OK This is my first contest and i'm very excited about it
I really like dark poetry so I'm asking for your basic sad,pain,cutting,suicide,destruction poems
I can never get enough of it so give me all your sorrows
enter as many times as you like!
Things I like to see
-Rhyme
-Rhythm
and meaning
I like a good flow!
prewrites are allowed
Rules
1. no sticky caps
2. You must comment one
of my poems and
(I will comment all entries)
3. must be original
4. keep curse words to a minimum
and That is all!
I really like dark poetry so I'm asking for your basic sad,pain,cutting,suicide,destruction poems
I can never get enough of it so give me all your sorrows
enter as many times as you like!
Things I like to see
-Rhyme
-Rhythm
and meaning
I like a good flow!
prewrites are allowed
Rules
1. no sticky caps
2. You must comment one
of my poems and
(I will comment all entries)
3. must be original
4. keep curse words to a minimum
and That is all!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 31, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 50, Bronze: 10
- Final notes: Ok so this contest was insane so many entries my head was screaming and my hands acking but i managed to read all of your amazing work I must say i was quite amazed by some of the things that were put together here unfornatly i wasn't able to comment every poem because it was much to difficult I want to thank you all for your comments and support on my poetry it really meant alot to me so thank you all very much and congrats to my winners!
Contest Winners
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 2107189, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
-
Is life strife rife where favoured few waste privileges rare, compared to most who struggle through misfortunes most unfair ?
by Jonathan ROBIN 52 lines, 587 comments, on Mar 17 5:35 AM 2005. In Sad, Society, Life, Thoughts, Pain, Dark, Depression, Sadness, Depressed, Suicide
Silver trophy winner
• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 2851730, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
-
For everything you did to me, karma will come and eat you. / Through me, karma will work, and you will get what everyone gets from me. / Li• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Entries [154]
-
When I sit in the rain I feel no pain. / It washes my tears away... / And yet I bleed so endlessly / A lifless color pours from me.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
-
Clouds of darkness / World of hate / A shadow late to wake / I open my eyes... / &nb• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
-
• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
-
leave me in the gutter / with the clutter / of the streets / leave me with the broken / the defiled / the diseased / leave me with your heaby Luna Shadow Cat 14 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 29 12:19 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
-
Every Day go's on 4 ever it seems like it will never end / why did god or who ever create me y couldn't they have made me some one als / i hate the way i look the way i laugh the way i talk i hate my self / all thby hells-angel13 6 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 29 12:25 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
-
by MistressAkasha 35 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 13 8:19 AM 2007. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
-
my lil sister jump rope. / just enough length. / just thick enough. / how can such a pretty child toy be capable of commiting something so ugly? / but it can, and its useful. / i steal it from her bedroom. /• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
-
A laugh, A smile. / I haven't seen you in a while. / Once sunny, once bright. / Now you've became as black as night. / Full of joy, full of hope. / Who would know thats the way your body would float.by MysticalxMari 37 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 29 12:28 AM 2007. In Pain, sad, personal, dark, suicide, tears, poems• Commented on by judge.
-
by Fim Fivver 49 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 25 8:08 PM 2007. In Dark, Weird, Adult, Contemporary, Death, My own style, Abstract, Freewrite, Beat• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
-
The pain is the only thing I can really feel, / the only reasurance this nightmare is real... / the ache is all that really fits, / I have taken to many horrible hits.... / I dream of clear wrist when I slee• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
-
I have a feeling , which keeps me reeling / Applications pending , all waiting to become / Not realising what is in the waiting / Becoming was left to the chatter / when small minds discussed how to batter / ruby raouldaggermark 16 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 27 2:39 AM 2007. In Abstract, Spiritual, Freewrite, Humanity, Dark, Self• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
-
how else do they / smite the fleeting / content alluring / street smiling / craft failing / truck speeding / tyres screeching / children playing / mothers praying / unrest slayingby raouldaggermark 28 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 27 3:20 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
-
There have been countless times / That I have gone insane / Using my blade / To extend the pain / I have sinned many times / And many timesby Asylaarix 53 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 25 3:07 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
-
My only refuge, / My sanction of lies. / Now my prison, / In which I'm promised to die. / "Convince me, / To stop before it's too late. / Convince me, / It's not my destined fate..." / Flourescent li• Commented on by judge.
-
Darling;; / Don’t you realize that I don’t like it / When I see the blood stains on your sleeves? / Baby, I can’t remember the last time you smiled, / (You know, like you used to when wby SarahEatsAirplane 70 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 27 10:12 PM 2007. In Angst, Sad, Pain, Dark, Life, Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
-
by Rainy Days 15 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 29 1:50 AM 2007. In Dark, Pain, Sad, Not Personal, Suicide• Commented on by judge.
