Seeing as everyone is on a roll with 10 lines...
10 lines that move me...
...Contest will close after 10 entries...
Rules:
Only this image to be used
No erotica
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 10, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 75, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: Thank you for your amazing entries, it was a very hard decision, I pondered for ages, they were all worthy ~Lilac~
Contest Winners
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Oh God / please fabricate a ship for you / well in advance / since very soon you may witness / a gushing flood at your gate / as my new praby PrabhuDayal Khattar 15 lines, 14 comments, on Jun 10 2:37 AM 2007. In Spiritual, Thoughts, Life, Love, Nature, Personal, Pain
Gold trophy winner
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Behind those warm mocha eyes and rosy cheeks / Lies a story of artic chill, / So wintry, so bitter / You can feel the polar ice breaking thby perfectsunset 13 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 10 2:47 AM 2007. In Thoughts, Life
Silver trophy winner
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I wait for you / as the leaves turn green and yellow. / But you do not turn up. / The chills of longingness wash over me / on loving reminiscence of us / holding hands and laughing into the night / and waking to gby crimsondew 9 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 10 2:39 AM 2007. In Sad, Contest, Death, Life, Longing
Honorable mention
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Looking up I see the ice melting, / Slowly she lets me in. / The castle walls melt down around, / Her glistening eyes: mirth. / She laughs softly as I gaze upon, / Lost amid the maze within. / A single tear falls• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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Icy chills fill my senses / freezing with no flinches, / as dripping tears of frozen memories / pass the droplets of life. / cold exterior• Commented on by judge.
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by AliceinPoetryLand 11 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 10 2:30 AM 2007
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I've betrayed my soul, / fighting time to watch / you so far away from me / Through my eyes / I watch the sun set / with my face / turned to oblivion / Karma and napalm drown me / Your shadow plby Hadji Murad 12 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 10 2:51 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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Memorised by this fading snow / that treasures my taunted tears, / the whispers gone since long ago / are returning past all those years. / My frozen tears are melting in the flame / you burnt to the eternity tby Denierim 15 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 10 3:14 AM 2007. In Life, Thoughts, Pain, Hope, My own style• Commented on by judge.
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Thank you for the comment
& Great contest idea you have here! I am glad to have been able to enter it.
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Frozen Tears
The coldness of your shoulder
Just put me in a freeze of time
Thought I would manage to smile
But my lips seem still , eyes cold
So when you look me in my eye
You thought you saw all just glitters
Though my dear,there were frozen tears...
~Sunny.
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Congratulations to the winners and thanks for hosting a wonderful contest.
Gaylene
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Thank you so much for the Gold trophy..It is a a great honor to me..congrats to all other winners as well..
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Thank you very much for the silver trophy! And as well, congrats to the other winners to
I really liked the picture to inspire thoughts; it brought upon different ideas, it was great! Thanks again,
Bella -
Oh wow ~
I missed out on this!
I'll try again next time!
Brother Bear ~
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