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Still don't know what love is....

Ok, so I've been away for a while and I thought hosting a contest would be the perfect way to get back into the swing of things.

So, onto the contest. Don't let the title fool you, I'm not looking for heart wrenching, soppy 'he dumped me and I can't live without him' type poems. I want angry love poems, poems about bad times in relationships; how did you get through a time of betrayal? I wanna feel the anger, the hurt. I wanna hear what you did in the situation, did you move on or seek revenge? Split up or work through your problems?

These don't have to be real, and they don't have to be like the suggestions above, I just want to see the dark passion side to love, the struggles we've all faced in the quest for our own happy and perfect relationship.

On to the rules I guess -

I perfer rhyme, but you don't have to enter a rhyming poem.

Songs, including rap, are fine. But they have to be well done, I want to be able to feel the beat as I read. If you don't do this well, I will tell you! If you do it well, I wil be very impressed!

All forms are welcomed.

Anything goes, as long as it's tasteful and marked accordingly.

I will ask one thing, please don't have dark/hard to read backgrounds; I struggle reading off the computer as it is!!!

Well enjoy,

Webber

EDIT ** Sorry for the late comments, some people have removed poems and I guess it's because of the delay in comments. All entries will recieve a comment and fair judgement, although some may take longer. Please don't remove any entries, and I'm sorry to those poets who removed their entires, if in deed it was because of a delay in the comments.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on July 15, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 250, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 5 people
  • Final notes:
    Thank you to all who entered, I had a great time judging this one with some great entries.

    Hope you all enjoyed this as well!

    Webber

Contest Winners

  1. My first man was so handsome / So keen and eager too / To break in my virginity / He knew just what to do / Around his sword he put that th
    by freebutsafe 150 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 12 9:14 AM 2007. In Personal, Love, Lost love, Romance, Dedication
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. And these words don't sound right / and we won't be okay / and I walked away from love / and you laughed right in my face / and you mocked me / and that's okay / But you mocked love / and you will pay / Y
    by John McQuillan Jr. 85 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 11 3:29 AM 2007
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. by whoamiamwhom 42 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 11 11:11 PM 2007. In Love, Lyrics, Pain, Personal, Sad.
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. It's not that I love you less, / It's just that I hate you more. / I know I still dream of you, yes, / But I could never forgive a whore. /
    by blaiyne 20 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 14 12:29 AM 2007. In Love, Pain, Personal
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [11]

1 - 11 of 11
  • Sometimes I wonder what went wrong, / Then I remember a familiar song, / It happened so long ago, / And now my time has finally gone... / Sometimes I wonder where you are, / Time never heals such open scars,
    by myriad-dark 26 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 24 5:51 PM 2007. In Lyrics, Love, Pain, Personal, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Leave me / Lonely, / Having Heartbreak / Here so I can break apart. / Left the memories behind, / just thinking that you'd be so kind / to
    by IdTakeABulletForYou 38 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 24 7:26 PM 2007. In Personal, Love, Sad, Lost love, Strength
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Authors comments: / Firstly. no i'm not emo however this is a emo style song. secondly this is a song obviously . I wrote it when a girl told me she loved someone else then ran off
    by Forsaken wings 99 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 25 12:59 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • you caused so many complications, / dizzy spells to my head. / im twisted into confusion, / you left me an empty bed. / hate pumps through stories, / the ones i write you now. / I used to write you love songs
    by shadow cast 72 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 24 7:58 PM 2007. In heart break
    • Commented on by judge.
  • I thought we agreed / Agreed to be just friends / But you couldnt deal with that / You wanted love that never ends / We agreed we would wai
    by RevHead 23 lines, 9 comments, on Jul 13 8:07 PM 2007. In Personal, pain, love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • ~verse1~ / Torment is found, in your ways, / Promises fulfilled, then ripped away. / You scarred my face, then killed my heart, / A blow
    by PassionsPromise 64 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 13 8:11 PM 2007. In anger, sad, loss
    • Commented on by judge.

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  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    June 29, 2007
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    Promotion

    I will try and promote this contest for you =]


    • flyingphoenix
      June 30, 2007
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      That would be great thanks!

      I had some entries removed, ehich is disappointing, but never mind!

      webber


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    July 13, 2007
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    Well I read your edit note..may I suggest..please never chase the poets who remove their poems or never chase the host who remove others poems..this is kind of unhealthy approach in the community of the poetry and they should be kept out from the sacred voyages of the poetry my friend..don't feel guilty..


  • xXx W1ck3D xXx
    July 13, 2007
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    are you going to be allowing pre-writes in this contest. I have a perfect one for it.