***UPDATE....I'm holding the contest into August....more enteries...higher points....this time no PREWRITES (except the ones that are already enter of course)
I'm Dealling with some home issues so I'll be able to check out the poems later on this month....I want to be able to really read all the poems....
Thanks for the consideration.
I’m holding another contest…Called The Cries of Society
So I decided to hold the same type of contest…but a more light hearted view of gruesome issue’s in society today.
So what I’m looking for are clever and witty writes that still are mature and educated writes
I would love writes that are full of imagery and metaphors
Make me laugh…but stump me…But still teach me something
Sometimes we have to laugh out our selves and society
Same rules apply here as it does is the other contest
So does the topics….
But this time you are allowed to make pop culture references….make a stab at celebrities
[Since I’m lazy here is the link]
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2356118
At this time I'm allowing prewrites...
But you enter as much as you want
Happy Writing
I'm Dealling with some home issues so I'll be able to check out the poems later on this month....I want to be able to really read all the poems....
Thanks for the consideration.
I’m holding another contest…Called The Cries of Society
So I decided to hold the same type of contest…but a more light hearted view of gruesome issue’s in society today.
So what I’m looking for are clever and witty writes that still are mature and educated writes
I would love writes that are full of imagery and metaphors
Make me laugh…but stump me…But still teach me something
Sometimes we have to laugh out our selves and society
Same rules apply here as it does is the other contest
So does the topics….
But this time you are allowed to make pop culture references….make a stab at celebrities
[Since I’m lazy here is the link]
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2356118
At this time I'm allowing prewrites...
But you enter as much as you want
Happy Writing
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on August 2, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 150, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 13 people
- Final notes: I'm so sorry it took me so long to judge the contest...I was going thru some things in my life that I needed to push back the date.
I reall did enjoy this contest and I think everything that was said and given was witty but also made a point! If I could I would reward everyone....everyone did a great job....
Thank you again for being patience with me and entering my contest...I hope to read more of you great poets work...
Bloved
Contest Winners
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Blood sheds red, / It all looks the same, / [Unless you're color-blind.] / And Heaven knows the wound / Hurts equal. / Dresses and ties Loo• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Look at how these bones are laid.
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Pale wrists glazed / Like the donut she ate / Scratched the surface of / The pavement / Yeah, she ate it / Lack of nutrition / She couldnt tame it / Cut up her arm / Or cut up a steak / She saw the harmby OhSnap 41 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 17 4:21 PM 2007. In Society, Bulimia, Anorexia, Perfection, love, life, dark, pain, other
Honorable mention
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The comets are lined up
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Accessories
Faded Khaki cargo shortsby Crook Oneil 21 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 15 7:07 PM 2007. In Humor, Life, Contemporary, Personal Honorable mention
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This is not my true opinion of people just a clever little rhyme to make you laugh.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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The bodies, / mingling in death counts reaching / way too many. / Wars over land and / sacrificing lives for territory / That's been crosse• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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by Barry Hodges 28 lines, 31 comments, on Jun 28 1:28 PM 2007. In Tragedy, Adult, Swedish holidays, Life, Love, Pain, Sad Honorable mention
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- Error: Unable to find finalist item 2484281, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Entries [28]
1 - 28 of 28
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when we go to jail / we get really cool names / like convict, and unsafe, and criminal / When we go to jail / we'll never find a job again / everyone shunns us from this world / When we go to jail / we• Commented on by judge.
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I'm bum on the street, / I can't afford eat, / Taking scraps out a garbage heep. / Looking all bummy. / Feeling crummy. / I sleep in bus shelters, / Isn't it funny? / I'm a buisness freak, / With the buisby ScArLeM 28 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 28 2:07 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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I was shopping in my local store
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Three levels and Strip malls. / [We can't make it on our own.] / Fashion by the decade, / We're turning into a / Too-many choices nation. /by They Say Shannon 69 lines, 10 comments, on Jun 21 3:08 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Bob and Weave / Bob and Weave / Like the stealth boxer / working it out alone / in a moonlit corner of the gym / That is what your changing hairstyle makes me think of / One day cropped sh• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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She’ll never make a speaker, of this we have no doubt. / She always stands there laughing then her false teeth fall out. / How can she go on talking, as though we’re unaware, / that her words are really mumbled, an• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The invitations had all been sent out
All the garden gnomes were ready to play,<by Poetdontknowit 26 lines, 30 comments, on Sep 25 10:25 AM 2006. In Childrens• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Refugees near church’s doors all perish / but all eyes turn away as it’s bells toll / made of gold that it’s holy men cherish / from offerings the working class once stole / The beggars came to drag away the deadby Intravenous Jesus 17 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 3 10:04 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Going Native / It started with the way I spoke / So subtle it’s not quite there / A joke, a laugh, and a smile / To forget about my blonde hair. / carrying myself without wonder / walking the streets wit• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Last night a criminal broke into a home / stole the tv, dvd and for fun a blue comb. / He dove out a window to escape and he ran / fell onby Tamera 14 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 17 11:02 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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it was the aliens who remembered tose savages, of ape like walk
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We are all brothers to each other and should not betray between each other just by self contentment or selfishness. We are bond to live peacefully together...• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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hmm i just wrote something that i could have entered for here
maybe i'll try something else if creativity will come to me
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Let me have the link...I'm gonna allow prewrites if this contest is movingslow...But if I really like your write...I will let you slide..Ok?
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Ahh - great idea to hold both these contests, I hope you enjoyed both of them and found many wonderful entries! x take care x
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