For this contest I want you to tell me about something that you hold secret in your heart that you are afraid to tell those who you love about. Whatever it is- if it's making your heart beat faster or slower...if it is there lurking in your subconsious and you fear the results of speaking these thoughts- I want to hear about them.
Please refrain from the use of sticky caps
Free verse or any verse is a-okay
Make it worth my while- yes, I want to hear your thoughts- but I would also like to witness good poetry while I am doing so. Please don't waste my time and points.
Write from the heart as all writers should!!!
Uno, dos, tres- ESCRITE!
Please refrain from the use of sticky caps
Free verse or any verse is a-okay
Make it worth my while- yes, I want to hear your thoughts- but I would also like to witness good poetry while I am doing so. Please don't waste my time and points.
Write from the heart as all writers should!!!
Uno, dos, tres- ESCRITE!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 2, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100
- Final notes: Thank you for your patience in my slow judging of this contest. (I am down with Mono ) Thank you also for all the spectabulous entries- this was a difficult contest to judge; especially considering the amount of personal thoughts put into these pages. So thank you all again and I wish you all find your paths of happiness in life.
Contest Winners
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Mommy you don’t know me / and I’ll keep it that way / because if you knew me / I don’t know what you’d say. / I keep my secret / by tellingby AshesFromFire 23 lines, 23 comments, on May 20 11:51 PM 2007. In Love, Dark, Pain, Depression, My life, Sadness, Teenage thinking, Family
Gold trophy winner
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Do you think you will take
How i'm scared a heart may breakby Lady Nightshade 55 lines, 9 comments, on Apr 25 7:12 AM 2007. In Lyrics, Love, Fear
Bronze trophy winner
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Their relationship was ruined by his desire for virginal sex.by princess-bubblegum 28 lines, 10 comments, on Mar 4 8:41 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Distracted by your charming smile / As your sharp tongue / Strikes the fatal blow / Attracted to your fiery spirit / Though was met with an• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Say darling, how exactly did we come to this? Would you claim / That I’m the worst you’ve ever had, or maybe the best- it’s complicated / T• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I'm reverting back to my old habit / So easily tempted, so easily strewn / It's almost like I enjoy it. / But what's so wrong with fabricat• Commented on by judge.
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I love an older man and he loves me / Really that’s not hard to see / But for the sharing of the endeavor / Our love would be slain forever / Is it wrong for me to love someone so much older / Someone who makes• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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As she walks by, i notice her scent / it smells of sweet roses with a honey compliment / i try to greet her but she walks on by / i don't think she notices the twinkle in my eye / i spot her walking from across the wa• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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My Lip Trembled As You / Slid Your Hand Down My / Porcelain Blushing Cheek, / You Sent Shivers Down My Spine / As You Leaned In And Tenderly / Kissed My Blood Red Lips, / I Wish That Moment Had / Lasted Forever• Commented on by judge.
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If I am afraid to tell those I love, why would I post it here, where I have friends that care about me and read it?
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Maybe it's time to find the courage to face your fears ♥
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They have been part of what makes me ..... me
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Understandable.
But also, I don't think it would necessarily be "passing them on to another." Plus, you don't always have to tell your friends it's personal. Just inspired by a picture/movie/etc. Just a thought. -
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I will try to give you a poem then.
It will be hard to give over something as that about myself though. -
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Oh, no I'm not the judge...sorry. I just came across the contest and saw your comment. ♥
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tis okay, you have shown me that another does care.
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Awe, of course<33
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Thank you very much for the silver trophy and the points. Congratulations to the other winner's as well.
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