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MASSAGE ME!

For this contest, I want you to write about
giving or receiving a massage. Let me feel
your words and be able to imagine me there
with you. Tell me about what part of the body
you're working on, what styles and techniques
do you use to please your partner, client,
or even what you would like for yourself.

My back and neck are killing me right now.
Take me there!

Give me imagery and emotions here!



Here are the dreaded rules:



*No swearing*
*No chat lingo or sticky caps*
*No religion bashing*
*Rhyme or free verse, any form, any style
*Please check your grammar and spelling before submitting your write.*

*Spell Check is your friend, use it!*



First Place will receive a gorgeous gold trophy and 350 points.


Second Place will receive a stunning silver trophy and 250 points.


Third Place will receive a beautiful bronze trophy and 150 points.


Thanks a lot and I can 't wait to read your entries.
Good luck to you all!

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on July 23, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 350, Silver: 250, Bronze: 150
  • Final notes:
    I want to thank everybody that wrote for this contest! You all did a wonderful job and it was very difficult to judge this one. Your words were very soothing and relaxing to the mind and soul. I was really impressed with the way that some of you went step by step in describing the actions that you would do while massaging. All of the different areas that you pinpointed and your methods and techniques involved.

    It was truly a pleasure to read your words and I thank you again! Congratulations to the winners! Take care and I hope to see you all again in my next contest!

    Be well and stay inspired!



    Jeremy0826

Contest Winners

  1. Touch Me
    by faded dreams 34 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 20 8:47 AM 2007. In Adult
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Vigorous Heat, to Those Pressure Points*
    Pressure points, are what I seek / Hands rubbing vigorously, to increase the heat / Handsome man, full of life’s tension / As he enters the shop, his tight shoulders caught my attention / A tense smile, darkening h
    by PassionsPromise 38 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 10 10:21 PM 2007. In A massage
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3167550, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]

Entries [10]

1 - 10 of 10
  • Yes, That's The Spot
    Our bodies so magnificent / Built to withstand stress / But sometimes gets overloaded / Then a massage is downloaded / Start with my feet won't you please / It takes t
    by 2lullabyhaven 23 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 7 8:53 PM 2007. In Contest, My own style, Fantasy
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Do it all the time
    Oil
    Circular motion
    by Poetdontknowit 72 lines, 13 comments, on Sep 19 10:22 AM 2006. In Adult
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Sensual
    This is even more intimate than just making love / This is about the right touch to the right spot / Making you relax / And making you hot / I tell you to lie down / First taking off your top /
    by SOLS.Moonlight 43 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 8 1:17 AM 2007. In Spiritual, Personal
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Relax I Will Take My Time
    I will start at your lips yours on mine / Slowly I will move them down your spine / Relax I will take my time / I don't want to miss
    by onesugar 15 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 8 7:11 AM 2007. In Contest, sensual
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Massage(Hay(na)ku)
    Massage / Muscle manipulation / Magical mending maneuver
    by Billbard 2 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 8 10:33 AM 2007. In Healing
    • Commented on by judge.
  • "the massage"
    refreshing / as lavoris peppermint / -therapeutic- / as Lavender scents / palms of aloe vera / with Swiss secrets~ / -gently- / surfacing s l o w l y / stroking,
    by sublimewriter 59 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 10 11:23 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Place them on me
    dont let the previews fool you
    by NickelleteXninja 21 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 17 11:04 AM 2007. In Comfortable, relaxing
    • Commented on by judge.

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Comments

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  • SandraMVeinot
    July 7, 2007
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    man you don't ask much now do you!

    good luck with your contest!


  • Melodies
    July 7, 2007
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    A massage poem? WOW!! That's really inventive! Now here's a thought... Heck! I'll just enter your contest and tell you how to massage your neck!


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    July 11, 2007
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    man ...*taps foot*, i am watching this contest... and well, i do say, some good entries. i may need to borrow some of these people.. my back has been killing me..
    Tory


  • Riftkin gold member
    July 23, 2007
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    Thanks for the Gold dear, and these hands of mine does a full body massage as well.

  • PassionsPromise gold member
    July 23, 2007
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    Thank you for the bronze. I actually didnt plan on writing, lol nor did i plan on placing.I have been kind of off lately. COngrats to all winners and Hm. They were indeed all great entries.
    Thanks for hosting a unique contest.
    Victoria

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