Make Me Feel...

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on June 24, 2007
• Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 30, Bronze: 30
• Final notes:
  you all were amazing. congrats to the winners.

• To judge this contest, you need to have at least as many finalists as you have rewards. You have 3 awards but only 2 finalists.

Contest Winners

1. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3034744, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
2. [sleeping angel ]

   these nail bitten to the / quick, fingers / tip.tap / Ever so gently / over your 5 o'clock / shadow / your

   by Crash Into Me 22 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 15 11:00 PM 2007. In &dir.r.ty.pretty.me

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Entries [39]

• Jealous Salesclerk

  And the bride to be

  by zillion 29 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 15 6:46 PM 2007. In life, other

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• Our Puzzle

  I take the puzzle pieces out of the box one by one. Together we have built such a emense puzzle. Piece by piece we interlocked these piec

  by EternalBlueMemory 0 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 13 8:59 PM 2007. In sad love

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• One last time

  Life gave me one last time to talk to you. / Even though i thought that god was being unfair, / I was just being selfish to spend a life ti

  by MzDimeDivia 10 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 14 12:41 PM 2007. In Love, Life, Nature, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Hope

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• Ocean, Secrecy of Pain.

  by Clinging-to-Life 68 lines, 9 comments, on Jun 13 12:07 PM 2007

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• The Tulip

  The Tulip / Current mood: blah / Category: Writing and Poetry / The Tulip / She was running towards him in a tall grass plain. / He looked

  by EternalBlueMemory 79 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 15 9:50 PM 2007

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• Losing my Mind

  I think I'm losing my mind today / and maybe these past weeks / little things keep happening / to knock me off my feet / I tried to make a

  by Free1977 36 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 15 11:29 PM 2007. In Dark, Hope, Life, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts

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• Showering Passion

  Who an I to be this way, / So in love with you. / My unhidden desires to race my hand down your body, / for my love to move within you. / F

  by Sonofdead 24 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 15 11:14 PM 2007

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• Gone but not Forgotton

  Life has taken so much. / May 30,2007 God took a very special angel. / Love was gone but not forgotton. / I was hurt and i could not go on.

  by MzDimeDivia 23 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 14 6:30 PM 2007. In Nature, Pain, Personal, Sad, Life, Hope, Thoughts

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• Life

  Life is not always promised to us or the next day. / On May 30,2007 god took an angel an angel of god. / Through the pain and the struggle through cancer and dying / systems you still smiled. / Life was not al

  by MzDimeDivia 14 lines, on Jun 13 10:48 PM 2007. In Personal, Nature, Sad, Hope, Thoughts, Love, Life, Dark

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• A little pill

  Well here is a story, Of a little pill / that terminates your brain and makes you ill / It is called eccies, its a tablet thats small / aft

  by kimba 25 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 27 5:52 AM 2007

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• Late Nights Of Angry Fights

  It's one of my greatest fears.....To be physically hurt by someone I thought loved me.

  by BellaGodiva 21 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 16 6:17 PM 2006

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• The Need

  Let the light find you.
  I need to see you clearly.

  by BellaGodiva 13 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 1 9:27 PM 2006. In Love

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• Not To Sleep

  For all who are frustrated.....

  by BellaGodiva 21 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 30 2:23 AM 2004. In Other

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• “Can you imagine”

  Can you sleep in peace this night / I can’t / Can you forgive and teach me / How to forgive / Can you touch me on neck this night / And when I m dead to be sure / That I m in pain / I pretend and sleep

  by Egtoxo 35 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 16 12:18 AM 2007. In Dark, Fantasy, Hope, Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad

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• My Wedding Day

  You weren't there on my wedding day
  To walk down the isle and give me away

  by Shining for You 20 lines, 26 comments, on Feb 24 8:54 AM 2007. In Sad, Life, Personal

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• Bye bye at last

  we dance aroundthis subject, you and I;and we dodge,we weave,this fiction that is us -a lover's liedusting my lipswith words I can't

  by Rele anmwe 100 lines, 13 comments, on May 31 5:56 AM 2006. In Love

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• Confused

  You say you love me / You say you hate me / do you know me anymore / do you know yourself / in your supressed mind / where do i stand / no longer do i know / am i high or low / you tell me

  by mattius 19 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 10 5:55 PM 2007

