Okay this is basically my anything contest... Sort of.
So here are the topics I would like to see.
[x] Things you would call “emo”. I don’t like the stereotype emo, but sometimes it is the only way to describe something. So yeah, anything “emo”.
[x] Drugs, the addiction. You know. The whole realm of stuff like that.
[x] Sadness.. Not cliche please.
[x] Real Pain. Emotional.. Stuff like that.
[x] Love. Lost love, broken love, you love each other but you don’t
[x] ANYTHING dirty pretty. [but hopefully it will fit in with the other topics on here.]
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Rules::
[x] Put your topic into the AUTHORS NOTES please.
[x] Use proper language and punctuation.
[x] If you have a dirty pretty poem, DO NOT put a shitload of punctuation in it.
[x] Stick to the topics..
[x] Swearing is okay.
[x] No erotica, sexuality is okay, but no like porn type stuff. I’m not THAT old.
[x] As usual, no dissing other poets, constructive critism is one thing, dissing is another. Okay?
[x] Put your username in the authors notes, because I might like your poetry but not be able to find it if I don’t know your username. I will not judge on who I know because when I can’t see the names, I can figure out who is who anyways. I won’t judge on if I know you or not.
[x] Just have fun.
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I want a whole lot of entries, prewrites are FINE.
YAY.
Have fun darlings::
-.Sarah.
So here are the topics I would like to see.
[x] Things you would call “emo”. I don’t like the stereotype emo, but sometimes it is the only way to describe something. So yeah, anything “emo”.
[x] Drugs, the addiction. You know. The whole realm of stuff like that.
[x] Sadness.. Not cliche please.
[x] Real Pain. Emotional.. Stuff like that.
[x] Love. Lost love, broken love, you love each other but you don’t
[x] ANYTHING dirty pretty. [but hopefully it will fit in with the other topics on here.]
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Rules::
[x] Put your topic into the AUTHORS NOTES please.
[x] Use proper language and punctuation.
[x] If you have a dirty pretty poem, DO NOT put a shitload of punctuation in it.
[x] Stick to the topics..
[x] Swearing is okay.
[x] No erotica, sexuality is okay, but no like porn type stuff. I’m not THAT old.
[x] As usual, no dissing other poets, constructive critism is one thing, dissing is another. Okay?
[x] Put your username in the authors notes, because I might like your poetry but not be able to find it if I don’t know your username. I will not judge on who I know because when I can’t see the names, I can figure out who is who anyways. I won’t judge on if I know you or not.
[x] Just have fun.
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I want a whole lot of entries, prewrites are FINE.
YAY.
Have fun darlings::
-.Sarah.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on August 21, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 30, Bronze: 13
- Final notes: congrats to all
Contest Winners
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She's stroking mirrors with a happy hand; / running fingers && smiles down the candy swell, / && tearing holes on my insides / - Demanding• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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With every bone you f.r.a.c.t.u.r.e.d.::
//you told me I was beautiful;;by Tinkerbell-Or-Me 50 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 22 3:44 PM 2007. In Dirty-pretty, angst, hate, love, eating disorders, emotions, thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
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We're sharing razored whispers / && broken smiles / Making up these excuses / Never seemed so hard / Oh baby you're so confusing / Telling me honest lies / && I can't quite decide / How to deal with this• Commented on by judge.
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This tastes just like the perfect tragedy, / With it's bittersweet butterfly kisses. / This feels as if she's on the verge of self-destruct• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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a prick of my pin / a slit of your rist / so why not bring a flame to this / the burns will stop the bleeding / im not gunna lie this will• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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she looks at today / and she looks at yesterday; / she sees someone new different / each time she passed a new miror. / her eyes are in lovby WishMeAway--x 47 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 23 4:03 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Porcelain Princess 35 lines, 6 comments, on May 23 9:57 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Watch me fall / because i've done it again, / haven't I? / I shouldn't speak / I shouldn't Think / because now all I'm doing / Is hurting yby Soten-Jaganshi 37 lines, 13 comments, on Jun 26 2:12 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Haunt the halls with shattered dreams, / Pierce the silence with my screams. / Ever waking, ever dying, / Drown in rivers that I'm crying.by Eternallycurious 18 lines, 4 comments, on May 8 12:54 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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::Take me to the backseat baby:: / Hold me [close] in this [crowded space] / We can >>>hide / .locked.doors. && .tinted.windows. / You canby rawrbby 14 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 22 9:13 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Scream so loud, so that I can't hear.
