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Okay, the main goal for this contest is to inspire me. I've had writers block lately and havent been kicking out anything good....so..inspire me...its pretty simple...the poem that inspires me the most...wins.

So, here are some Tips

I really enjoy dark poetry...i'm totally okay with the cutting and suicide poems...or the dark and introverted ones...anything dark..and i'm good with it....I also love Love poetry....so those two are defiantly the most welcome. So is anything else..but your more likely to win if you have either a dark poem...or a love poem (Or a mix of the two)


Here are some ideas to get you going

Use one or more of these quotes to base your poem on...or to include somewhere inside it (Some of these are from my poems)


1: Bleeding through cracks among the glass
2: Watch the blood seep from my heart
3: My first love slips away from my grasp
4: Wisk me away on your powerful wings
5: Tangled in a silver web of broken dreams
6: Drowning in the torment of the shadows requim
7: The devils laugher haunts my dreams
8: Standing in the rain
9: Peacefully broken
10: Lost to the world

Or pick one of these titles (You can also use these as a quote..just make a note of it in your author box;-))

1: Roses
2: Broken wings
3: Locked away
4: Your prisoner
5: Blood soaked smile
6: Mangled tears
7: Bloodied hearts
8: Rays of sunlight
9: Unmasking the lies
10: Dont hurt me again

You can also just write something..those are just options...

Now the rules...which i really hate...but...w/e...their arent many..i promise *Crosses heart*...and dont worry, we're almost done
1: If you DO use one of my quotes or titles, please make a note of it in your author notes
2: YoU CaN TyPE LykE tHIs BuTT i WOnT reAD iT
3: Have fun

Just a note:

Finally, I know right now this contest isnt worth a lot of points...I will be adding more as i earn more points..but i really just wanted to get a contest started (I need some inspiration)...But also want something new...I want to inspire YOU so you can inspire ME (Btw...your chances of winning also go up if you use one of my quotes and/or titles ;-)


So..thats it for now...i may make changes later, add more ideas or more quotes/titles...soo keep an eye out....If all 30 slots get filled up quick i'll probably extend the contest..and it wont close until I HAVE 30 entries. IF the mood really strikes me...i may turn this into a rounds contest (If i can come up with the points...) in which case i will take the top 15 contestants from the thirty.


Okay...its really it this time...

Ready
Set
WRITE!

OH! WAIT!! THERES A P.S!!

I'm now allowing Prewrites..but they have their own set of rules

1 they have to be dark
2 They have to be about love
3 You must use one of my quotes or titles in the prewrite
4 You must follow all other rules above as well

If you dont have one of my quotes..or its not written in the author box, i WILL DQ you (If its a prewrite) Prewrites will be judged much more strictly because the author has had more time to tweak it...also...I will let you know...if i get down to a debate between a prewrite winning, or a fresh one...the fresh one automatically gets it because part of this contest was seeing what i can INSPIRE you to do...i couldnt have inspired a pre write...

okay, thats all for now

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on July 20, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 50, Bronze: 40, Honorable mention: 4 people
  • Final notes:
    Okay. This was really tough to judge...(for some poems) Others, it was really easy to say..yeah..no. But a good...40% of these poems were absolutely AMAZING. So thanks to all of you who were one of the "Amazing" ones. (Its writers like you who keep contest holders like me from going completely insane) lol. Also, hardly ANY of the prewrites followed the rules...which has reinforced why I didnt allow them in the first place. But w/e...there still were some really really amazing ones. They just couldnt win because they didnt follow the rules....and lucky for just about all of you I was nice with my DQ button. A lot of people didnt (Who used one of my titles or quotes) put it in their comment box. But hey, what can I do? lol...Really guys, thanks for all the wonderful entries. This was probably my favorite contest Congrats to the winners and for those of you who didnt win...message me and i'll be able to tell you why. Or if you just want to know if you were one of the "Amazing" ones..i'll answer that too. Alright thanks again everyone!

