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Deeper into the Darkness

I want to see your deep dark side. I want blood, gore and death. I want vampires, warewolves, or what else yhou can think of. Give me sexy, give me dark. I want all that kind of stuff.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on June 20, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300
  • Final notes:
    Thank you all for entering and congradulations to the winners. All the entries were a pleasure to read and i enjoyed it very much. Good luck in future contests and good penning to you all.

Contest Winners

  1. White knuckles that pierce at the grip, / Knees contused on a crimson barren slip, / Formulate the scenes behind two caustic eyes, / Weened
    by Saturninity 38 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 19 6:13 PM 2007. In abuse, angst, depression, pain, thoughts, random
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3048820, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  3. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3049536, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]

Entries [12]

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  • by Dante Covington 18 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 6 11:24 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • I am the shadow you cannot see / the cold you cannot feel / I am the hidden between the gaps / I am the creature so real / I feed off all of your pain, / breath from the sight of your death, / just beca
    by Beautifully Poetic 23 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 6 11:37 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Weird
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Deeper into the Darkness I walk / The more I feel the world take toll / THe sun is blocked / And I fall into a never ending hole / My mind
    by Dawn To Come 28 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 7 12:04 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Caress my blood stained teeth / into your innocent proven neck / Lick the remainder off gently / and enjoy it sweetly / Listen to your sexy shreiks / of pain that turns to scars / sip down the lusci
    by skyviewexpress 33 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 7 2:26 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Allow me to enter your mind , It may not be fair, a little unkind, please come to me to UN wind. I lust for your madness, and scream in my
    by lostinthevoid 17 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 8 10:41 AM 2007. In pain, abuse, dark, life, thoughts
    • Commented on by judge.
  • You look at me / What do you see? / An angel, right? / But you have no clue! / Every night I lie awake / Consumed by something I cannot control / I plot my revenge / I strengthen my anger / I plan my
    by AllYoullNeverHave 50 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 9 8:33 PM 2007. In Dark, Other, Pain
    • Commented on by judge.
  • death falls atop my heart / as you slowly walk away / . / . / fading into your shadows / that you leave behind / . / . / remembering the tender / kisses / that we shared / . / . / you left a scar on
    by bluVixon 41 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 16 7:41 PM 2007. In Love, Pain, Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by fierra 26 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 18 5:41 AM 2007. In Dark, Death, Gore...Stupid!!
    • Commented on by judge.
  • The night aproaches five to twelve / The gardens bleeding, First right tells / Our blood flows thick across the valley floor / Innocence has been slain like a dirty whore / Our children lay dead in the fields / By t
    by robert bolin 9 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 18 8:52 PM 2007. In Dark, Pain, Weird, War, Suicide
    • Commented on by judge.
  • the dark dark night falls on him / barren streets of horror screams / I wish to devour your being / he peers into every chilly corner / cries, moans and howling came / sounds of bones breaking and crunchin
    by kkatie55 26 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 19 10:39 PM 2007. In Dark
    • Commented on by judge.

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Comments

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  • partylikearockstar
    June 6, 2007
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    uh....

    hmmm unteresting i duno


  • Crazy-Dan
    June 6, 2007
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    no prewrites?


  • Bohemian Complex
    June 6, 2007
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    Well...

    You should accept prewrites.


    • saartha
      June 6, 2007
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      Or you could write something new. That works, too.


  • Fenrir Rising
    June 7, 2007
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    I was kinda upset that pre-writes were'nt accepted. But i really wanted to enter somthing so I wrote "Crows" this evening just for this contest. It's not only the longest thing i've ever written but it's one of the darkest and vicious things i've written in my own opinion. Tomorrow myself and my guitar player are going to try and get to work and make a song out of it


  • Laura Lamarca gold member
    June 20, 2007
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    Thank you very much for Silver and for the contest! Well done winners! La x


  • badddgirl
    June 20, 2007
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    WOW

    Thank you so very much for the Bronze trophy, I am very glad you enjoyed my poem.


  • Saturninity
    June 20, 2007
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    Yay

    Fun fun. Surprised I got anything heh <3

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