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Does she open her[legs]self to you
in a way that I didn't? &&by GutterXGlitter 20 lines, 10 comments, on Apr 16 2:32 PM 2007. In Drugs, Dirtypretty, Betrayal, Infidelity, Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by R.J.Valentine 21 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 23 9:24 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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Sitting Here Day By Day,
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Oh dear, Oh dear. / F / A / L / L / I / N / G / F / A / L / L / &nbby LucyLightning 69 lines, 12 comments, on Jun 21 3:59 PM 2007. In Alice In Wonderland, Dirty Pretty• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Tears,, blood&&vomit
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Please wake up this morning [darling] / Its a b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l day outside. / All the [prying eyes] will be on you / /Rip/p/ing/ you apartby SarahEatsAirplane 68 lines, 10 comments, on Apr 29 7:26 PM 2007. In eating disorders, dark, beauty, pain, sad, emo• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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To all fo these people, / Writing of love, / I am going to twist it, / And add my way. / I look into your heart, / And I see something bruiby Ignis Corpus 27 lines, 14 comments, on Jun 14 9:31 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Self-Medicating Isn't the Smartest Idea....by Astrid-Star 21 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 13 8:30 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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look at me;i'm crying / do i look like i understand[im lost] / do you know why i'm this way baby? / i feel like a part of me lost you todayby WishMeAway--x 60 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 27 6:02 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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you used to see planes and wish you had wings / great sober sunbursts riding the winds of everything we were / and when silver soaring flewby gasolinequeen 54 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 23 11:44 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I'm tired of all this shit / I'm tired of pretending / I know I just swore / Mommy, Emma, I'm sorry / I just can't take it no more / I needby DeadlyTurnip 23 lines, 10 comments, on Jun 23 7:30 PM 2007. In Sad, Pain, My life, Dark, Sadness, Anger, Personal., Depressed• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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watch teh tears run down my cheeks. / the ones that you used to make blush red. / just at anything you said. / everything about you is -dirty- / now these arms the same ones you ran your fingers down.• Commented on by judge.
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My heart is split between a fault line, / Eruptions causing this fear, / On top of the mountain is what is right, / How much farther must Iby Innocent LIke Sugar 35 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 24 9:41 PM 2007. In Other• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Roundabout....
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Verse 1) / Use Me Like A Tool / So I can wear down / Choke on the metal / Without a sound / Fuck me with a chainsaw / so I scream and bleed• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Playing out scenarios of life and what's ahead of me / Planning then forgetting the destructive ways I'm dealing with my pride• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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These sour candy story lines are too much for you to handle, / Sweetie. / So I’ll let the record play, / Anything to drown out your barbiedby PaintedParisPassion 10 lines, 26 comments, on Jul 26 2:21 PM 2007. In Dirty Pretty• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The statics where you'll find meby PaintedParisPassion 9 lines, 16 comments, on Jul 26 12:54 PM 2007. In Dirty Pretty• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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This is kinda a play on a lullaby. every other stanza is part of the lullaby (starting with the second), while the others are part of the pby stop a bullet 51 lines, 11 comments, on Jul 9 8:45 PM 2007. In Sad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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What’s the matter, love? / I’m everything you want me to be; / Your perfect little made up caricature. / So sorry to disappoint you sweetheby PaintedParisPassion 19 lines, 25 comments, on Jun 8 1:00 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Lying in bed / on my side / staring at the fly / which has taken up residence / in the divet / on my wall, / created when I threw / our famby Sacrificial Love 69 lines, 8 comments, on May 16 5:52 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by -shiningstars- 63 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 19 3:56 AM 2007. In adult• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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We yearn for acceptance / In a world unkind / As addictions and harsh feelings / Take over our mind. / The past thoughts linger / There's nby and234 43 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 25 12:12 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I stand here and stare at you, / Our first meeting is here, / I watch you now, you are so still, / Down my cheek rolls a single tear, / I sby Ilma 31 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 2 8:17 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Silence fell
Emptiness.by Artemis Gem 97 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 11 6:11 PM 2007. In angst, dark, sorta drawn from personal experience, spiritual, hope, GOD• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
"Come on, you're dead to me." / A filthy brush of leaves / And colder than the sky / A metal case / With a heart inside / Intoxicate your b• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Cut my feelings in half / Break my heart in to two / Because this seems like something / That you would do / You have no reason to care / If I am not there / So I will leave you now / It I cannot barby SpokenSilence 26 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 26 7:59 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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Haunting me in every hour, / not sweet and tender, hate and sour. / Loving you has got me in trouble, / i have to hit it on the double. / Tired of being so abused, / sick of lying, so confused! / so far away but y• Commented on by judge.
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You're a [pretty] little i m p e r f e c t i o n / with your [shattered] ego / / and those eyes that could leave / any boy in a trancby juliex-exotic shine 56 lines, 30 comments, on Apr 29 1:25 PM 2007. In Contest• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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painful agony / you inflict every day, / cruel, sharp toungue, / with brutal, bruising words, / you flush with anger, / at failed attempts,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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You’re my cancer baby doll. / The incurable d-i-s-e-a-s-e, / That I’ll never get rid of. / You’re the {candy.coated} arson that fills my lby PaintedParisPassion 20 lines, 21 comments, on Jun 18 7:37 PM 2007. In Dirty Pretty, heartbreak, sad• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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well im just kind of fed up with all this crap that is going on in my life and i really don't need this anymore and i guess this is what i• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I feel like shit, / I want to die! / Can't hold back the tears, / Even though I try. / I want to give up, / You want me to stay tough. / Bu• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The rain / It's the greatest thing that nature ever created / For some, it helps them go to sleep / For others it hides the tears that theyby Deijinn 29 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 11 3:14 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I entered 3 x in dirty pretty
I hope that's allright!
but you were ending so I wanted to enter really quick
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AHHHHH
i just removed my poem from this contest
and i didn't mean too
because i thought it was over
and idk what how to put it back it =[
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