you need to have at least as many finalists as you have rewards. You have 4 awards but only 3 finalists.
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The softness of your touch / The sweet whispers in the night / I knew when we first met / I never wanted to have you out of my sight. / The way you listen to my words / The way you kiss me goodbye / The way y• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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As we embark on this epic journey / As you slip your hand in mine / I will walk step mirroring your step / And support you when you may lose your balance / This road will be frought with difficuty / We will fal• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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by Forever-Sorry 13 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 11 11:55 AM 2007. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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Cool contest I am in for sure.
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Oh, you've come to the right place. There are certainly some wonderful poets here to help you with that. I'll try to write something, too. Congratulations on your upcoming wedding. Patricia
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Yes Congratulations indeed!
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D'you want us to write real proper, or like you does?
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I think you are an ass hole, And that you should imunize your self from the rest of the world, Unless you can learn that all poets and people in general have the right to spell
Look or even talk how ever they please, Robert bolin
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wedding vows...
you better get a divorce from your husband first... what religion are you? -
I make it a point not to enter contests where the holder can't even spell the word "perfect."
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Compassion Like Chivalry Is Dead
Well Jesua da bloody Christ you thinka you know betta eh?........
Sarcasm is born of arrogance and self-delusional indulgence. Surely if poetry is an expression of the soul expedited by emotion and clothed in the language of those who live it then it behooves us to look behind the facade of mere words into the diorama and plethora of feeling held within. Or if you like stop being a smart arse and look to the meaning not the words.
We are all seeking – epistemologists.
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Before you judge a book by it's cover remember this please
The people who throw these contests, And acculate the right to spell how ever they damn well chose have that right, If they spell it wrong so fuckin what, who gives a shit, Look at your self in the mirror for a fuckin moment and realise, Some people do what they do because that is their way,
Thank you robert bolin -
Did you skip grammar class?
Maybe you should replace your original with this one (even though you are not supposed to solicit comments)...
I need the most perfect poem for an up and coming wedding. Please help me. Also, please comment on my work and on the work of others that enter. It must be from the heart. Good luck.
p.s. weding is spelled wedding. FYI.
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