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• Just Not Today

  Everday, I wake up without the answers. / But knowing the questions all too well. / Who am I going to be? / Will my life ever get to find m

  by Napoet 23 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 6 8:29 AM 2007. In Pain, Personal, Sad, Angst, Life, Options

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• Silent

  An awkward silence / Between lively eyes / A quiet violence / Allows love to rise / There is much to say / Not a word is spoken / On this rainy day / Our souls almost broken / Very subtle lust / On

  by Luciferschild 23 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 14 8:08 PM 2007

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• Homeless

  I wake everyday sun gleaming
  hungry i search for food

  by umpa lumpa 18 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 22 10:24 PM 2007

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• You will be in My Heart

  In the darkest hours / Through your deepest despair / When no one cares ill be there / / Within your trials and tribulations / To your doubts and frustrations / In your violence and turbu

  by Danielle Samia 13 lines, 24 comments, on Apr 24 1:49 PM 2007. In Life, Hope, Thoughts, Love

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• ( sinking )

  the bitch knew how to bite

  by malkinpuss 64 lines, 4 comments, on May 17 6:17 PM 2007

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• The Texan and Yankee girl

  The love between northand south are you and i . / Remembering the first day we talked,I knew then you would be mine . / Our hearts beat as

  by Mdr62 12 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 16 12:49 PM 2007. In Love, Personal, Hope

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• Misery

  and the things that come with it

  by zillion 14 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 15 8:57 PM 2007. In pain, life, other

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• .Midnight . Romance.

  I climbed up to your window last night; / Stared for possibly hours. / Then, for the first time, / I noticed how beautiful you look / While

  by SarahEatsAirplane 95 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 17 9:41 PM 2007. In Sad, Love, Happy, Dark, hmmmm..., OH MY.

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• hey dad......do you remember us

  Hey dad do you remember me, I was once your little girl
  But now you found alcohol, drugs there your whole world

  by kimba 21 lines, 8 comments, on Nov 13 8:54 PM 2006. In Dark

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• I hate you so much

  I hate you with a passion, the rage fills me inside / I dream about your pain, that you will suffer when you die. / You took away my childh

  by trace3grls 17 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 12 9:03 PM 2007

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• a child tears

  
  They say it makes you happy

  by trace3grls 20 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 6 9:49 PM 2006. In Dark

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• The Endless Pursuit.

  by Nobody Royale 16 lines, 19 comments, on Jun 8 3:55 PM 2007. In Erotica, Personal

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• What you are

  You are the light dancing on the shimmering edge of my blade / You are the moisture glistening at the at the tip of my needle / You are the the longing I feel listening to Mozart / You are everything my mother war

  by SuddenShift 25 lines, 5 comments, on May 24 3:37 AM 2007. In Dark, Pain

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• The Darkest Of All Nights [Final Reckoning]

  I could have swore this what I wanted all along / panting, sweating, moaning, sighing / but we were fucked; doomed to fail, before it even

  by PaiigeBARBIE 31 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 18 8:31 PM 2007

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• Silicon Romance [Binding Myself To The Dark]

  Baby, you don't understand the scars on my wrist / you've given me for Christmas / or the fingers down my throat / you gave me for my birth

  by PaiigeBARBIE 20 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 18 9:01 PM 2007. In Pain

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• .60 Second Slut. [[Pop That Pill && Shut The Fuck Up]]

  ♥ Dirty Pretty

  by PaiigeBARBIE 37 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 18 8:03 PM 2007. In Personal

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• A[Not.So]Shaded Place

  i dont have any desire / to write my feelings down on paper, love. / it would take more than these words / to tell you how much i love you, / but im finding myself / confessing my heart on this paper / E

  by WishMeAway--x 66 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 19 6:33 PM 2007

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• Hallelujah Junk Blues

  by myriad-dark 53 lines, 11 comments, on Apr 17 10:55 PM 2007. In Lyrics, Dark, Thoughts

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• The Rage Within

  Impatience and frustration
  rage within me,

  by Nermin Nazim 126 lines, 49 comments, on Sep 26 6:15 PM 2006. In Spiritual, Love, Collaboration

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• What I need

  why did you tell me you loved me?
  Why did you promise me the moon?

  by Nermin Nazim 30 lines, 11 comments, on Feb 22 11:45 AM 2007. In Hope, Fantasy, Love, Personal

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• Birch Trees

  by samueldouglas 217 lines, 29 comments, on Apr 24 7:53 PM 2007

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  AddictiveTRUTH
  June 16, 2007
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