*Yep...don't expect me to be commenting for a little while. I assure you all, I will comment on all of your works. However, at the moment, I am swapped by finals. I shall be a senior soon. So...^_^ Be patient with me. I WILL be commenting soon, though.
I know it is taking forever, just bear with me. There was something I have to do first.
**My bad, y'all. I submitted the contest without telling it when the close date was. Wow. Sorry. ^_^
***Two more weeks for those who didn't get the chance to enter. I have a few days off from work coming up and that's when I'll be commenting on all your wonderful poetry! Thank you for entering, everyone.
All I request from you is that you give me your best and, please, none of the following.
- NoNe Of ThIs No MaTtEr HoW cOoL yOu ThInK iT iS! It's really hard to read, kids.
- No Homosexual Bashing. It's just not nice.
- No Saying How Stupid Someone Else's Religion Is.
- N0n3 0f 7415 31743r. I severely dislike it.
- Have fun and give me your best. This is just round one. Not many points will be distributed but I WILL be commenting.
Good Luck Everyone!! ^_^
**there will be more points/ honorable mentions believe me. I just have yet to earn the points for them.
***15 winners will go on to the next round. ^_^
I know it is taking forever, just bear with me. There was something I have to do first.
**My bad, y'all. I submitted the contest without telling it when the close date was. Wow. Sorry. ^_^
***Two more weeks for those who didn't get the chance to enter. I have a few days off from work coming up and that's when I'll be commenting on all your wonderful poetry! Thank you for entering, everyone.
All I request from you is that you give me your best and, please, none of the following.
- NoNe Of ThIs No MaTtEr HoW cOoL yOu ThInK iT iS! It's really hard to read, kids.
- No Homosexual Bashing. It's just not nice.
- No Saying How Stupid Someone Else's Religion Is.
- N0n3 0f 7415 31743r. I severely dislike it.
- Have fun and give me your best. This is just round one. Not many points will be distributed but I WILL be commenting.
Good Luck Everyone!! ^_^
**there will be more points/ honorable mentions believe me. I just have yet to earn the points for them.
***15 winners will go on to the next round. ^_^
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on January 26, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 10, Bronze: 10, Honorable mention: 12 people
- Final notes: Congrats to all
Contest Winners
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by HeavenScent4U 36 lines, 43 comments, on Aug 26 5:54 PM 2007. In Pain, Personal, Sad
Gold trophy winner
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Kiss me like calligraphy. / Soft and delicate, / Perfection in long swooping lines. / Write me a word, / Then a sentence, / Then a novel. / Crisp ink forming into the paper / and melting pagby mangledDawn 23 lines, 20 comments, on Jun 21 11:01 PM 2007. In Fantasy, Love, Other, Personal
Bronze trophy winner
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we watched you leave as
pieces of our hearts went with youby grannyeri 85 lines, 550 comments, on Apr 10 9:38 AM 2007. In Pain, Personal, Sad, Life, Teen issues, Teenage thinking, Family
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by RIP Whoever 8 lines, 3 comments, on May 10 9:15 AM 2007. In Nature, Love, Picture Inpsired, Quote Inspired Honorable mention
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by -Ink Artist- 34 lines, 19 comments, on Apr 6 10:34 AM 2007. In Personal, Sad, Dark, Life, Thoughts, Marriage, Contemporary Honorable mention
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Evil lives in the skin / As the pen burns / Ink into the grain / Of the paper / Words filter through the mind / Passed down to the hand / Iby The Cube 38 lines, 9 comments, on May 20 6:10 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Dark, Other, Spiritual, Abstract, Weird, Inspirational Honorable mention
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Today I got the postcard you sent in the mail, / the one with the zebras standing in tall, lank grass / and the unsympathetic, saffron sunby redradical 22 lines, 35 comments, on May 24 1:03 PM 2007. In Personal, Love, Hope, Lost love, Longing, Pain, Sadness Honorable mention
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by Olivias Violin 26 lines, 18 comments, on Jun 5 11:59 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I sit and wonder what will happen next. / I sit there and ask myself "why?" / I sit there under the dark moon wodering "why?" / As I lay there under the dark moon, / I hear someone whisper in the darken forest.by Bloody Scars 22 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 1 11:39 AM 2007. In Fantasy, Personal, Thoughts, Weird.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by CitrineSunrise 13 lines, 2 comments, on May 16 5:21 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Silken shadows,
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by Jeneralix 34 lines, 9 comments, on Jun 2 6:38 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Ping pong / Ding dong / The witch is dead / Click your feet and this all will be over. / Tornados tossing houses about! / We’re not in Kansas anymore. / This never would have happened in Colorado. / Fuby Fim Fivver 59 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 16 6:03 PM 2007. In Love, Personal, Life, Weird, Humor, Contest, My own style, My life, Friendship, Anger• Viewed by judge.
