Ok AP Gang, ALL AP Peeps
I have written a poem, and I want you to read and tell me what it means to you.
It can be a short story or poem, free verse,...does not matter...
Heres the poem:
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3055602
REad it feel it...Gimme your soul....make me feel...
This contest is to see how poets interpret things & to explore the various different styles of writing....
No TyPe lIKe ThiS......
Light erotica, but make it non-vulgar..please!
Have fun..
All types allowed....collabs, free verse, form, etc..
Thanks to my inspiration and kick starting my muse..."my boy" : Da-Lyricologist!!!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 25, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 300, Bronze: 200, Honorable mention: 3 people
- Final notes: WOW! Thanks for all these entries. Was very difficult for me to choose. I appreciate all the thoughts and memories....until next time....
Contest Winners
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Distant Tears / Amera Style• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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by redradical 72 lines, 30 comments, on Jun 14 10:56 PM 2007. In Collaboration, Sadness, Longing, Love
Silver trophy winner
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She did stir such air to rise, / her love exhaled, / within my room of tethered touch / to drift in dust / as sun ground soul / of sandston• Commented on by judge. [remove]
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 3067496, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 3114646, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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Gold trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
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Seperated and devastated / Each thought of missing you / Pouring tears fill an ocean / Eternally the heart is broken / Right now I'm trying to understand / A love of a lifetime is over / That hurts deep down insidby afireinthisheart 8 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 12 12:27 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Sad, Sadness, Contest• Commented on by judge.
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WALKING AWAY / Trying to find a way to make her understand, / life would be torture without her by my side. / Yet I know that deep down in both of our hearts, / one of us needsby Jeremy0826 36 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 12 2:03 AM 2007. In Sad, Thoughts, Hope, Life, Love, Pain• Commented on by judge.
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We knew this day would come / but it still cuts through us / Your other life beckonin• Commented on by judge.
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She was ony 7, bless. / She travelled 100 miles to join me, / for her grandparents golden wedding party. / We invested so much enthusiam foby Pete Greenslade 24 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 12 4:48 AM 2007
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Shades of circumstance / Brought me to this place / Unfortunate realities / Take my dreams away / Climax of love's song / Faded light lingeby Cerulean Sunrise 26 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 12 7:24 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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Gone / How is it the ones we least except / Holding truth in every gaze / It is those who leave us / Never to come back again / Missing / This endless longing that I hope to find / In the faded prints that he le• Commented on by judge.
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A man wishing not leave. Hoping for something, anything, to keep them together. This man is not evil in his his leaving nor is he angry. Hoby asimplepoeticmind 0 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 12 11:22 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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As i look back over my life / i see, the loving, happy / wife i use to be / nearly thirty years ago / this perfect life / would be mine noby jacbgd2 31 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 12 1:18 PM 2007. In contest, My own style, My life, Personal, Lost in thought, Sadness, Lost love• Commented on by judge.
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Blew / chosen destiny / to the wind. / It whirled about / on unknowing breath; / latched hold of chaos / twirling 'round- / left me sorry, / and dying. / Before decided curtain bow, / whispe• Commented on by judge.
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by amaranthine lover 23 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 17 11:38 PM 2007. In Fantasy, Dark, Contemporary, Abstract, My own style, Weird, noguest• Commented on by judge.
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Light erotica - is that like with light bulbs and neon? :-0)
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You know what I mean..just not vulgar...
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Will have to think and write..lol. Blessings. d
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DEb...
Come on...you can do it...
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Good luck with your contest! I thought about entering but I liked your poem too much. :] Hope you get some wonderful entries
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awwwwwwww..
I wish you'd enter..and TY for the comment...
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*Sighs* How can we impress the one we bow too?
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Heath.....
Stop that crazy talk...you can do this... -
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I know I can try.
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Excellent idea for a contest. I loved the light erotica comment, it floored me. Not in a hardwood carpet kinda way, hey O.K., this is getting WAY outta hand here...LOL
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Nice one, I will definately be back Whoochi!!!!
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Wonderfully written piece Whoochi!!! Unfortunately there are a lot of instances in life where this is what happens... Yes, it's happened to me... The "what-if's" are what kills you if you let them... I might be back to enter my feelings on this one... Good luck in your contest!!! Love and stuff... Tonya (moonstonemadness)
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Moonstone.....Tonya..
OH My Gosh, so good to see ya...ya know I have ya on my favs list...you go girlie...
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will give some thought to it, but I am currently working on a write that is taxing my time quite heavily. I shall try to come up with something.
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I'll have to check this out. Thanks for sharing your poem!
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I am honoured that you should invite me to check out your contest,I shall bookmark but haven't posted for a while,I write all the time but nothing seems right to post,but trust me I would only enter very mild erotica as vulgarity is not to my taste either dear poetess,good luck with your contest,will ponder
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Count me in! I'll be entering this one for sure
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thanks for the invite, i really do appreciate your thinking of me but i've pretty much given up the whole contest thing for a while. i'll tell you tho, you make a temptin contest. i hope you get tons of entries. ~r.
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Thank you for a awsome contest and congrats to the winners. I read many and they were great...GETS
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Great challenge here. Congrats to all the winners!
Renee
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