Give me your best new poem please. Something that really shows off the way you think and what kind of poet you are. I am using a lot of my points here so enjoy writing and I can't wait to see what you come up with. Good luck to all.
Rules:
No sticky caps
No cutting/suicide etc
At least 20 lines long
Free verse/rhyme - it's up to you
1 entry each
Rules:
No sticky caps
No cutting/suicide etc
At least 20 lines long
Free verse/rhyme - it's up to you
1 entry each
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 21, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 1500, Silver: 500, Bronze: 350
- Final notes: Wow - what a great contest. Thanks to all who entered. I used a lot of points for this and it was well worth it. Each piece had something unique to offer - the winning poem shows true genius and artistic sophistication. I hope you will look for my contests again and I would be grateful if you would have a look at some of my work. Thanks again for entering. Stephanie x
Contest Winners
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Victoria Luxora was her name. / Her hair is like a lover to the wind, / Her body to the sky; she's kiss by rain / Although she truly wantsby Frodofan 85 lines, 10 comments, on Jun 19 10:46 AM 2007. In society, weird, hope, narrative, long, metaphorical, abstract?
Gold trophy winner
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Leaning against a street lamp, / smoky rhythms pour out / mixed with the haze; / hat brim resting below the eyes, / casting features in shadow. / An open case / rests beside my feet / waiting for passerbyby Zephyr Aryn 27 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 19 8:57 AM 2007. In Thoughts, My own style, Jazz, Music, Contest
Silver trophy winner
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looking back / think I would change / a few things / might not be so critical / or harsh judging people / would try to be kinder / and less cynical / but most of all / would learn to say no / to those wby grannyeri 22 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 19 8:51 AM 2007. In Personal, Society, Thoughts, Other, Life
Bronze trophy winner
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Killed me with a fantasy / That clearly wouldn't ever be. / Devoured in a fuzzy dream; / So false, the truth I should've seen. / I break apart with every word. / Divert your eyes so YOU aren't hurt. / Don't cby IdTakeABulletForYou 34 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 19 6:34 PM 2007. In Sad, Love, Other, Pain, Personal, Hope• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Entries [19]
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If I could steal God’s codes / for keeping peace in a wild world, / I would. Coordinates collide / with reality chipping away to decipher• Commented on by judge.
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Sorrow is no longer the song I sing...• Commented on by judge.
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Perusing back over my life / I can hear the tympanic rhythms / Of generations of my ancestors / Firming down the basic foundations / And fundamental structures that were / Ultimately the melting pot of all myby SweetButtaLove 36 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 19 8:29 AM 2007. In Hope, Life, Love, Spiritual, Thoughts, Society, Nature• Commented on by judge.
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She's trembling, / She's twitching, / You don't know what you're missing. / Her hands are cold, / Her body's lifeless, / ..Isn't this your "Perfect Princess"? / She wants you now, / She need• Commented on by judge.
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GOD TODAY I ASKED MYSELF / WHY I FALL BACK IN YOUR WAYS / YOUR EVERYWORD I KNOW / YOUR WISH IMPLANTED IN ME / BUT STILL I LET GO / I FALL FLAT 4 NO REAL COST / I KNOW THE PAIN / THE TEARS AND SHAMEby learn2luv4real 58 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 19 6:17 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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i'm Sorry / i think i've got it wrong / isn't it supposed to be / a toast to the / writers of talent / the ones with points / get the prizes / occasionally there are / some suprises / just like this:• Commented on by judge.
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I'm awake in fear, / The devil's stare is here, / And I cannot leave it, / For it feels to nice. / You all think I'm weird, / And you think I'm loony, / Maybe you are "weird", / Or maybe you're "loony".• Commented on by judge.
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I'm a poison ivy / I'm a bitter tree / Baby, do you love me / And desire me? / Passsionate sensation / Burning soul in red / Crazy combination / That you won't forget. / Falling on the ground / Loby Anastasiya 13 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 19 12:17 PM 2007. In Other• Commented on by judge.
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Into the Hole of Oblivion / I had feelings once / for a certain person, / I wrote of them, / I sang of them, / I prayed for a meeting / But ALL to no avail! / Time passed, / and never healed,• Commented on by judge.
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I thought for long and hard before I began to write, / To sum up the sort of poet I am today, / But I think to type about me, it would take all night, / To be honest.. I'm not sure what to say. / I think there isby Onionducks 44 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 19 1:33 PM 2007. In Descriptive, Thoughts, life, Personal, Other• Commented on by judge.
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I never even knew i could write . / Until the day a teenager lead me here. / So here i sit with my favorite cup in hand , / my cigerettes bby BeautifulFlame 37 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 19 2:58 PM 2007. In Personal, Thoughts, Life, Freewrite, Self, My own style• Commented on by judge.
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hey, i JUST wrote a poem EXACTLY like that yesterday..
.. can i pretty plz enter? and to imagine, while i was lookin for a contest yesterday to enter it, i couldnt find any.. and i find this NOW! .. plz oblige..
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Aww... I just wrote a really great poem. It took alot of built up inspiration... Sadly, I already submitted it to the site.
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hey i'll enter sth but i hope it'll fit the contest, coz it is not realistic but shows u a bit of my fantasy life and self
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All I can say is WOW! I was not expecting this at all!!! THANK YOU!
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