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♥ So What If I Sing Into My † Hairbrush † [[DP allowed!]]♥

ok people. this is my third contest. before i just basically told you to write me something dark and it could be about anything.....and i'm pretty much doing the same thing here =] well i've loved all my previous contests. i've gotten some pretty impressive entries. i expect the same this time. now if you've entered one of my contests before, you pretty much know the drill. i've got options, but you DON'T have to choose them.

[[.options.]]

option #1
you can write about heartbreak [ya i see a lot of it but it never gets old.] tell me about your pain. make it visual. make me feel what you're feeling.

option #2
hate. i don't normally get very many hate poems in my contests. well in the two i've had. so i would like to see some of these.

option #3
love. don't make it mushy. i hate mushy poems. i don't really like happy poems that much. if you keep the mush to a minimum, i will accept it. if it's like this:'omg i love him so much he's everything to me he completes me we never fight its an amazing relationship', you will be DQ'd.

option #4
Death. write about someone you love dying. or write about someone you hate dying. yes you can write about plotting someone's death. don't hold back, nothing can shock me. you can make it as gory and gruesome as you want, you won't be DQ'd for it. =]

option #5
Being Lonely. tell me about how everyone else seems to have someone there for them but you. tell me how you wish you could be like them or how you wish things were better for you. make me feel your pain.

option #6
Suicide,Cutting. this is pretty much self-explanatory. tell me about how you attempted suicide or cut yourself and why. tell me about your life. not so much that someone could end up stalking you with all the information, just....make it good.

option #7
DIRTY PRETTY. now, i don't really like writing dirty pretty myself. but i know for a fact a lot of people do. keep punctuation to a minimum, please. now i don't mind it, just keep it where i can read the poem and you're good to go.

option #8
use this picture as inspiration. i'm sorry i hadn't put this up earlier. hope you will forgive me =].someone asked if they could use it so it brought it to my attention. thank you. =] ok obviously, it shouldn't REALLY be a happy piece. but whatever your creative minds come up with, i'll take it!


now for the dreaded rules [not that many]


1. if you use an option, put it in your AN.along with '♥ dancing on your grave ♥' ok ya it sounds stupid but that's just so i know you read the rules =]

2. no erotica. if you have a pre-write that's got a VERY SLIGHT amount, that's ok, but i don't want a porno here.

3. ok, i know everyone hates the dreaded StIcKy CaPs. i'm not exactly a fan myself. if you enter a pre-write that happens to be in sticky caps, i won't murder you. but if you write a new poem, i have to insist you don't use it.

that's it for the rules

now of you go, loves!
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♥ jess ♥

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on July 14, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 360, Silver: 75, Bronze: 45, Honorable mention: 1 people
  • Final notes:
    wow. i mean wow. there are definitely a few that i would've loved to give awards but couldn't for lack of points!im soooo sorry loves!well i wish i could've given silver and bronze more points. it was EXTREMELY hard for me to choose which of my top three would get which spot. they kind of ranked the same to me!i'm still not sure if i picked the right spots but i'm confident that i chose the right for to win. thanks to all the rest and i'll be starting another contest shortly. hopefully you will enter again!
  • To judge this contest, you need to have at least as many finalists as you have rewards. You have 4 awards but only 3 finalists.

Contest Winners

  1. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3174342, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  2. Screams echo through the halls.
    by xSpirax 30 lines, 11 comments, on Jul 5 10:56 AM 2007. In Sad, Fantasy, Depression, Longing, Anger, Dark, Life, Lost in thought, Loss, Hate
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. I COULD KILL YOU, YOU DONT EVEN KNOW / I COULD KILL YOU FAST OR SLOW / TAKE MY TIME OR MAKE IT QUICK / YOUR LIFE TO ME IS NOT WORTH SHIT / I COULD KILL YOU, YOUR A SHEEP / I COULD KILL YOU,
    by drowning from within 38 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 9 1:18 PM 2007. In Dark
    Honorable mention
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [24]

