This contest is easy, I simply want you to write me a poem about sadness and or darkness. Nothing specific, anything goes, just make me feel it.
For the first time in awhile, maybe ever, I am allowing pre-written poems, therefore they must be of great quality compared to the fresh writes. Perhaps I sound picky and harsh, but they are my points and my contest so I can do and say as I wish!
Rules and Things To Avoid:
no sticky caps
no lingo
no erotic
no crap writes
dirty pretty?...whatever the shit that is
Things to Include:
grammar
spelling
punctuation
effort
That is all, now write away or pick your favorite, and or best, pre-write!
Please do not cry if I think your write isn't of good quality, I reserve the right to DQ and remove anyone from this contest. Also, I don't see it as an issue in knowing who the poets are, so if you want to ask questions or respond to anything I write about your poems feel free!
Now.....
GO!
For the first time in awhile, maybe ever, I am allowing pre-written poems, therefore they must be of great quality compared to the fresh writes. Perhaps I sound picky and harsh, but they are my points and my contest so I can do and say as I wish!
Rules and Things To Avoid:
no sticky caps
no lingo
no erotic
no crap writes
dirty pretty?...whatever the shit that is
Things to Include:
grammar
spelling
punctuation
effort
That is all, now write away or pick your favorite, and or best, pre-write!
Please do not cry if I think your write isn't of good quality, I reserve the right to DQ and remove anyone from this contest. Also, I don't see it as an issue in knowing who the poets are, so if you want to ask questions or respond to anything I write about your poems feel free!
Now.....
GO!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 26, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100
- Final notes: thanks to all...
Contest Winners
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Never thought passion of poetrey, would ever one day becomes idolatry. when I kneel before my bed and began to poetry instead of prayer• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 3083783, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 3084516, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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You Promised Forever; / You gave me one week. / You let me hold on as you let go of me. / You told me you loved me, / I said it, as Well. / You knew that I screamed, / but you Watched as I Fell. / You heldby IdTakeABulletForYou 45 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 17 2:25 PM 2007. In Sad, Love, Other, Pain, Thoughts, Angst• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Entries [31]
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With the wings of my heart / Flapping oh so quickly, / But passion burned holes, / So I'm still falling into / The black that is heartbreakby Cool.Indifference 28 lines, 10 comments, on Jun 14 8:01 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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leaves taken from a tree / falling down under my path / the unholy hears me walk / stepping over dead words / reasons to love are gone / as i sit crying in the dark / dark green my eyes turnby Domine Pestilentia 18 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 17 12:05 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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As I walk silently, / With roses in my hand. / I let out a silent cry, / Why did you die. / I killed you, / It was you or me. / I won, / You lost. / Most people say that, /• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Your shadow creeps around my room. / I close my eyes and squeeze tight, / hoping...praying you wont come in. / I can't take you touching me... / with your cold, rough hands again. / I see you in my nightmares now.by lovelymassacre 30 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 17 1:53 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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Now close your eyes / And visualize this in your mind / You wake up one morning / Everything is just how it goes everyday / People walking, birds singing and the Sun is shining / Stand up / You look at the mi• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The Candle Flickered / As I Stared Out Of My Window, / Everything Was Still, / Dark And Quiet, / I Felt His Icey Breath / Push Past My Neck / And His Hands Slide Around My Waist, / That Moment, Fro• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I look back / And feel each sting / of the Hornets I left behind / Yellow and black memories / of protective nests / And swarms of protests• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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a life takened... / takened away from nothing / comatosed from my life being robbed / stripped of my living essence / impaling me from seeing light / no strength to put up a fight / gaining my trby Epitaph 24 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 17 8:36 AM 2007. In Sad, Dark, Depression, Sorrow, Death, Despair• Commented on by judge.
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Have you ever seen them, / The black eyes / Gleaming in the dark, / Like a whizzing bullet, / Piercing through my senses, / A deep, hauntinby Rele anmwe 69 lines, 9 comments, on Jun 17 6:58 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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In the shadowy darkness
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Surrounded by our enemies / Armageddon is at hand / They've come to take our world / and they've come to take our lives / These invaders from space / have laid claim to our earth /by Surely 19 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 17 4:19 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Broken by his stained glass tears
She mourns for her son's martyred years• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
She is going to be crying again tonight . / Her body will be trembling with fright . / She has been deeply hurt by him once again . / Insid• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Here is my story, before I go / Because Iam going to die, for a reason you should all know / My name is Alice, I just turned seventeen / The best present i got was to know the worlds so mean / I have been hurtby kimba 23 lines, 9 comments, on Jun 18 3:03 AM 2007. In abuse iam 16• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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When will it be over, the heartache and the pain
My life is closing in, my head going insane.by trace3grls 36 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 3 5:02 PM 2006. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Black flower flourishing / cracking, shifting, shattering in what once was / a heart / wonder and want so briefly known / the Gardener / of small growths and buds / in the shadows bad seeds planted / poison gush• Commented on by judge.
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Hello Spirit from behind, / I see you’ve found the right time. / As darkness falls upon the fires of hell, / And blind eyes open to a growiby Cellogrl315 13 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 17 5:16 PM 2007. In Dark, Depression, Sadness, Loss, Hate, Suicide• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Consolecharlie 26 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 21 3:24 PM 2007. In Adult, Angst, Contemporary, Dark, Lyrics, Pain, Sad, Spiritual, Weird• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I can feel her eyes on me / Staring in wonder / I can hear her breath / And smell her blood / I kiss her neck softly / Letting the blood flow into my body / I touch her beautiful face / And kiss her soft sk• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Congratulations to the trophy winners and thankyou for allowing prewrites
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Wow thank you SOO much for the gold!! I must admit, I'm very shocked.
Congratulations to the other winners and thanks for hosting such a great contest<3
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Thanks
Thanks for placement =] It makes me happy =]
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