Contest Winners

  1. A soul in limbo / Memories locked deep / The gates of hell have opened / It's fury has been unleashed / Drowning sinking further / A mask o
    by tawk 17 lines, 9 comments, on Jul 6 2:33 PM 2007. In Life, Personal, Thoughts, Pain
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. The days come and go, / Emotionless tears fall from my eyes, / The pain in my stomach is like a / Thousands knives, / Twist and turn, / sto
    by Foxydaze14 30 lines, 11 comments, on May 28 3:11 PM 2007. In dark, abuse, pain
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. I feel the smooth knife carve its path through me, / Creating paths of blooded love. / Watch the blood seep from my heart, / Pumping its la
    by icequeen101 22 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 10 7:38 PM 2007. In Dark, Love, Other, Pain, Sad, Thoughts, Weird, emo, blood, cutting
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3174340, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  5. Will you regret me? / Your dirty little secret / [[You promised / to never tell]] / You turn to me / With that sly look in your eyes / "Bab
    by JulietteArielle 61 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 6 4:54 PM 2007. In Pain, Weird, Dark, Love
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. This is kinda a play on a lullaby. every other stanza is part of the lullaby (starting with the second), while the others are part of the p
    by stop a bullet 51 lines, 11 comments, on Jul 9 8:45 PM 2007. In Sad
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  7. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2868150, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  8. by AliceinPoetryLand 25 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 6 7:41 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  9. I don't want to die / I tell myself, I know. / Push a button in my mind, Rewind.. / I analyze myself, / although... / A thought creeping se
    by natchstucco 19 lines, 17 comments, on Jul 8 10:50 AM 2007. In Dark, Suicide, Depressed, Hope
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [16]

1 - 16 of 16
  • by MagazinesFall 14 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 6 10:39 AM 2007. In Contest, Thoughts, Abstract, Short, Crap
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Rants and Lies; Honesty and Tears / Ears attended, / Yet heart refused, / Such is the fate, / Of your convincing lies, unmasked. / Liar! /
    by BeautifulFlame 40 lines, 26 comments, on Jun 23 9:10 PM 2008. In Pain, Personal, Depressed, Anger, Escape, Collaboration
    • Commented on by judge.
  • In the sky it hangs
    a full moon in full sight
    by SageSpice 28 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 5 8:31 PM 2004. In Other, Dark, Angst
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Though angels claim they are exempt / I saw it in their eyes—contempt / And dancing in that summer rain / they bled their song—a sweet refr
    by Intravenous Jesus 59 lines, 18 comments, on Jul 7 7:17 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • I've been hurt in my past. / By you. / It's not fun. / I thought you loved me. / You promised that you would never hurt me. / Well, I guess
    by Onyx Lina Rose 25 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 9 7:12 PM 2007. In life, love, pain, anger
    • Commented on by judge.
  • your a vampire / yet you dont just suck my blood / you take my love / you take my energy / you take my pride / and its your stupidity / i thought this was true / but that bite just might / not turn out right
    by DogTagz-TheJalapeno 26 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 14 11:03 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Cast yourself off the battlements of the nightmares Gothic castle's keep
    Falling down into the mysteries and the personal cinema of troubl
    by Georges 26 lines, 61 comments, on Apr 22 5:49 PM 2005. In Spiritual, Dark, Hope
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • The rain / It's the greatest thing that nature ever created / For some, it helps them go to sleep / For others it hides the tears that they
    by Deijinn 29 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 11 3:14 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Why'd you leave me? / We seemed so perfect for each other, / All the fun we had; the time we spent together, / But I guess it was all a lie
    by LeonXwabbist 38 lines, 16 comments, on Jun 7 12:52 PM 2007. In Emo, Sad, Love, Depressing
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite

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  • Deijinn
    July 14, 2007
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    ummmm...yeah

    I couldnt put it in the authors box, but my quote is the one about Standing in the rain *im new at this*


    • Deijinn
      July 14, 2007
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      so

      so I dont know how to 'Tweak" it..persay


  • tawk gold member
    July 20, 2007
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    Wow thanks for the Gold and the points. It means the world too me Congrats to all the winners and entries for making this such a great contest. And thanks most of all to you the host for hosting such a wonderful contest Thanks again