Make me fear your poem. Make it horrifying. Gore Doesnt scare me. Don't make it cheesy. And it's hard to make me fear something. Describe everything. Use that inner Imagery.
Rules:
1. No tYpInG lIkE tHiS
2. anything else goes
Rules:
1. No tYpInG lIkE tHiS
2. anything else goes
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 12, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 60, Honorable mention: 1 people
- Final notes: Thank you to all that entered. I really appreciate it, considering this was my first contest. The entries were all well written and I was inspired in different ways by all of them. Good luck in the future, and keep all your quills moving. ^-^
Contest Winners
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As I pulled up to the house,
it looked dead.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
by -Ink Artist- 48 lines, 25 comments, on Mar 7 8:42 AM 2007. In Dark, Fantasy, Pain
Honorable mention
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The flames raise higher / Lashing at our trapped bodies / The heat burning our skin / The fire encircles us / Their screams pierce my ears
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Spiders crawl from my lips,
Their webs upon my cheeks.• Commented on by judge. [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 2447193, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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Sometimes the slightest movements can cause the most violent reactions...by AutumnsFlame 29 lines, 16 comments, on Apr 16 10:19 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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I had a dream not long ago, yet my eyes were open wide. / I knocked the dust from a little black book, that had long laid on its' side. As• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 3011300, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Entries [20]
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Under the bridge
all is still
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Pleasure drips from my twitching lips. / My victim lays in a blood. / He's eyes still begging for life, / As its mixing with the mud. / My heart beats at my ear drums, / As I watch life ebb away. / The blood• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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one cuss word. this has really scared me before, so... yeah. it should be good.by zhaniswolf 11 lines, 1 comment, on May 30 1:37 PM 2007. In scary• Commented on by judge.
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The sound of thunder hovered through the night
The pacing rain showered down on earth to cleanse it.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The walls opened standing there still, / My eyes wanted to close yet I could not move / Inside I trembled with a cold chill. / My breathing fragmented / Each breath I froze more / There she was standing at the door.by Mickie27 50 lines, 2 comments, on May 30 4:06 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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The scent of decay fills the air
A woman’s intestines lay everywhere• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
BOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!by hopefultragedy 0 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 6 4:32 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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Knives in your back pocket / My back stabbing stanger With all the right lines. / You torture me with whispers / As your breath stays still upon my bones / Paranoia in my flesh. /• Commented on by judge.
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my brother is annoying / my brother is lame / my brother is controlling / my brother has no game / my brother is a little kid / i only have one answer / i'm putting my brother up for bid / does anyone want haveby Travis7 7 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 11 7:17 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Comments
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doesn't horrifying gore scare you?
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Not At all. It takes a lot to scare me. Even Horrifying Gore does nothing.
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Thank you for the silver and for hosting a great contest. Congratulations to the other winners. Take care and Have fun. Steve
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Thanks for the HM!
It is very much appreciated. Congrats to all the winners!
~Lori
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