hi and welcome to my tenth contest
i am allowing prewritten poems in this
as long as they come under personal and thoughts
also would like your inner thoughts
cant wait to start reading them
only thing i dont want are erotic and sticky caps as they do my head in
good luck to all that enter and wish you the best of luck to everyone
i will also except spiritual thoughts
in this contest
much love
M
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 22, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 10 people
- Final notes: hi and thank you to everyone that entered and there was so many good poems it was brill holding this also i had to add ten hon mentions as it was that hard well done to everyone who got a place in the top thirteen
Contest Winners
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In a world where looks dominate our thoughts,
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Said before in the same idea / and whatnot I believed it too / Repeated words, screaming happy vengeance / Whispers shrivel and eruptions cby Chelsea Void 19 lines, 10 comments, on Jun 19 4:06 PM 2007. In Angst, Life, Love, Other, Thoughts, Pain, Weird, Personal
Silver trophy winner
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My pen is bleeding on the paper,
As love is bleeding in my heart.by abeautifuldisaster 33 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 17 7:42 AM 2007. In Personal, Love
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As I lay in the in the dark, / thoughts escape my mind and shatter my heart, / when I think about what could have been, / and what I can acby Liveloveperforming 8 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 22 6:09 AM 2007. In Life, Thoughts, Society, Personal Honorable mention
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I like to sit and cry sometimes / There is something delightfully self-indulgent / About self-pity and self-disgust / Resulting in some kind of twisted smugness / That you know just how awful your life is / Or howby chugglepuff 42 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 13 2:15 PM 2007. In Humor, Sad, Sadness, Emo, Teen issues, Teenage thinking, Angst Honorable mention
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He Watches Me form the cliffsby Amera 21 lines, 33 comments, on May 4 8:03 AM 2007. In Spiritual, Thoughts, Swap Quatrain Honorable mention
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Gold trophy winner
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Life is just a moment in time.
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I am bleeding / For the sake of happiness. / For the sake of happiness / I am leading, / Within my word an abandoned twinkle gives / The meaning. / The meaning of my world within that meaning. / I will neverby LordSam 22 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 6 1:46 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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as i turned the corner of my mind
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[Why is it that those who say / they'll be there no matter what / are the first ones to leave?] / "It is easier to forgive an enemy / than to forgive a friend" / a wise man once said / Becauseby oh willoughby 46 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 18 11:11 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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No matter how many drinks you consume
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I'm scared to say, / Just how I feel, / I am depressed, / Fearing to reveal. / Thoughts are celled, / Incarcerated in shame, / I can't beliby Jessi-desensytized 79 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 24 10:34 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Tell me, did I disappoint you today; / Living life, going my way? / Did I crush any more of your dreams last night; / When you brought me t• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Hit me / Hurt me / Kill me / Cut me / Make me hurt / Make me bleed / Cut me deep / End my pain / Wake me up / To do it again / Nothing left / Make me feel / Leave me sane / Help me die / Heaven’s d• Viewed by judge.
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Do you know how bad it hurts? / to not be trusted / by mom or dad / When you never did a wrong? / I don't care anymore, / I pick up the knife, / The metals cold against my wrist, / I feel the pain, / It's• Viewed by judge.
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It is down to the last minute until / your soldier says goodbye / He picks up his belongings and he's / walking out that door / If only we had one more day to / share our time once more / One last hug and one laby mommajackson 23 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 16 5:29 PM 2007. In Personal• Viewed by judge.
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Like a cool breeze / I sweep over your / dying hot embers. / Sparks fly, heating / up the whirling / centre of my soul, / burning you ignite, / and spring to life. / Yet we're stuck in limbo, / a mass of notby dystopiandream 13 lines, on Jun 26 9:49 AM 2007. In Love, Personal, Sad, Life, Thoughts, Spiritual, Pain, My own style, My life, Abstract• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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you have to read it first D:by sand drifter 13 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 12 1:07 AM 2006. In Contemporary• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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My friends say I tell them what I think / Not how I feel / That is locked inside a puzzle within a maze / I can run all day / And not get to the end / Or back out again / And I mapped the route. / Of course, I cby Star Shine 30 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 13 3:19 PM 2007• Viewed by judge.
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There is only peace... / there is only tranquility... / there is only joy... / There is only serenity... / there is only love... / there is only truth... / There is only hope... / there is only faithby xXmiranda-maeXx 21 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 7 2:08 PM 2007. In Fantasy, Hope, Life, Love, Lyrics, Pain, Other, Personal, Thoughts, Lost in thought• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The world sits silenced
suppressing each feeling without thoughtby My Darkness 18 lines, 16 comments, on Mar 22 11:01 PM 2004. In Other• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Whoever first said life is unfair,
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I think it's about time / For me to pack up / And leave everyone here again / Because I'm falling apart / And I might be falling in / Good thing there's no one around to see this / I reached for my jacket in• Viewed by judge.
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Its all my fault don’t take blame / I push people into the flames / I’m the beast I eat at your soul / Pull you in make you feel like a fool / You fall for the seductive eyes / Touch the skin oh so soft / I’m anby angel eyes 09 29 lines, on Jul 16 8:21 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I am nothing but the wind voicing your tale
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Hope this isn't too long and ponderous . . . when I read it back to myself, or at poetry readings, I find that it either dies on the vine o• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by vivela 114 lines, 88 comments, on Feb 11 9:20 AM 2007. In Contemporary• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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hey / while transacting your material to me / while starting your secret articles towards me / while maneuvering to my nature / you modulat• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Prayer for the forgotten / screaming at the starless night / 'here i am Lord!' but you do not call / all i have left is my service / there is nowhere left to fall / how far have I drifted? / In• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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every waking hour / every lifeless day / i try to get off the ground / but to this world i am chained / you hold my soul in your hands / i don't know who or what you are / yet you holby Tyreta21 31 lines, on Jun 23 5:01 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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We the people: 1 / That used to mean something. In old old times, we went to war with Germany . They didn’t attack us, but they needed to be stopped . Also Japan hit us at Pearl Harbor. / One of the first things the• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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My anger swells / And in time I fell / Overtaking is its presence / Bleeding through me as it stretches / Diseased as it spreads / The blacby constance64 37 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 3 12:42 PM 2007. In Dark, Sad, Thoughts, Pain, Angst, My own style, My life, Lost in thought, Personal.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I. / Catalyst. / I’m the catalyst- / For this pain that I’m feeling, / This love that is killing: / Me. / II. / Someone Screams Suicide. / A noose to the neck, a knife to the wrist, a bulle• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I feel like I'm on the edge / Looking down / To find I'm looking up / At something much taller than me / Certainly unsure / About much of everything / Yet entirely positive / Enough to make a choice /by urban cowboy 28 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 6 6:14 PM 2007. In Lost in thought, Depressed, Hi, How are you?• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The legions of the spirit
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Radiating / Even in the dark / Even in my thoughts / Not far / Radiating / Your still there / Blocking everything / Glowing like the sun it• Viewed by judge.
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Comments
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wouldn't all poems be our inner thoughts? Because we had to think about them and toss them over until they spill out over the page like tipping over a glass of water
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Thanks for the Honorable mention it means so much too me. Thanks for hosting such a heartfelt contest
Thanks again and have a great day
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Congrats to all winners and other entrants.Thanks for a great inspirational contest.
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Very honoured came 3rd out of 70+ writes!
Thanks for the Bronze.
Well done to the others!
Best as always! x
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