Hi. I don't care who you are. Let me get to the point of what I am looking for. I have options. Suck me into your poem, I want to get lost in it. I have been going through a lot and I am looking for escape. I'm crazy about rythme, it gets me everytime. If you have any quuestions, send me a message, or leave me a comment. I'll get back to you a.s.a.p.
** I might be adding more options. If you have an idea, run it by me. Just tell me in the NOTES which one you chose!
thanks!
1. Elelctrical storms: how do you feel when you see it? Why does it make you feel alive.
2. Pick a Color. In author's notes, tell me the color you picked. So, no--- it doesn't have to be the title of your poem.
3. Write about your favorite song. In author's notes, give me the lyrics though, in the author notes. Please and thank you!
4. Prayer's for extreme suffering.
I'm talking about abuse and neglect and serious pain.
5. Hope and Love. I will pay more attention to this if you write about it. It has to deal with the fourth one. So yes, they go hand in hand.
6. raw emotion. go wild and let it be raw. this is the only option that I will allow erotica.
7. Losing a friend
8. a funny experience you had in band...you know that goes...
!@#$ RULES !@#$
- no StIcKy CaPz
- use spell check & proper puncuation
** my contests are mainly about socializing and making friends and talking and improving skill. So comment on other poems [mine or poems in the contest]. Let me know in your author's notes!!!!
MOST IMPORTANT:. Have fun
and please enter!
Sincerly
The Angry Goth
** I might be adding more options. If you have an idea, run it by me. Just tell me in the NOTES which one you chose!
thanks!1. Elelctrical storms: how do you feel when you see it? Why does it make you feel alive.
2. Pick a Color. In author's notes, tell me the color you picked. So, no--- it doesn't have to be the title of your poem.
3. Write about your favorite song. In author's notes, give me the lyrics though, in the author notes. Please and thank you!
4. Prayer's for extreme suffering.
I'm talking about abuse and neglect and serious pain.
5. Hope and Love. I will pay more attention to this if you write about it. It has to deal with the fourth one. So yes, they go hand in hand.
6. raw emotion. go wild and let it be raw. this is the only option that I will allow erotica.
7. Losing a friend
8. a funny experience you had in band...you know that goes...
!@#$ RULES !@#$
- no StIcKy CaPz
- use spell check & proper puncuation
** my contests are mainly about socializing and making friends and talking and improving skill. So comment on other poems [mine or poems in the contest]. Let me know in your author's notes!!!!
MOST IMPORTANT:. Have fun
and please enter!
Sincerly
The Angry Goth
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 12, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 800, Honorable mention: 9 people
- Final notes: Now, please don't hate me for this. I wanted to see how well others could write by "Right Off the Top of their Head" ... Wow, I had a lot of pre-writes! A lot of them were very well done! I also had to go through about 70 entries.
This was awesome. So I am thanking all of you! If you didn't get a trophy and were supposed to, let me know. I will fix it. I should have points to give out, I have plently, but not a lot "a lot" if you know what I mean.
I once again thank everyone who entered. I have never had such luck with contests! All of you did beautifully, thank you (again) and keep writing.
Best Wishes. The Angry Goth
Contest Winners
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If I told you that I loved you would you accept the way that I feel?
Would you open up your heart to me and let me prove to you that it’sby Jeremy0826 106 lines, 19 comments, on Apr 29 10:17 AM 2006. In Love, Thoughts, Romantic, Relationships, Hope, Life, Contest
Gold trophy winner
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You'll just have to read it to find outby FallenAngel19 116 lines, 9 comments, on Sep 2 5:18 AM 2005. In Sad, Dark, Angst
Silver trophy winner
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Beauty fair and beauty bright / lead us to a calmer land / Illuminate the darkest night / Deliver me from Satan’s hand / Without your love• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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Left Right Yo' Right Left / The constant call of the daily dull.... / Marching here and there, never knowing where.... / With a blank and empty stare, but inside he fells someone there.... / The seargent shout• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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Mirror, mirror / On the wall / Why do you / Hate me so? / I dress in / All my best / Yet you show / Ugliness / Throwing sticks / And / Hurling stones / The face you bounce back / Kills my soul / Mir• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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This poem was written to bring awareness to the abuse of children that often go unmentioned.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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When did you start to drift? / When did you start to leave? / And what's the cause of this rift? / And what will it achieve? / It won't make me miss you / It won't make me care / It won't• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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I need to know was it love at first sight / or was it lust that took over my mind /by Ted E Bare 13 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 8 8:39 PM 2007. In Love• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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I miss you
I am worried you’re not ok• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
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Take my hand, / Hold it tight. / Feel my love, / Become my life. / Take my hand, / take me away, / you my love, / I trust this day. / Holdby Red Rose of Light 34 lines, 12 comments, on Jun 12 9:42 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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As I fall to the floor, / Once more, / I am torn. / No matter how bad it hurts, / No matter how hard you beat me, / I can't bring myself to leave, / And what's worse, / My, Dear; / Is that I'm lying here,by sweetscentofregret 45 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 19 2:56 AM 2007. In Abuse, Hope, Life, Love, Pain, Longing, Suffering, Emo, Contest• Commented on by judge.
