Okay..
I just saw this movie called "Mera Pehla Pehla Pyar" - 'Hindi' for "My First Love".. and so here's what you gotta do,..
Write The Most CLICHED First-Love Poem ever..
People, i want a laugh.. help me!
No line limit as such, but if its long, make sure it holds my interest!
PS - Remember, its got to be RIDICULOUSLY CLICHED!!!
I just saw this movie called "Mera Pehla Pehla Pyar" - 'Hindi' for "My First Love".. and so here's what you gotta do,..
Write The Most CLICHED First-Love Poem ever..
People, i want a laugh.. help me!
No line limit as such, but if its long, make sure it holds my interest!
PS - Remember, its got to be RIDICULOUSLY CLICHED!!!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 26, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: sorry am late!! congrats everyone!!
Contest Winners
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You hold the key to unlock my heart. / I can still feel you even when were apart. / Oh my baby how I love you so. / I’ll still be with you• Viewed by judge. [remove]
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I'm as happy as a little lark / Our eyes meet...I feel a spark / How do I love thee?...let me see / I'm so happy that I could pee / You touby YoursTrulyJulie 17 lines, 12 comments, on Jun 10 12:30 AM 2007. In Humor, Weird, Thoughts, Cliche, Contest, Silly
Silver trophy winner
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Come thee, my love, / whom I have loved all my life, / whom I can't live without, no longer. / You have not written back, my love, / my wor• Viewed by judge. [remove]
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As I walk down the hall, / I notice on the floor, / A brown paper envelope, / Sitting inside my sister's door. / Curoisity killed the cat,• Viewed by judge. [remove]
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I remember the moment I first saw your face from across the schoolyard. / The way the sun reflected in your eyes, I swear that at that very moment / I heard the angels singing like they must have on the day the w• Viewed by judge. [remove]
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today's special,dear / its valentine's / the one day ill love u / the one,maybe only,day when ull be mine / i thought id express my love for u / in a way conceived by no other mind / was thnking of taking youby Laughing Buddh 19 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 13 2:26 PM 2007. In Humor• Viewed by judge. [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [16]
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Oh, my golly it's valentines, / And this card I hold says 'Won't You Be Mine' / And I run to mum, then I tell my dad, / This is the bestestby Tiggs 17 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 8 7:22 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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A six year olds love• Viewed by judge.
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No one could ever take your place; / one look - and my heart starts to race. / I'll love you to the bitter end, / all my love to you I send• Viewed by judge.
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Nicotine dreams become the midnight belief as the sugar laced narcotics fade. / Elderberry eyes continue to stalk the blackened horizon as kisses trail like butterflies. / Silken touches spark rainbows; ignited behind silby SummerNightsBleed 13 lines, on Jun 20 11:07 AM 2007• Viewed by judge.
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Don't you love me / like you used too? / You never talk to me / and I'm feeling blue. / Please don't walk away / and leave me alone. / then start running around / like a cyclone, / you are my best friend / S• Viewed by judge.
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I cant live without you / when You left i thought everything was untrue / at first we were stuck together like glue / I thought "what was i going do with out you" / You said u truly loved me / Our love surpassed anyby Cruise 31 lines, on Jun 21 10:02 PM 2007• Viewed by judge.
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Hi, what fun, this I must give a try, so Sunday I will see what I can do, love this idea, hugs Di
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How was da muvie...I wanna watch it too!!!
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i'm chinese and i watch kabhi kushi kabhi kham (however you spell it) it's ma favorite movie!!! xP
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lol mera pehla pyar? haan, i've heard of it. aise movies banti hi kyon hain?
lol kaisi lagi?
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me liked it, rather loved it.. its waaaay cute!!
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Thank You!
Thank you so much for the Honorable Mention; this was a lot of fun! Continued Success, Raiseit -
This contest was really funny. congrats to all the other winners.
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