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i promise i will never forget / the day we kissed or the day we met / the sky might fall / and the stars might to / but in the end i will still love youby partylikearockstar 4 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 2 8:44 PM 2007. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A Letter To My Daughter
Dear Daughter of Mine,
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He lies awake at night / There is an uneasy tension coursing through his body / When he falls asleep he will have to acknowledge / A pain that can not be forgotten / A vision of you as you are about to take your• Commented on by judge.
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Remember actions have consequences, / That ain't usually good, / So I wish I could feel, / The way that I should, / But I'm sorry I don't,by Ilma 56 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 25 8:02 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I am an empty vessel / My sole purpose intended / For your pleasure / To be used again and again / You clutch me tight while / You reach yoby tigress3737 61 lines, 11 comments, on Jun 19 6:01 PM 2007. In Angst, Abuse, Pain, Personal, Love, Dark, Contemporary, Society• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Floating on a cloud of wonder / Dreaming back to yesterday / Letting go of all I love / Pretending not to be this way / Act as though I won't die inside / Feeling tears upon my skin / Kiss her lips behind the• Commented on by judge.
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Look at what you're doing to me / I can't believe that you can not see / All the things you've taken from me / Helping now to set me free / My peace is found in your eyes / Often so am Iby Tyreta21 79 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 23 6:31 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A opinion I feel stronger than I first realized.by dragon child91 32 lines, 2 comments, on May 25 5:04 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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What to say? / staring at a blank page before me / ideas begin to fill my brain. / One says to write about love, / another other drags me dby Dazed N Life 33 lines, 18 comments, on May 31 5:04 AM 2007. In Expirement, Thoughts, Freewrite, Abstract• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The words slip on the edge of my tongue / My lips, dry and cracked / Shamelessly out of strength / Your heartbroken face / Glows in the darkness surrounding us / Desolate tears fa• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The poison of eternity / Is running through my veins / An emptiness, a hole, a space / That can never be filled / Even love cannot save me / It's full of lies and deceit / Some love me falsly / So the poison neby BeautifulNitemare 27 lines, 6 comments, on May 9 3:10 PM 2007. In Dark, Love, Thoughts, Sad, Pain, Depressed, Loss, Suicide, Anger• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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grey clouds in the skies / provide the raindrops / cascading from my eyes / in my heart there are no lies / today my friend / for you i shed my disguise / insecurities dimming the girby alaskanamber 43 lines, on Jun 19 7:49 PM 2007. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Idle hands, / the devils play / watchlights fade / with night to day / shadows stretched / by dawns first light / reconciled / I face this fight. / A new day comes / unbeckoned time / I'm left to hide• Commented on by judge.
