Tell me, Reflect

This feels like a never ending sunset
Warming my face, calming my tears
Making me forget about everything that is wrong

So can I ask you a question
Why did you walk away?
Did you think that It would break me

Now I'll tell you my side
Before I walk away
Walk away from everything

My tears aren't for you
There for me, and the pain that is you
Like a broken empty bottle on the floor

So my fears wont be the fear of being alone
It'll be the fear that I see you again
Because I will smile, because I know im better

From the blood on my razor blade
To the black in my heart that you left me
Now I am strong, Now I'm ready to move on

I'll hold my head up high
This will be the last time you see me alive
For now I am strong for now I am ready to die

Above is a poem that I've written, its kinda real to
me so please not harsh as your reading it,
what I want for this contest is for you to read it
Think about it, then reflect and write me a response
poem, as if you were my friend and this was my
last letter/poem that I will ever write again before
I die, this is a personal contest, i'm taking this
serious, i havent been myself lately i've been sick
sad and tired

Normal rules apply
No swearing
No caps

Thanks guys

-Kevin

Contest is Over

Contest was judged on June 9, 2007
Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 50, Bronze: 25
Final notes:
Thank you all!!!, this was a wonderful contest and glad that you have all opened your hearts to the fact that pain and saddness in teens is real, great job all

Contest Winners

It's not your Time.

The fire of life, is dimming too low, / but it's not your time, your not ready to go; / We all have our problems be they minor or not, / happiness in this place just cannot be bought. / Suicide is the most selfis

by Griswold 33 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 7 5:10 PM 2007. In Personal, Life, Thoughts, Hope, Spiritual, My life, Contest, Depression, Sadness
Gold trophy winner

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I understand

Life never seems to go the way we want, / I understand. / Things happen to us that should never have happened, / I understand. / But Friend, / This is not the end. / It will get better, / you'll see. / I once

by broken.inside.xx 17 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 7 3:48 PM 2007
Silver trophy winner

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I feel your pain

by TheMoodchangingPoet 33 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 9 12:24 AM 2007. In Personal, Sad
Bronze trophy winner

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