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..: Feelings :.. how they affect you

I'm going to get straight to the piont.


I want to know [H|o|W] your hurting.
I want to know how you feel when you have a bad day I want to no how you feel when your having a break down?
I want to no how your anger affects you.
What do you do when you feel these ways???

I DON'T want to no WHY. no reasons! just how you feel, and what you do about it these feelings.

It must be emotive. I like emotional poetry.
I want to feel the way you feel when i read it.




Please Be A Bit More Creative Than saying you hurt urself when ur upset.

DETAILS PEOPLE!!





Hints:
I like dirty pretty poetry.

i like -D-A-R-K- poetry!

I like metaphors and similes

I dOnT lIkE wRiTtInG lIkE tHiS tHe WhOlE waY tHrOuGh, but possibly a few words.


I like [glitter], I feel it a.d.d.s. to the effect of the -EmotioN-


I prefer poetry that ~rhymes~. But thats a personal choice.

It MUST flow in some way!



NOTE:
I'm not allowing prewrites. And I currently have 3 honerable mentions but this may change furthur in the contest. And the pionts may change also



Length:
Must be more than 7 lines, but below 50 lines






.... GoOd LuCk ....


love always HB
xoxoxoxox
*Hug*


-----------EDITED!-----------

i am now allowing prewrites.....

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on July 5, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 220, Bronze: 170, Honorable mention: 2 people
  • Final notes:
    this was a great contest and so i found so many great poems, and poets! they were all amazing! keep writting.

    congradulations to all the finalist! and well done to the .W.i.n.N.e.r.S.!

    if anybody EvEr needs to talk. i am always here just IM me!

    take care. /L\O/V\E/ always HB
    xoxoxoxoxox

Contest Winners

  1. *feelings*
    I feel like i need to cry / but nothing seems to come out / i feel like i just want to die / the razors worn down so i start to pout. / I r
    by ExpectingMommy18 25 lines, 15 comments, on Jun 27 8:54 AM 2007. In Dark, Personal, Thoughts, Weird
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. LiVe
    Slice, Slice, / Bleed, Bleed, / *~*Nice, Nice,*~* / Need, Need, / Beat, Beat, / Pound, Pound, / Heart's shot, / Man down, / Shattered, / To
    by LaLaLie 30 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 27 3:31 PM 2007. In Personal
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3123824, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  4. [L.o.v.e]
    [L.O.V.E] is the s.l.o.w.e.s.t / -form- of -suicide- / A.n.d / I'll n.e.v.e.r s / h / &nb
    by fallenangel671 36 lines, 9 comments, on May 16 7:48 PM 2007. In Emo, Anger, Sadness, Suicide, Teenage thinking, Loss, Hate, Depressed
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. P.a.i.n. p_a_i_n.... GO A-W-A-Y!
    A s / l / a / s / h, / Some gore. / My f-e-e-lings / I ignore. / I can't t*a*k*e /  
    by BeautifulDisaster9 41 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 30 10:26 PM 2007. In Escape, My life, Pain, Teen issues, Cutting, Self mutilation
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. Sink Down Lower
    Feeling as the silent tunes slip over my skin / It's heartache every moment / That I sit here and cry / The pain and the torture I see / As I blame myself for what I've done / Beautiful masterpieces are lost / We'
    by BarbedWireButterfly 38 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 1 8:28 AM 2007. In Personal, Angst, Sad, Thoughts, Dark
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  7. Scream and Burn
    I feel my heart rupturing, / my head spinning from within, / a writhing being as bile erupts / as I fall down from shaky ups. / Bloodied tears fall from my eyes, / loss of appetite and muffled cries, / I feel
    by Naraku No Hana 18 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 27 1:31 PM 2007. In Dark, Sad, Personal, Pain, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  8. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3123874, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]

Entries [15]

1 - 15 of 15
  • As i gather
    as i gather these pieces of my broken heart / like trying to reform inner lost hope / every piece hurting me so / it reminds me of someone
    by fatizeh 9 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 27 7:35 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • vent your feelings
    To the unkown path i travel,so slow / the torturous task i delt all alone, / its not my buisness to care for you / you are not my responsibility,its a fact you should know / i am a child,still a little
    by poetic-enigma21 23 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 27 7:39 AM 2007. In Life, Other, Pain, Personal
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Lost in The Blues
    When I start a day without seeing your face / The whole day I'm left with a feeling of utter loneliness. / Your words drenched with anger /
    by Shapla 15 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 27 8:08 AM 2007. In Sad, Pain
    • Commented on by judge.
  • My Hurt
    What do I do when I hurt so much / I crawl into my hidden shell / I speak to no one about my pain / And inside I feel like hell / I feel li
    by fireymoondancer 34 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 27 8:39 AM 2007. In Sad, Love, Hope, Pain
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Set Me Off
    Burning bullets tearing through my temples / Splashing the last bit of sense from me / Flipping out no longer mortal / An invincible creature born of rage / Your anger filled bullets do nothing / I'm a time bomb tic
    by mcw120588 23 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 27 10:13 AM 2007. In dark, anger, death
    • Commented on by judge.
  • "Opaque sheath"
    by Zero the Hero 28 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 28 9:15 AM 2007. In Dark, Angst, Sad, Pain
    • Commented on by judge.
  • F a b r i c a t e d >> |H.o.p.e|
    I’m tired of living in your fabricated hope, baby doll. / You’re either going to love me or / hate me\\;; lust is no longer an option.. / Y
    by PaintedParisPassion 18 lines, 15 comments, on Jun 16 1:14 PM 2007. In Dirty Pretty
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite

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