-
A song that i don't care to explain except in person.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
-
A depression that flickers from light to dark,
like a tunnel on a speeding train, a period of dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
-
by Logans-Mommy 24 lines, 10 comments, on Mar 23 9:35 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
-
My life was over I could feel• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
-
Edged words rumble on over the one to blame / Having my soul left for the unknown slain / An unforgiving lord drowned me into infestation / Will I be stuck in the truth everlasting evasion? / Will I know the vivid yaby LordSam 30 lines, 15 comments, on May 27 1:06 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
-
What is this feeling do sudden and new. / Where did these marks come from and this sense of death? / Where did it all go? / The laughter,the smiles,now all twisted with lies. / Im sure i want to die tonight. / /• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
I never thought i'd die alone / I laugh the loudest who'dve known. / False dreams are caught up / in a world now settling on reality. / /by without the night 37 lines, 3 comments, on May 9 12:36 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
As I hold the blade in my hands
I think of why I'm doing thisby Big Hearted one 18 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 8 9:56 AM 2006. In Dark• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
i bleed less with every breath
watch the ceiling turn to black• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by Saosin 15 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 24 4:27 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
I stood above your grave alone The hope that held me strong no longer reigned.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
A chill runs down my spine / My heart is shattered in shards / Oh,dear angel of mine / Why have you told me lies? / You call my name slowly again / And I feel my blood cold / I want you to feel my pain / Yo• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
The shadows slowly have vanished / The walls are covered in blood / I'm broken,hurt and now banished / From this world I never understood. / Tears with blood fall on the floor / I feel like I'm about to fall• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
I once was a small child forgotten in a room
there was never nowhere to go, Mom had left us on our ownby whitecities 23 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 9 10:11 AM 2007. In life• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I'm angry right now, wouldn't you be? / But I still want you to know what you mean to me, / I know you won't read this, now that you're dea• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
It's the fastlane, / We've all got the ticket / And we're using it up fast, / And the faster we go, / The harder we'll crash. / Let's drag that razor / Right over our skin, / Lets build momentum / Befor• Viewed by judge.
-
this is who we are / future past present / imperfection / a car crash / damn you look pretty burning / i'd try to catch you / but it's not worth my time. / abstraction, / lovely shards of hate and greed / t• Viewed by judge.
-
Guilty / Why'd I try / It made things harder / More pain to hide / It was stupidity / Trying to take my own life / Numb / Gave the razor a whirl / The pressure on my skin / The cut / The blood / Iby ShadowsOfControl 53 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 1 1:08 AM 2007. In Personal, Life, Thoughts, Dark, Pain, Contro, Depression, Sadness, Self Harm Suicide• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
What's happening to me / Why is there so many people surrounding me / What has my life come to / I've always said that you learn from your mistakes / But this time it's different / This time I've made one to maby The Hardest Goodbye 42 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 6 2:32 PM 2007. In sad, life, pain, society, other• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
Don't know what to do / or even what to say / mind's like a raging thunderstorm / getting worse with every day / Built a wall around my soul / to keep my anger sealed up tight /by tarrat0421 20 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 5 4:29 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
I tighten up my arm and then i squeeze to make a fist
And I stick it to my skin and cut deeply in my wristby Shannon62875 63 lines, 10 comments, on Aug 2 11:01 PM 2006. In Dark• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Staring through the black of night, / Hoping for a peaceful fight. / The blind are seeing everything, / The hellish light that we will bring. / So while i wait for Satan's call, / I sit here dead, in Heaveby Lost Memory 5 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 16 10:26 PM 2007. In Dark• Commented on by judge.
-
Standing in the dark
Alone• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Those words he spoke / Those words I heard / Cut deep into my skin / Into my soul,into my heart / Hurting me with with every vengence in itby lexie like woah 24 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 19 4:14 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
In this life an optimistic young man sleeps in the dirt.by Time is real 0 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 18 6:02 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
A razor sits beside me
beckoning my nameby XsweetpeaX26 25 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 13 8:42 PM 2004. In Dark• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I hate this world
And what you've begun• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I wish I were pretty
I wish I were thinby Forlorn Dreams 19 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 10 10:31 PM 2006. In Sad• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
it was a dark
and stormy night• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
O incestuous beast thou eats my flesh. / A pestilence immune / That sleeps with snakes. / I have seen the lifeless eyes of the human farmer and was unscathed. / Yet your eyes are mine own. / A porthby nerd42189 21 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 20 7:02 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
I have walked over mountains and through valleys. / Swam rivers and oceans and yet i trek. / I walk with scabs and scars, / ney wounds for they have not healed / they bleed and dont let me dream. / For I have f• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
Dreaded pain and agony / Why have you forsaken me. / Blessed are those that call you their friend. / I want my tears to flood the world / My grief to become nightmares / My pain to shatter hope. / I waby nerd42189 15 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 20 8:55 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
Staring at these reddened walls, / Covered in my blood. / Floating through these darkend halls, / I hear another thud. / I see you standing• Viewed by judge.
Add a comment
Comments
1 - 10 of 10
-
i would love to win a contest but this isnt my style sorry!!!!!!!=(
-
Can we enter more than one poem?
-
-
Yes enter as many as you like
-
-
Wow!!!! 158 entries!!!! That;s alot especially for a first contest!!!! I honestly do not envy you having to judge this! Good luck!!!!
-
Actually now it's 180 and i'm freaking out holy shit but I'll do it
-
i have one called scars
hey my poem scars would match in this catagory perfectly -
Hey, I love dark poetry, It makes you think, but I like having some uplifting poetry, just so i don't stay down
-
who won???
-
Thanks
wow, out of all these entries and I ranked fourth? thats awesome. I'm so glad you liked my piece. Maybe I didn't get a trophy or honorable mention, but knowing how many entries there were and that I placed in the top 6 is pretty amazing. Thank you so much!
-
Holy Crap - I can't believe you actually managed to read all the poems to judge this. Congradulations. I think YOU deserve a trophy for that!
Adding your comment:
1 - 10 of 10
