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Another Five Lines or Less

Just as the title says, I'm looking for poetry that's five lines or less. The last contest of this nature went very well so here's another one. Be expressive and creative...please. I WILL NOT, though, allow dark writes this time...there's enough sadness and darkness floating around this site without adding more so please refrain from that type of poetry...please
Knock yourselves out and go for the gold in five lines or less

Rules:
1.) NO DARK WRITES OF ANY NATURE
2.) BE NICE TO EACH OTHER and BEHAVE yourselves in this
contest
3.) No sticky caps or street lingo
4.) No use of the "f" word
5.) Have fun, be creative, and please no "junk" poetry;
by "junk" poetry, I mean, please don't throw just
ANY
lines in here and call it a poem...thanks

I guess that's all for now...start putting those creative pens to paper and let's see what you got

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on June 20, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 450, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 4 people
  • Final notes:
    Thank you, everyone; this was another great contest. My choice for gold was actually decided upon in the fact that it touched my heart in ways I can't even put into words. My Dad was and IS a "mighty oak" to me; my hero and my best friend. He's been gone 11 years now and I still miss him tremendously. So, this piece just took my heart.
    My choice for silver also touched me in the fact I'm a Mom and my children are my life; my soul. This piece spoke of a father's love for his child and warmed my heart
    And my choice for bronze...
    Due to a very personal reason and words of a very nature, I can't truly reveal why this one touched my heart to tears but yet, it did...thank you
    To my honorable mentions, your poems touched me in ways that were very deserving of recognition...
    And to all the ones who entered this contest, whether you placed or not or received an honorable mention or not, you're all winners in my eyes because you pen your hearts and souls onto the pages of life and that, in itself, is a great reward
    Thank you, all poetry; thank you for the memories that I will take and cherish for a long, long time to come.
    ~Heavenly Angel~

Contest Winners

  1. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3064244, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  2. by Arkbear 7 lines, 35 comments, on Jun 11 1:01 PM 2007. In Personal, Thoughts, Life, Love, Childrens, Spiritual, Society
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. I said I cared and she hid / I said I love you and she ran / She said "I love you, too / Finally a smile / for us both
    by plainoljoe 4 lines, 30 comments, on Jun 11 12:38 PM 2007. In Personal
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. With her ivory skin and stary eyes, / Enchanting me with her sultry smile. / Raven hair like a cloak against light, / Enthralling me in the dark of night.
    by BadKharma 3 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 20 1:02 PM 2007. In Love
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. by Bazza 10 lines, 20 comments, on Jun 11 5:23 PM 2007
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. Your words are twisted / covered in lies /
    by Soulful Woman 12 lines, 9 comments, on Jun 11 9:32 PM 2007. In Thoughts
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [26]

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  • Yet there's another revelation / On this day I'll tell you this / Understand the importance here / Right now I'll look you in the eyes / Saying without a doubt, I'm yours!
    by afireinthisheart 4 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 11 12:38 PM 2007. In Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • This is my collapsing lung for easy breathing / As if the air could be any lighter (and the sun any stronger) / This is my relapsed mind in centered dreaming / As if the water could be any colder (and the clouds an
    by Plastic Dreams 6 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 11 12:54 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by Zero the Hero 6 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 11 1:09 PM 2007. In Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • She holds brittle life within her hands / The delicate touch of her tiny fingers / Carry the golden butterfly to safety / Upon a red rose scented with grace / She releases her boundless compassion
    by Twins 4 me 4 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 11 3:58 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Love without passion is
    by darell 3 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 11 5:56 PM 2007. In Love, Hope, Longing
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by FabApocalypse 6 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 11 6:12 PM 2007. In Erotica, Hope
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Just think how little crime, prejudice, and evil there would be, / if everyone lived for love equality happiness and to be free / and not the greed or obsession of money and power to befit. / What would the thi
    by Roaddog Wolf 5 lines, 9 comments, on Jun 12 9:11 AM 2007. In Society, Spiritual, Life, Love, Hope
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Unrequested and unrequired / Love just beamed from your eyes / Seeing your heart, it's no surprise / I'm delighted and so impressed / Loving you more, this must be stressed
    by 2lullabyhaven 4 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 12 2:14 PM 2007. In Contest, love, thoughts
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by Desire 12 lines, 16 comments, on Jun 12 2:28 PM 2007. In Love, Life, Spiritual, Thoughts, Personal
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by Debbysmiles 8 lines, 9 comments, on Jun 12 7:35 PM 2007. In Other
    • Commented on by judge.
  • food is your friend / it makes your belly bend / it makes you happy / it makes you want to take a nappy
    by Travis7 3 lines, 9 comments, on Jun 12 10:10 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • What is the zip code / for Fantasy? / I've been keeping a cabin there /But now I'm looking to sell / Price is no object
    by Mirthryl 4 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 12 11:38 PM 2007. In Life, Personal, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Tethered by the souls, we live / On the memories of being together / Unscathed love shimmers in the eyes / Crooning for being one again, / Hoping… for a longed touch! / June 13
    by Neha Sharma 10 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 13 12:06 AM 2007. In Love, Acrostic
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by Florida Sunshine 3 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 17 9:25 PM 2007. In Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by sheltered 8 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 19 3:37 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Following the dream is this: / In a glimpse of possibility / we see that there has to be more. / Our determination leads us to the locked door... / With the key.
    by Bryan K Johnson 5 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 20 1:44 AM 2007. In Hope, Other
    • Commented on by judge.
  • A finite part of infinity / A consequence of chance / An intrusion of unpredictability / Insignificant / Yet everything.
    by Perdix 4 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 20 10:56 AM 2007. In Life, Nature, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge.

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  • Florida Sunshine
    June 20, 2007
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    Thanks for hosting a lovely contest~ Judging isn't always the easiest thing to do... I think you made a TERRIFIC decision! Congrats to all the winners!


  • Arkbear gold member
    June 20, 2007
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    My Dear Sis, Sandy ~

    To receive the Silver out of this Group of Poets is an honor ~

    Thank you for Hosting this Contest and giving me the chance to dedicate this to my Son ~

    One month and three days and he is leaving the nest.....this Poem touched me more than I thought ~

    Thank you my Dear ~

    Brother Bear loves you Very much ~



    Congrats to the Gold & Bronze winners and most of all, thanks to everyone who came out to support this Great contest ~

    smile!!!



    Bear ~