You are standing in the place of the girl in this picture. You are saying your final farwell to me. I want to know exactly what you will say. How did you see me? Did I touch your life in a good way...in a bad way...or not at all. What kind of flowers did you bring me? What kind of send off will you give me as I leave this world and travel on to new adventures. Any advice? Any warnings? I may be dead and in my grave in this contest...but I can still hear your voice. No hard core erotica. No weird typing. No trying to have sex with the dead girl. (Not my thing!)
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 12, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50
- Final notes: This was really quick!!! The contest was even better than I hoped for...in choosing the winners, I found myself perplexed. So many beautiful writes to have to pick from. I am so thankful to each and everyone who entered and hope to see you in my next contest! The poems I chose were the ones that made me cry and feel the most like a funeral or grave-side farwell. If you did not place it is not because your poem was not fantastic...they all were. Thanks once again!
Love and Peace,
Azlyn
Contest Winners
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Hello for the last time. / You left for eternal rest. / My tears have dried, / your roses are dead, / destroyed with salt. / You taught me so much, / my passion, wisdom, my honor. / I pondered over these wo• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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I didn't really know you, / But I saw you out and about / I'm sorry you are not with us / You've touched someone no doubt. / I bring some simple daisies / To lay by your resting place / And try to conjure upby burdened 29 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 11 4:04 PM 2007. In Friendship, Goodbyes
Bronze trophy winner
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Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
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Too unripe to wilt! / that yester bud gladdening our hearts / with fat prospect of floral boom... / No doom merchant presaged your doom / the eve of doom,we dreamt as one / our bat eyes veiled to hovering REAPE• Commented on by judge.
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Were we so evil / Who did we hurt / Our crime was our love / No one came my beloved / No one cared / I stand here with nightshade and hemlo• Commented on by judge.
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My eyes are somewhat in tears / what a disappointment I turn out to be / Like ashes kept in a jar, I am worthless / Do not stand upon my grby Rele anmwe 16 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 12 8:58 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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by amaranthine lover 13 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 12 4:09 PM 2007. In Fantasy, Contemporary, Dark, Abstract, My own style, Weird, noguest• Commented on by judge.
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this is definetly book marked
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Hope you find time to enter my dear!
Peace and Love,
Azlyn
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grrr....
this is driving me nuts! why cant one more person enter!! gah!
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