Have you ever had a forbidden love, but you despratly made it work? well this is what I want from you today. Also i have another contest, that only one person has entered, if you like the murder dolls please go and visit my page and click on that contest, it would be greatly appriciated.
Thanks.
Rules---
[*]no erotica
[*]spelling count
[*]nothing less than 25 line or more than 52 lines
[*]you can enter more than once
[*]prewrites allowed
[*]spell check don't bite but I do =P jk
[*]I don't want anything full of love like [ex. he and me was perfect, we walked hand in hand we seen each other every day] that isn't what I asked for.
[*]don't follow these rules I will DQ you, no warning.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 17, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 75, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: well I want to thank every one of you who entered this contest, i didnt expect to get this many entries, i thought all of them was exceptionally well, i wish i could give a trophy to all, but sadly i dont have that power, i want to thank Restless Romantic for their entry, it was what i was looking for and if you entered this contest i would like for you to go and read their poem [[ http://allpoetry.com/poem/3129732 ]] it is a good job, well i want to thank everyone again, for entering and i wish everyone good luck in all their fromer/participating contest.
Thanks,
beautifuldisasterxx
Contest Winners
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the illegal relationship....by DrownInImperfection 18 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 28 7:25 PM 2007. In Personal, Love, Longing
Gold trophy winner
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As you gently touch my face / our lips they tenderly meet. / Your hands they do caress me / yet our love is incomplete. / We cannot stay to• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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lovely weather we're having / oh, and by the way... / i'm not allowed to see you, / it's his fault anyway. / and i will never listen. / the words we say aren't right anymore, / but they'll have to do for now. /by melancholy melody 29 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 16 1:24 PM 2007. In Life, Love, Pain, Sad, Thoughts
Honorable mention
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A dictator you want to avoid at all costs...by AutumnsFlame 21 lines, 13 comments, on Apr 22 12:50 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Love my frozen skin
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A simple "KISS" / A loving "TOUCH". / These are the things / That mean so much. / To hold you close / On long cold nights. / Being next to• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Silver trophy winner
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I can hear you cry, / Even when your so far from me. / I can feel your pain / No matter how far you are. / I wish to go back, / No matter how far i go. / I lied to you, / and for that im sorrby Midnite Writer 20 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 28 10:42 AM 2007. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Run with me.
Run free of ropes.by Serene Rose 44 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 5 11:52 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I'd do anything for you
anything to make you happy.by Serene Rose 34 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 25 9:19 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Dawn’s almost near,
My lover comes near.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
So long since I've felt
the flutter, this chill down my• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
the more i cry out for your love
the less that you display• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I am declaring this as a state of emergency / I am begging you for clemency / Since I was acting out of my dependency / A love like mine occurs once in a blue moon / The moment I met him was the day I swoonedby rerouni66 20 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 3 4:36 PM 2007. In Angst, Life, Love, Sad, Society, Thoughts• Commented on by judge.
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the cries keep running through my head, / the ring of what they said, / they told me no, / they told me never again, / but i didnt listen to the words they left on my bed, / i followeby evildarkprincess 26 lines, on Jul 3 11:48 PM 2007. In forbbiden love• Commented on by judge.
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All I feel is your Love
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Where are the friendly people / Where do you go to / Where are we going / Where did we venture from / Where is the slow-setting sun / Where• Commented on by judge.
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Before action / I felt your swiftness take / and set like a clutch / Falling into gear / I felt your back wheels squirm / the acrid scent o• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The Guy: to a friend
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My eyes witnessed an astounding sight / The freshness of dew, the sweetness of pine / The sapphire creek, the misty peak / The smiling roseby Chweetkavi 39 lines, 14 comments, on Jul 4 4:06 AM 2007. In Other• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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"This isn't what you think", / tumbled from my mouth. / My heart began to sink, / heading straight down south. / His eyes like red hot coals / burning through my skin. / Knowing i'd been told / Not to do• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You know that this shouldn't happen
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Out of all of the women / That I've ever met. / On a scale of 1-10 / An eleven you get! / A heart made of gold / With a mind that delights.• Commented on by judge.
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I am forbidden to love you, / because your heart is an inaccessible territory. / It is easier for me to fly to the moon, / than to explore• Commented on by judge.
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Mind illusions played beneath / What's a corpse to me he seeks / A love forgotten but not lost / A memory stricken, highly costs / Raving,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Age is just a number, / That’s all it is to me. / Two years seems like nothing, / But that’s all that he can see. / How can something so perfect, / Be ruined so quick? / Or is age just an excuse, / Because• Commented on by judge.
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Come with me / And we shall go / To a place / So I can show. / That my love / for you is true / But first this / is what we'll do, / Thankby kennethlaney 38 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 16 2:44 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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You are there, and I am here, / In a different world, / You a hardened criminal, / And I a mere school girl, / Against all odds, / We came together, / Against all odds, / We'll be forever, / It may sound straby Ilma 34 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 28 2:43 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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He moved like no other. / He spoke so unique. / He had love in his heart. / His smile set him apart from all. / He helped her not to fall. / She was confused. / She was shy. / She thought sheby Beautifuly Broken15 16 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 27 4:13 PM 2007. In Love, Suicide, Depression, Sadness, Death• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I'm not supposed to love you / I wish I didn't care / You are everytihng I think about / Even when you're not there / I shouldn't love you / But I want to / I just can't turn away / We've lasted this longby ItsalltheSame68 25 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 16 8:45 PM 2007. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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I see you there / so close to me / i see her / the one that makes you happy / your arms around her / you caress her cheek / as you look into her eyes / i want to be her /by hogwarts-hottie09 53 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 16 10:06 PM 2007. In Desire/ forbidden love• Commented on by judge.
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My deadly rose
You are young
You are insecure• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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i tried to enter one of my prewrites, but when i clicked on the enter button, it took me to a whole new page with just a choice of which of my poems to enter, but then i could do nothing after that.
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