No Rules No nothing
I feel like my heart has had a jackhammer taken to it. I'm not in love and haven't been for months I just want someone to listen to me and let me do what I do for everyone else.
So Break my heart
Make me cry
Make feel
make me know
that I am not alone in this feeling.
I feel like my heart has had a jackhammer taken to it. I'm not in love and haven't been for months I just want someone to listen to me and let me do what I do for everyone else.
So Break my heart
Make me cry
Make feel
make me know
that I am not alone in this feeling.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 2, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 1 people
- Final notes: I'm sorry this took so long. To make another excuse I was in a car wreck my computers power let got killed by a kid in an airport, I went out of town and then my love life got even worse. I loved all the entries and inorder to get this ended and trophys given out I wasn't able to comment all but I loved reading all the different styles and if I had the points I'd give you all more. The top 3 were hard to choose and it was grulling narrowing it down to 7 but I managed and this is it. Where I close it but thank you all so much.
Contest Winners
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Darling, / I say to you, / it hurts, / it pangs our insides / and we can't stop crying / Blaming yourself / serves no purpose / and neither does / the rapist / Darling, / heal as time passes by,• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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You passed me on the street last week; / didn't even glance my way. / Unaware of the commotion you caused / inside my heart that day. / Wou• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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I feel I'm stranded / in change and broken dreams / I'm a lost wounded soldier / The war lost my self esteem / Isn't it true how a wrong can't make a right / Got nothing to lose but I sure lost the fight / It's aby Tellingstories 40 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 2 7:09 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Silver trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [45]
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It seemed that way, maybe it was yesterday. / Who can remember which came first. / The neglect, the ugly words, or forgot to care / To busy• Viewed by judge.
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I call out “see you around” as if I mean it.
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I remember the summer it continues to flow in my veins / Now all of my summer is fading so far away / A sudden chill coves over me and I begin to pray / Can I make this go even for just one more day / I step outs• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Yes, I’m free to fly now.
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Shaking in the corner, trembling in fear,
Remebering all the pain, over the many years.by trace3grls 19 lines, 12 comments, on Jul 25 6:30 PM 2007. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Sometimes I wonder
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Oh! my heart really chimes / and truly very soft in natural times / becomes very hard at certain sequences / and make me worry a lot in ge• Viewed by judge.
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i still love you / i always have / though i may not have shown it / i always have / your always in my mind / you will always be in my heart / though you left me / though you may not feel the s• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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i lost a friend by my own doing.• Commented on by judge.
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Before the first time we went out I knew how it would be / I could see it right away, your urges to feel free / We went out and had great fun, we laughed and kissed and talked / You showed me round, you took m• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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you've broken my heart / with nothing more than your hands / you've broken my heart / into two shattered pieces / you've broken my heart / like i cant love again / you've broken my heart / as love in this worldby avd-poetry12 19 lines, on Jun 4 11:03 AM 2007• Viewed by judge.
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everyday i'm reminded of you / whether i want to be or not / and each day it happens all over again / my heart bleeding and tearing even more / i cant tell what is and isnt true / all the times, i bought yourby Silent.enigma 32 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 27 9:01 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Cold... / Shaddered, / Torn, / Broken... / One half of my heart / is missing, / the other hangs on... / Desultroy... / I lay on solid gound, / but my mind is floating free. / I'm thinking about you,by shadow cast 46 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 4 1:15 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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I wake up with tears streaming down my face
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Dear Zach, / I know that I've been mean / And I know that I've been avoiding you lately, / But I still love you / Even though to you / We'rby hopes of sorrow 63 lines, 11 comments, on May 19 11:08 PM 2007. In Love, Life, Sad, Thoughts, My life, Friendship, Depression, Longing, Lost love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I'm in love. / Did I tell you last night? / Did I tell you the night before? / No. / I didn't. / I didn't cause I didn't know how you would feel. / The only reason I didn't tell you cause I love you. / No one elby Yours-To-Have 81 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 4 10:52 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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As beautiful as the light may be, it's gotta let you down sometime...by AutumnsFlame 22 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 17 5:28 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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my eyes dried of crying
my heart died of bleeding• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Lost, falling even more... / i felt this way when / you walked through that door / the hurt seemed unbearable then / / Still lost now / doby lidocraziazn 23 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 30 2:58 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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So many things to say and so little time, / Being torn in half is not what I want. / There's so much energy in and out, / What do I do? / Dby XxXxSilentXxXx 22 lines, 5 comments, on May 29 3:12 PM 2007. In Contest, Thoughts, Personal., Freewrite• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Without you,
Words don't come out,
and they don't rhyme• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Above it all it hurts the most
When you know there’s no chance.
No place to belong in their heart.by flaed 30 lines, 8 comments, on Aug 24 6:07 PM 2006• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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Our love is protected forever / by roots that run deep / I shall now, never / let my anger seep / None of my sadness / shall breach our relationship / none of my madness / shall cause me and you to slipby heartsshadow 30 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 4 5:55 PM 2007. In personal• Viewed by judge.
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She'd wake up with his arms covering her.
He was her blanket, her saftey.
He made her feel sure.by Thenicksters 29 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 20 8:25 PM 2007. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
"one last kiss, before I go" / that must have been what was going through your head / before you put that last ounce of hope in my head / and then shattered my heart like it meant nothing to you / I didn't want it to• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The walls smell like bleach, / and the second hand of my watch is reminding me of every second I wasted with you. / My gum has lost it's flavor, / and my fingers smell like stale cigarettes. / The kind we used to smok• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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It doesn’t seem that long ago, / Skies where blue / And I was seven, / Having a blast with my origami aunt. / Everything seemed so perfectby brightXdarkness 36 lines, 6 comments, on May 22 7:47 PM 2007. In Personal, Love, Life, Death, My life, Sadness, Loss, Dedication• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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There is no way I can change,
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if you love them, let them goby SamWBrown 39 lines, 7 comments, on Jan 26 2:51 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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After all the years of being turned to nothing but mere dust underneath a useless purpose / We stumbled upon eachother. / You took your words and planted them in my head. / Words like beautiful, worthy, and love.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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You hurt inside your heart / Because things just untwined / The ground begins to part / And your teeth begin to grind / You strive to stay up straight / To keep you on your feet / The anger and the hate / Yby Jayjaythepoet 34 lines, on Jun 4 12:06 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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When i look into those eyes, its like a lullaby, i get lost into a dream in a deep sleep. they are a mesmerizing gaze into my soul to make me follow you into the darkness.i cant help but know that i can never look into them tby brokenbutbeautiful12 0 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 4 10:15 PM 2007. In broken love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Thank you for the gold trophy and for hosting a great contest. I'm terribly sorry to hear about your run of bad luck. You've certainly had your share of troubles. Keep your chin up it has to get better. Congrats to the other winners. Take care and Have fun. Steve
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