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Jealous of your own words as sickly sweet gerunds slip from your tongue. / Congealed antonyms form in your eyes as the stars fall, / while participles and adverbs dance around the Maypole. / But your words• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The moon
The only light in the skyby mattpak717 24 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 16 1:49 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I was a tiny child / So innocent and mild / You told me to play a game / Did you have no shame / You said not to tell my mother / You said not to tell my dad / You said it• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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My words and feelings, you always help to sort out, that is why you deserve a shout out.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Suna Ketsuma 46 lines, on Aug 8 1:08 PM 2007. In Personal, Thoughts, Life, Weird, My own style, Adult, My life, Lost in thought• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I caught you and keep you / hanging on a string like / a rock / that shines like diamonds / upon my neck. / And I’ve dreamt we’d / run away together and / find a place innocent and experienced where idealiby yellowsub 31 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 27 2:05 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Every night when the sun goes down
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So you think that you know everything about me, / yeah I bet you think that you do, / but I can tell you right now, / that I am nothing froby celticbeauty 40 lines, 6 comments, on May 1 10:38 PM 2007. In Irritation• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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This is kinda a play on a lullaby. every other stanza is part of the lullaby (starting with the second), while the others are part of the pby stop a bullet 51 lines, 11 comments, on Jul 9 8:45 PM 2007. In Sad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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you have to look and see!• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Sighted sounds to scare, / those that do not belong here. / The pack wolf did speak. / Training with a secret tongue, / natives and wilds combine. / Feel the relation. / Braves n• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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She sits all alone at her computer
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by HotRod Woods 19 lines, 9 comments, on Aug 5 6:50 PM 2007. In Shawn Michaels• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Cold winds close around my nose / Causing me to sniffle that song of sneeze. /by trytothink 23 lines, 13 comments, on May 10 10:55 AM 2007. In My own style, Freewrite, Happiness, Abstract, Beat• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Oh dear moon / always in the night / showering the sky with light / Why do you cry? / if you keep everything away from the dark? / beacuse i am only a shadow who appears in the sky / reflecting the light of w• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Dad was just frustrated
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Pretty girl singing swiftly all day
No one has to payby letters to no one 77 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 5 9:37 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The demons fly around in gloom / As I stand near my foaming tomb / Here I stand before myself / In doom I fall with no hand in help / To you my friends I write to you / This ending of my pain /• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I see it all, / I see it in my horror, in my pain, / in the blood throbbing through these veins. / The first splatter of / maroon, then irr• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Screaming on the inside smiling on the out. Life for meby edit my world. 26 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 3 2:07 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by unbroken record 38 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 8 2:37 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Pregnant screaming silence, Filled with sandpaper thoughts, that rub tinder tissues raw.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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O incestuous beast thou eats my flesh. / A pestilence immune / That sleeps with snakes. / I have seen the lifeless eyes of the human farmer and was unscathed. / Yet your eyes are mine own. / A porthby nerd42189 21 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 20 7:02 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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My world is a deep dark red stream of glistening blood. / Everything looks, explosive, frightening and deadly, / As if I am the only blood• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Abiding darkness, / Tunnel of dreams, / Broken… / Freed… / Hand in hand my love, / Towards the light at the end of this carnie road, / The• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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She saw what no one else saw
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In this instance “xy” remaining constant to all life, is the desire to live, The desire to be. All stemming from the time foregone, where much were not measured with awareness. Such be this verity, as still the “Raiby charliewang50 7 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 22 9:42 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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A spurt of pain
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Is there really such a thing As painby Miyuki 39 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 22 1:52 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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You fall in, you have no choice.
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He sits there, on the other side of this screen Can't see my reactions, can't even see my face• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Don't think you can do this to me every time, Grabbing my wrist, chaining me like I've done some crime.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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sounds fun! I am SO entering!!!
thanks for making the fun and exciting contest!
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Thank you so much. I can't WAIT to read it. Good luck!
~Raine~
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wow... there are a LOT of entries
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Yes, there are. Don't let that stop you from entering, though. ^_^ I look forward to each and every entry.
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heyy umm what should I do when i enter a pre-written poem? It won't submit for me or something.
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Damn you have a popular contest... but I love round contests so I'll totally give it a try! Meg
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i dont get what kind of poems we are supposed to enter
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What type of writes are you looking for?
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How many rounds are you planning on having?
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how come these poem say "commented on by judge" yet there are no comments on mine or five others I checked?
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Wow out of over 200 entries, thanks for the gold
Congrats to the winners. be well and be blessed
you mentioned rounds, how, when and where will round 2 begin?
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Thanks for the honorable mention it means the world too me Congrats to all the winners
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Thanks for the honourable mention, much appreciated.
Congratulations to the other winners, this was a great contest.
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Thanks for the HM award. Congrates to all the other winners.
All the best,
~T.S~
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