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Amaze Me

One winner. One entry per person.

I want:
1. only poems.
2. no rhymes at all.
3. no hatemail because I've DQd you.
4. no unnecessary punctuation.
5. imagery.
6. no cheesey romance.
7. something dark.
8. to be amazed.

Break any of these rules, and I'll also DQ you from any other contests I may set up in the future.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on July 9, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 370
  • Final notes:
    It was tough. There was one piece that stood out; it won.

Contest Winners

  1. Against the ties that bind me / I struggle / Chafing the skin off my wrists / Writhing in the ecstasy of pain / Blood, lubricating the skin
    by Dmonik 25 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 4 12:29 PM 2007
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. They stand under the willow tree / Looking out beneath the weeping branches / Listening for that fatal sound / Of the hunter to come kill them. / CRACK!! / He's coming closer to their hiding place / They see his s
    by Green Lady 12 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 4 1:28 PM 2007. In Dark, Love, Sad
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3126896, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  4. The eye of the dragon / whispers in the night, / making a call out to all beings. / It zaps into a swirl of greatness / hoping to persuade
    by kiwikrazi37 10 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 30 10:39 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. x.
    False realities
    by Vashman 43 lines, 14 comments, on Apr 5 6:38 AM 2007. In Pain, Sad, Dark, Death, Depression, Sadness, Lost love
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [13]

1 - 13 of 13
  • Grinning gargoyles gesticulate
    by Floorboards 5 lines, 16 comments, on Jun 15 5:56 AM 2007. In Society, Thoughts, Life, Abuse, Other
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • by Porcelain Princess 35 lines, 6 comments, on May 23 9:57 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • So slowly / I breathe / The song sings / It's dark tune / Whistling through my mind / As I can't seem to sleep / The black dove it cries / A horrible sorrow / And the end is coming / It's coming near / The
    by Eots 17 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 4 11:39 AM 2007. In Pain
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Running through the financial district / to the beat of Rock Lobster / or Love Shack, / I cant remeber which one, / I passed this giant sta
    by NotAMolly 22 lines, on Jul 4 12:07 PM 2007. In Society
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Don't you move a muscle / I like you where you are / Where I can see your nakedness / And frame you on my wall
    by ChrisE 3 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 23 6:13 PM 2007. In Love, Life, Contemporary
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • by Cool.Indifference 24 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 2 2:24 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Buried deep / In the darkest depths / Immersed in intervalled penumbra / Eclipsed from our concious mind / Exists fragments of ourselves /
    by Kaleidoscopeyes 8 lines, 9 comments, on Jul 3 5:11 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • On the hour when nothing's begun, / The stars won't show / She was looking for something, / All she did was point south / Kindly laughing at my every shrug and question / Listen to me / Don't talk anymore, just fo
    by Justin3 40 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 5 1:36 PM 2007. In Lyrics, Other, Contemporary
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • weeping willow sanctuary / no solace in this god-forsaken night / pale slate effigies crying in pools / torment to drive even demons into the / secret depths of the sea / no one to witness my last thread / of
    by porphyry 10 lines, on Jul 9 11:14 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.

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