This contest will be on the POSITIVE aspect of how
eliminating denial brought about your freedom. Finally allowing you to see what was true and really there instead of what you wished or hoped was there.
No prewrites
20 line limit
any style
Next contest will be about how your denial trapped
you in your situation, should you wish to wait for
that one. (The negative side of denial)
Have fun but hurt no one along the way...
THE POWER OF CHOICE
It's all in the choices
that in end we made
That brings us to the truth
or the lies that are just fake
It's all in REactions
to actions that do come
By the courage to stand strong
or place us on the run
It's all in the way
that we live life everyday
That helps us all to grow
or in same place, stay
It's all in the knowing
that denial is no friend
That our new future waits
just up there, round next bend
-Eddy
06/27/07
eliminating denial brought about your freedom. Finally allowing you to see what was true and really there instead of what you wished or hoped was there.
No prewrites
20 line limit
any style
Next contest will be about how your denial trapped
you in your situation, should you wish to wait for
that one. (The negative side of denial)
Have fun but hurt no one along the way...
THE POWER OF CHOICE
It's all in the choices
that in end we made
That brings us to the truth
or the lies that are just fake
It's all in REactions
to actions that do come
By the courage to stand strong
or place us on the run
It's all in the way
that we live life everyday
That helps us all to grow
or in same place, stay
It's all in the knowing
that denial is no friend
That our new future waits
just up there, round next bend
-Eddy
06/27/07
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 11, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: Thank you all for entering I enjoyed them all. Even those that exceeded the 20 line limit rule by a large margin...
Feel free to enter my new one on nonet going on right now.
Have a lovely week...
-Eddy
Contest Winners
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Buried deep after years of weaving / a blanket quilted thick to cushion any pain / Fabric rich with disappointments / Eternally rising, brushing off and starting over again. / Out in Life, missiles of lovesongs wby Star Shine 23 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 27 1:50 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Personal, Hope
Gold trophy winner
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Little lies / spoken while looking in the mirror. / Wonderful tales told / just to hide from reality, / excuses were better than the truth• Commented on by judge.
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Cold Hard Truth. / I run with my hands up / I dont want your help / I dont want to see the truth that lies infront of me / I run / and I hiby JadalaStar 53 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 28 1:16 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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I said you were to blame, for snuffing our flame, / I said you were a witch, and perhaps a bitch, / For leaving me, oh so many years ago. / I realized with shame, I was part to blame, / For I 'caused most the pai• Commented on by judge.
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I told myself I loved him / Little did I know / That I was lying to myself / And it was all for the show / I wasn't being myself / I was making myself think / That I wanted him truly / And it caused me to bby bruntbeauty 23 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 10 11:30 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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This looks like a very good contest, Eddy We all need to take a look at ourselves objectively. Your contest coming up seems so as well.
I'm bookmarking this while I think about what I could write.
love and
Mum
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Congrats to all entrants and other trophy winners. Great contest.
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