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QUICKIE 5 lines

RAIN

 

A quickie........

 

    

 write 5 lines about RAIN

 

 

but you can not use the word RAIN

 

 *rain maybe used in the title

 

 

 

 give me

Something out of the ordinary..... Something unique...

Be creative, give me amazing imagery, Don't be cliche!!

 

 

 

normal rules apply

 

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on June 17, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 80, Honorable mention: 4 people
  • Final notes:
    Thank you to everyone for the wonderful entries....
    sorry I took sooo long to judge, but the rain fell here, till we got flooded in... soo I am finally back again....

    congrads to all the winners and all the non-placing entries...

    Tracey & Jo

Contest Winners

  1. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3049026, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  2. by -Ink Artist- 13 lines, 9 comments, on Jun 7 7:01 AM 2007. In Contemporary, Life, Thoughts, Nature
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. A splash to curl the parched cracked lip / eyes raised to hallelujah skies, / And rivulets ran in furrowed brows: / A murmured prayer Sahar
    by masterblaster 4 lines, 31 comments, on Jun 7 7:38 AM 2007
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  4. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3048976, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  5. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3049062, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  6. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3049180, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]

Entries [17]

1 - 17 of 17
  • by phoenixonfire 21 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 7 6:25 AM 2007. In Thoughts, Hope
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by azure85 5 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 7 6:35 AM 2007. In Other
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by Shenton 4 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 7 7:00 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • and as I stand in life's cup, / reaching up for faith and love / as water rises at my feet, to float / and grab the very best. Doused / and cleansed by god's drink, / relieved of pain to that I attest.
    by LadyLavender 5 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 7 7:04 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • (Alliteration x Acrostic)
    by Elrenia 14 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 7 7:05 AM 2007. In Nature
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by cLaSsiX 5 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 7 7:15 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Out shopping and down came the shower, / It drenched my dress and my soul, / nothing can be ever so pure / than this pitter patter / up aga
    by crimsondew 4 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 7 7:17 AM 2007. In Life, Thoughts, Nature, Contest
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Tears of sky falls from heaven / Soothing drops make me insane. / Whenever it comes takes all my pain. / Holding the hand of life I accept the blessing / My barren land again turns into green. /
    by Shapla 5 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 7 7:19 AM 2007. In Thoughts, Personal
    • Commented on by judge.
  • give me a thousand drops. / reflections from your pupil eliminate the sky, / you plant your foot, hard like root. / "give me a thousand drops" / and grow.
    by evernot 4 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 7 7:26 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • trickle into a blossoming bloom / drip down to earth's soil / release the pressure of the clouds / pour into a absorbent purity / clea
    by kkatie55 4 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 7 7:37 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Gentle / Pitter Patter / Sating the thirsty ground / Soon beahtiful flowers abound / Pleasing.
    by Billbard 4 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 7 7:31 AM 2007. In Nature.
    • Commented on by judge.
  • The world falls / to wash away these / slow motion nightmares / and extinguish the flame / of damnation
    by Hadji Murad 5 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 7 7:37 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.

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Comments


  • Naridill gold member
    June 7, 2007
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    lol I am sorry, its a little rushed arghy.


  • masterblaster gold member
    June 17, 2007
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    Hi, thank you for the bronze, congratulations to the other winners,Di


  • -Ink Artist-
    June 17, 2007
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    Thanks for the Silver!

    It is very much appreciated. Congrats to all the winners!

    ~Lori ♥


  • Laura Lamarca gold member
    June 17, 2007
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    Thank you for Gold, it's much appreciated Well done to the winners! I hope the flood hasnt caused you too many problems. La x