1 - 24 of 24
  • by Failuretosociety 25 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 24 10:00 PM 2007. In Love, Life, Weird, Thoughts, Pain
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • You're a [pretty] little i m p e r f e c t i o n / with your [shattered] ego / / and those eyes that could leave / any boy in a tranc
    by juliex-exotic shine 56 lines, 30 comments, on Apr 29 1:25 PM 2007. In Contest
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • In the Midst of shade, / Where the Grass Retirement lies, / Where you lie in your hammock, / all alone, / With the squirrels, / and bunnies, / lie and think: / We're in the midst of Shade. /
    by Foofy 8 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 7 10:54 AM 2007. In Childrens, Dark, Nature, Other, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • In temptation I dig my shameless soulhood as I dig my rough tomb / I hollowed out my cruel past and found, since I was buried in a womb, / Purer than who I can be, / Filth filled tads of me, / Gathering my choked scre
    by LordSam 16 lines, 11 comments, on Jun 29 4:14 PM 2007
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • by BeautifulNitemare 33 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 11 12:49 PM 2007. In Dark, Fantasy, Love, Pain, Sad, Personal, Death, Depression, Longing, Sadness, Emo
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • For everything you've done, / For everything you are, / I hate you so much, / Go get hit by a car, / Step in front of a train, / Let it mus
    by Jessi-desensytized 27 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 10 4:13 AM 2007. In Hate, Pain, Rant, Death, Kill
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Anger is becoming of me, / darling it's the only thing I wear well. / Those lovely little lies you told were swell... / But they always come back to bite me in the ass. / You told me that Im beautiful, / although w
    by ThnxsForTheMmrs-x- 18 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 9 3:56 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by Synthetic-Nightmare 65 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 6 1:54 PM 2007. In suicide, death, dark, hopeless, agony, pain, sad, desparation, life, cutting, nightmares
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • you say dead romantic... / i say muderous bastard... / you say you never killed anyone... / i say you killed me... / razorblade kisses... / and... / poison romances... / you say it wasnt your fault...
    by StarCrossedOut 26 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 1 1:31 AM 2007. In Love, Thoughts, Sad, Pain, Other
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Toxins from Lieing seep out my mouth / And i know i've reached my limit / I'm giving it my all / To keep these lies in tact / But there see
    by Inverted-Hearts 32 lines, 12 comments, on Jul 9 11:59 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • C-C-Crash into me baby;; / Make it rough. / I crave your vodka kiss;; / give it to me. / Its tasteless.. / What happened to us, love? / P a
    by PaintedParisPassion 30 lines, 10 comments, on Jun 6 11:01 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • The meaning is in your own mind,
    not mine.
    by Coco Mara 38 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 4 1:54 PM 2006. In Fantasy, Dark, Angst
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • by LadysDragon 71 lines, 5 comments, on May 28 4:41 PM 2007. In Dark, Sad, Pain
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Linger there inside the head / Of one whose living, and whose dead. / Whisper softly and sweet to me / About the terrors that you see. / I
    by Rose Chloris 14 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 11 1:46 AM 2007. In Dark, Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Tis blood, not light the madman craves, / and of the blood derangement raves / out from the depths of mountain caves / and echoes ‘ore the desert waves / -tis he, not saints the savior saves / from opened tombs and
    by Intravenous Jesus 27 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 11 7:41 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • A thirst for revenge boils in her veins
    Being held back by a set of chains.
    by Hells New Leader 28 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 3 3:39 PM 2006. In Dark
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • The rain / It's the greatest thing that nature ever created / For some, it helps them go to sleep / For others it hides the tears that they
    by Deijinn 29 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 11 3:14 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • I feel the smooth knife carve its path through me, / Creating paths of blooded love. / Watch the blood seep from my heart, / Pumping its la
    by icequeen101 22 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 10 7:38 PM 2007. In Dark, Love, Other, Pain, Sad, Thoughts, Weird, emo, blood, cutting
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Look past the silver of the mirror to the dark backing
    Where actions are recorded including murderous attacking
    by Georges 31 lines, 19 comments, on Aug 27 5:16 PM 2005. In Spiritual, Dark, Hope
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • I feel most alone in the chambers of your heart, / The only things that passes by is blood that soon departs. / My entire world now circula
    by undertones 7 lines, 16 comments, on May 21 9:12 PM 2007. In Love, Pain, Personal, Thoughts
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • You are the ones we despise, / do you understand that simple fact. / You will get your pay...someday. / When you decide to grow up the things you did in your past they will follow you. / You see the
    by Roadkillchinscars 50 lines, 2 comments, on May 2 4:02 PM 2007
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite

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  • Aquamarine.
    July 9, 2007
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    i looove the pic hun its aweosme


  • On Frail Wings.
    July 9, 2007
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    thanks love i really like it i found it on photobucket!

  • i messed up

    hey this is my first contest and i thought i could enter more than one poem but it replaced preditor the one i know you liked so i put it back in sorry

  • LordSam
    July 9, 2007
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    ♥ dancing on your grave ♥
    option number 4


  • Inverted-Hearts
    July 9, 2007
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    can we use the picture for inspiration?

  • drowning from within
    July 10, 2007
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    whats up

    vampire tears you indicated you would be putting me in the finalists group but i accedently removed the poem ive put it back i hope i didnt mess it up so you cant put me in if i need to do somthing to fix the problem let me know what to do the poem was preditor

  • drowning from within
    July 12, 2007
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    whats up

    when the contest is over how do we check the results?

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