please,
please,
please,
no cliche.
no excessive punctuation.
just begin to write, and see where this takes you.
FREEVERSE IS A MUST.
"We must love not only occasionally, for a moment, but for ever. Everyone can love occasionally, even the wicked can."
or let the picture inspire... the man is Hitler if you did not recognize him.
again, FREEVERSE.
PS i'm not looking for dark writes, although everyone keeps entering them... *sigh* i'm looking for a WORLDY or ROMANTIC tone, thank you
please,
please,
no cliche.
no excessive punctuation.
just begin to write, and see where this takes you.
FREEVERSE IS A MUST.
"We must love not only occasionally, for a moment, but for ever. Everyone can love occasionally, even the wicked can."
or let the picture inspire... the man is Hitler if you did not recognize him.
again, FREEVERSE.
PS i'm not looking for dark writes, although everyone keeps entering them... *sigh* i'm looking for a WORLDY or ROMANTIC tone, thank you
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 21, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: the wait was worth it... the trophy winners were phenomenal. the reason i chose these poems were because they had the most creativity and originality.
on the other hand, there were a lot of pieces that had the same ideas, bad grammar, poor creativity. for general improvement i would suggest thinking outside of the box, taking time to develop your ideas, compare the world around you.
lots of "i'm a vampire, should i do this, i'm wicked but i can still love"
lots of "i love him, our love is eternal"
thanks, hope to see some of you at my next contest
much love, cassidy
Contest Winners
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His heart was a withering maze / a fruitless find for loves sake / cold as night on a winters moon / all emotions locked / in his heart shaby Angel With No Halo 35 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 18 11:59 PM 2007. In Love, Spiritual, Thoughts
Silver trophy winner
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Captive in your house / Your castle, your prison, / I sit on the staircase / And watch you. / You seem so lonely / So detached, but loving.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 3213894, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
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I sit n the edge of the bed, / fond memories dance in my head / as I watch the peace on your face / while you are safely tucked into dreamsby Lord Merlynn 45 lines, 43 comments, on May 31 9:26 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Oh God / you were dwelling in me as incandescence / before I dovetailed as a sinner twisting me / into the somberness / conclusively I acqu• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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As I watch the rain falling down. . . Wishing you were here to catch my tears from falling with the rain. The Love I thought could be. .. Hby DesiredTruthInYouth 2 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 15 1:52 AM 2007. In Pure confused LOVE• Commented on by judge.
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IS IT A DREAM OR A NIGHTMARE? / NO WAY TO TELL / WILL I WAKE TO MY HEAVENLY FANTASIES OR TO THE DEMONS THAT HAVE BEEN KNAWING OFF BITS OF Mby WillAlwaysLove 13 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 17 1:58 PM 2007
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It is dark / There is no room to breathe / Lord please help me / I’m dieing / please help me / I need your love right now / I know you love you love me / your in my heart / My cup runeth over / with joy hopeby elise0899 21 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 15 9:01 PM 2007. In Contest, Dark, Life, Love, Lyrics, Pain, Personal, Spiritual, Freewrite, Happiness• Commented on by judge.
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I ask you, where exactly is HELL? / For everyone there is a different answer. / If you ask me, It is here on Earth. / For me, there is no other answer. / Death is the final release, the sheer ecstasy, th• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Moonlight filters through the clouds / As acid rain falls down. / He holds a blade near her neck / And rests his hand on her waist. / Her a• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Laying on a cozy bed / She tastes blood on his lips / The man she craved to wed / Now lays beside her cold and dead / It was the only solut• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I hear that you are completely mad, drawn to darkness with loathing your flesh.
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Love is not defined / by gender or race / Its a feeling which can't be denied / You can't control what you are bound to face / Fate / The pby shtrdglassheart 34 lines, 12 comments, on Jul 16 3:01 AM 2007. In homosexuality, Thoughts, Humanity, My life, Dedication• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Anyone got a light?
Nicotine still in-cased within cigarette paperby Vampstress 31 lines, 13 comments, on Sep 14 1:26 AM 2005. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
To love one that is wicked is foolish, / so they say. However, I would like to / bring to the reader's attention that, / yes, evil people can love. Infact, / they are just as capable as we all are. / It may not seem• Commented on by judge.
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Look around at the people. / All of them have loved sometime / or another, whether it lasted or / not was never the point. The love / and compassion mattered most when / these two souls met. No matter how / much i• Commented on by judge.
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When i saw you there, right beside her bed, i wanted nothing but to have you dead,
the look in your eyes was so careless, because you didn't care.by Mrhollister 3 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 22 2:29 PM 2006. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
HAHA, im laughing now, your gone your dead, i dont miss you at all. i dont have one bit of guilt for what i did, i just dont care. i neverby Mrhollister 32 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 4 12:13 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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perhaps / it's selfish not to let you go / i clutch your trust to my chest / a mockery of nurturing / listen to your secrets with sealed lips / offer my comfort and compassion / my adoration / ifby killerharp 23 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 18 9:56 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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There stands the portal / Twixt here and somewhere / 'tween known and unknown / Faced by each in their own / Unique vanguards for life's mysteries. / Yet constants there seem / The feeling of loss / A waywa• Commented on by judge.
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The National Anthem
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Those whose souls are full of twisting serpents / lie at night trying to hear their own heartbeat / Only the fearful hollow / the slippery whissssper of reptilian bodies / echoes off the ribcage. / In love wiby Star Shine 34 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 19 2:44 PM 2007. In Sad, Society, Political, Sociopaths, Dictators• Commented on by judge.
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I know why your so cruel to them. / The girls who went out with you, / just to say they had a boyfriend. / I know why your sad. / Because you thought you had found your true love. / I know why your angry.• Commented on by judge.
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he flew down the path / formed by the countless souls / who found virtuity / a far star to reach for. / looking down, / he saw the decay en• Commented on by judge.
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He wears a mak in front of the camera / And when we walk down the street / Everybody thinks the know this man / But I know they don't see t• Commented on by judge.
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Something new was about to happen / At the Academy of Screams / The school in the monster world / That held only the scariest of things / N• Commented on by judge.
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Thanks a lot for sending this one out.
I have you bookmarked and will see what
I can come up with for you!
Jeremy0826
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ummm, if you allow pre-writes I have one that would fit nicely into this contest... If you want to pre-read it to be sure it fits, (because I know a lot of people say "Oh, I have the PERFECT prewrite..." ) message me and I would love to give you the link.
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i will open pre-writes right now
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That is an excellant quote, and very true. I hope you get a good response.
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wow, that's an amazingly thought-provoking picture.
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awe thanks for putting up this contest if you check out my page almost all my poems are about love and evil and wickedness in some way shape or form i'm a freak who fell in love wow what a oxymoron anyhow thanks for the contest
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The Poems I entered fit into this category in my opinion....but in a more strange or unique way. I LOVE this quote and I love to write about evil people who can really love. Its as if there is a misunderstanding that anyone who does bad, always does bad, and does not love at all! thanks!
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ALSO, i realized I entered many, I am sorry for that. But I love the category of this contest.
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Thanks for your comment on my poem. "Got a light". Thought this was a little something different to show how love can start in just one moment. If you don't think it fits that's ok you can remove it but I thought it would be something you may like for your contest on how even the most obscure situations can be romantic.
Love,
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I just wanted to thank you for the Silver/ second place win. I am always exstatic when I get a new placing trophy. Great contest idea.. I am glad it gave me a chance to think outside the box and write something from a slightly different point of view(Kudos to you for that) I wish they still let us give out applause for contests.. lol. Thanks again and hope to see ya around again soon
~Krys~
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no problem, you really deserved it
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