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I feel the motion, yeah the motion of fear / Can't exscape all these demons in here / I fall short in the light of the moon / I see them co• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by samueldouglas 217 lines, 29 comments, on Apr 24 7:53 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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To all fo these people, / Writing of love, / I am going to twist it, / And add my way. / I look into your heart, / And I see something bruiby Ignis Corpus 27 lines, 14 comments, on Jun 14 9:31 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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you said you thought / i could do better than you / but it never once occured to you / that i never ever wanted too / you told me i wouldntby lost-in-yesterday 46 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 8 10:20 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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ok, it's very wierd, just read it...• Commented on by judge.
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No others see my pain through this decoy / It provides so many false hopes I no longer employ. / Yellow, that summer friend, a sun I never see / It protects but has never really known me. / Yellow smells of antis• Commented on by judge.
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in the glare of a stalking spotlight impulsively he moves
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Life is tattered / Spirals almost hypnotic / Your still trying to resist it / Strike a match / Burn your house down / Pictures of loved one• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Last Night / A brisk New York night / In front of Rockafeller Center / Watching the ice skaters glide gracefully and not so gracefully / Seby Kaleidoscopeyes 18 lines, 17 comments, on Jun 23 11:54 AM 2007. In Lost love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The Mandrake Devourer grins
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I look back / And wonder if you gave me a sign / That would make me believe / That we weren't friends / I didn't think this is how it would end / But let me just remind you / Of one little thing / I made you whoby me alone 22 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 8 10:37 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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I hate you with all the passion, I hate you so much / I wish that you were dead, I have had enough / I want to see you die, slowly in painby trace3grls 15 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 7 5:28 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You were there / I could see you...touch you...feel you... / I was happy. / Darkness came...swallowed everything... / I couldn't climb out!by Saphiria 20 lines, 11 comments, on May 14 7:44 PM 2007. In i don't know...(yes that is a feeling), Thoughts, Hope, Love, Sad, Personal, Pain• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The outburst / bellowing, / shattering all that's fragile / in his orbit. / The silent / release, / at first climbing emotion, / building iby alexandrathegreat 53 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 11 7:06 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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How could you both be so cruel / How could you both make me choose / And Between the two of you / I love you both very Dear / Friendship now feels like a four letter word / Oh please don't make me choose, I love youby Beverlynohime 6 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 26 9:36 PM 2007. In Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Friendship, Friendships, Choose, lose, Love• Viewed by judge.
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A pink powdered blossom,
Sitting in the rain.by XendlessloveX 26 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 19 10:34 AM 2006• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Thanks for the contest Sam!!
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wow...you busted my contest's virginity...great work
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kay then
wow...you are slightly totaled. think i can talk to you. i want to keep your head on slightly striaght...idk if i can talk sence into you though...
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you can tryyy but i plan on dranken more
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ummm fine...let me talk it up with you.
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talkkk away bbyyy
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I will give this a try on Wednesday.. that is when I will be by a computer again..
Yvonne
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awesome your contest ends the day after my birthday
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nice, no one has entered, and i am adding options. if you could, tell your friends about this plz. thank you.
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you always have the best contest i just never feel like entering anything... well hope u get some good poems...
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dude that sucks. if you come up with anything, feel free
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bookmarked for sure
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thanks. ill be waitng. if you could tell your friends if you can. ive been in a reading mood.
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dont close it early as i'm working on a write for it in a couple choices of options whichever my muse takes me the best xoxox
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just a suggestion, if you want more entries you might want to think about allowing prewrites. i might enter this later, depending how long you keep it open.
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ok, completly considering and i will to it. I had 4 excartions today...and i can talk so much...i would love some readinf time. thanks.
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i will try my best to enter but things are not good on the time scale for being on here at the moment
wishing you lots of luck with the contest
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if you want get well soon. i had 4 teeth out today. so you can put something for me. ttyl?
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yes, you have to include your other entries that you enter though. I feel like it would be unfair to have someone place twice.
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This is a great contest. So many options! I'm very surprised that this contest has not filled up by now. I may even enter myselfTed E
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now it went over and past my birthday LOL
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I forgot about this contest and wanted to write for it...so I will debut my latest love poem here
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I have used option 4 and 5 hope you like
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option 6 soz
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