Hey!
So, this is my sixth contest and I’m really excited to read all of your amazing poetry. I’ve decided to not allow prewrites this time around – I did allow them in my previous contests but now I want to try without it. However I will allow them in the few days before the contest closes.
Your poems can be about whatever you want. No options, no subjects no nothing - except it has to be fresh writes.
Rules:
- No chat language / StIcKy LAnGuAgE (If any of this is entered I will give a warning first, but then disqualify if poet does not edit).
- No stories
- Please try to keep it at a reasonable length (No longer than 100 lines)
- No bashing of other poets and their work
- Try to comment on other entries
I will try to comment on all entries, but I will not applause any work.
There is a gold, silver and bronze trophy to pick up, and I might also give out those green trophies.
Good luck!
Snow White Queen <3
So, this is my sixth contest and I’m really excited to read all of your amazing poetry. I’ve decided to not allow prewrites this time around – I did allow them in my previous contests but now I want to try without it. However I will allow them in the few days before the contest closes.
Your poems can be about whatever you want. No options, no subjects no nothing - except it has to be fresh writes.
Rules:
- No chat language / StIcKy LAnGuAgE (If any of this is entered I will give a warning first, but then disqualify if poet does not edit).
- No stories
- Please try to keep it at a reasonable length (No longer than 100 lines)
- No bashing of other poets and their work
- Try to comment on other entries
I will try to comment on all entries, but I will not applause any work.
There is a gold, silver and bronze trophy to pick up, and I might also give out those green trophies.
Good luck!
Snow White Queen <3
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 17, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 650, Silver: 250, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: As you can see there are a whole bunch of people in the finalists list, and it's because I had such a hard time deciding. I couldn't move any of those people out. Still I haven't given all of you trophies. 5 people have received a trophy and they are:
Gold: Untitled
Silver: Stop and listen, there's enjoyment there
Bronze: Angel Death Solutions
HM: Little Town, USA + The Walls Have Eyes
Congratulations to the winners!
Snow White Queen <3
Contest Winners
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soft docile winds / amber colored skies / blends in the horizon / seen only by my eyes / i stand still as / the winds speaks / a message inby jacbgd2 23 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 2 10:53 AM 2007. In Contest, My own style, Lost in thought, Message, Life
Silver trophy winner
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by amaranthine lover 19 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 9 9:38 PM 2007. In Dark, Contemporary, Fantasy, Abstract, Contest, noguest
Bronze trophy winner
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by MerelyMadness 33 lines, 10 comments, on Dec 13 11:07 AM 2008. In Life, Thoughts
Honorable mention
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I don't remember a sweeter moment in time / when life gives me a newly devolped lemon / it's more sour then I ever expected it to be / I doubt that I ever wanted to be a part of this / and when t• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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How many tears must I shed? / How many times must I be reduced to tears? / How many more hours must I slave with a pen and paper trying to find the perfect words for my pain? / I ask you, / Look at me and te• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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Tengo una sensación / En mi corazón / Que viene de la fuente de mi alma / Y no puedo quedarme calma / Algunas veces en nuestras vidas / Encontramos alguien / Y cuando estoy con ella / Todo está más bien• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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My feathers are gone, no hope to fly / So many tethers, so here I will cry / My wings lay useless, broken and torn / Never to be free, so a• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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I live in hell, / what can I do, / kill me please, / and I'll kiss you. / I hate my life, / since you died, / now there's no one by my side• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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Mind illusions played beneath / What's a corpse to me he seeks / A love forgotten but not lost / A memory stricken, highly costs / Raving,• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Gold trophy winner
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Broken jewelry litters cold floors / small fragments of glass and beads / souvenirs of youth show brittle life / framed with anxieties bitby Twins 4 me 14 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 2 11:07 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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You brushed me aside, / I have no where to hide / from this pain I feel inside. / You are so distant. / Do you know what thats like? / It seems you've scrapped me / like an old bike. / I feel so emptyby widesummer 25 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 2 3:10 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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Only you can make me cry. / only you have seen me smile. / Only you have seen my anger. / Only you have seen me happy. / Only you have kissby Deathangel911 13 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 2 3:44 PM 2007. In Love, Life, Lost in thought, My own style• Commented on by judge.
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I’m alone in this concrete jungle / No one to show me the way / Guide me through the fire / I fight for my home and family / Protect us theycry, keep us alive / He comes for us / I can't save them in this concreteby oncebittentwiceshy 47 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 2 12:38 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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I gave into temptation / And I’ll never hear the end of it. / I chose my words carefully / But you won’t let me live it down. / I made it easy to let go / But you needed it your way. / You knew everything about m• Commented on by judge.
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A world full of pain / Spinning out of control / Bigger then I am / Devouring me / But every day / I manage to plaster / A smile on my face / So no one can see / The pain deep inside / The pain hi• Commented on by judge.
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Verse 1 / Where have all the colors gone? / The world is black and white / Where have all the flowers gone? / There's no more source of lig• Commented on by judge.
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in sweltered heat / of thunders calling / i share such subtle / essence etched / in drop / of plaster pelting, / pummeled perfume / starched,by wolfspiritguide 17 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 3 1:40 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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Missing the days / days which were filled with goodness / They say no expiry date / in friendship / but when it comes to me / It has expired! / I still think about it / day and night / Even though I kno• Commented on by judge.
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As we stand / Here we are joined as one / Together is how we stand / For today I will marry my friend / We’ll gather around for the world t• Commented on by judge.
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Come to me give me your hand / Feel the genius flowing gland / Put forth will to be fulfilled / Throw away the dismal chill / The fate affair is not unfair / Sunny perception awaits your glaby hempmaster2006 38 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 8 4:11 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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A life time is all that i need, / To say say these words of wisdom. / Life was not given to me in a book, / Hard time's brought me life. / I have had so many changes, / but God keep me going on. / When i thought tby MzDimeDivia 20 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 12 11:22 PM 2007. In Life, Love, Lyrics, Pain, Personal, Sad, Hope, Thoughts• Commented on by judge.
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Time... / Is always chasing after us. / We try to stop / To smell the roses, / But it pushes us along. / Forever forward, / No going back.• Commented on by judge.
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The pain washes over me like a tidal wave / These bruises the worst of all that you gave / Those angry words you yelled have warped my mind / Against all the love I gave you turned blind / I triedby eunabelladonna 48 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 15 4:24 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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I cut myself everyday, / I started when you went away. / No one can help me here I stay, / I died the day you went away. / The blood I see is from my soul, / if you were here I'd be whole. / It's ha• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I cant forgive my self, for everything i did / Iknow deep inside you will never forgive / I let it happen, let him treat you bad / he was sby trace3grls 17 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 15 7:26 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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a rose is precious and so is she,
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I'm definately going to enter this one, but it'll take a day or so for me to think of something to enter!
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sounds great
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No stories!? Darn...
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hello dear i checked it out thanks for making it simple as ever here i hate contest with to many irritating instructions so i'll try to stir up a piece soon and hopefuly on time ~ lady enthralling ~
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mine is a prewrite but its one of my newest and one of my favorites
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