heyyy! ok well in my last contest i promised more points then i'm giving away right now but hopefully i'll be able to earn enough before the end of it.
anyway heres your options...
1.write a letter/poem to your parents telling them how they screwed up. no happy love parent poems will be accepted. abuse,both mental and physical is more along the lines of what i'm looking for.
2.socity...thin models, sex and drugs, fake people controlling our world.
3.eating disorders
4.cutting and suicide
5.brothers and sisters. this is more of a happy topic but if you REALLY hate your siblings i guess you can write about that.
keep in mind that im only 15, and that i LOVE rhyming poems
anyway heres your options...
1.write a letter/poem to your parents telling them how they screwed up. no happy love parent poems will be accepted. abuse,both mental and physical is more along the lines of what i'm looking for.
2.socity...thin models, sex and drugs, fake people controlling our world.
3.eating disorders
4.cutting and suicide
5.brothers and sisters. this is more of a happy topic but if you REALLY hate your siblings i guess you can write about that.
keep in mind that im only 15, and that i LOVE rhyming poems
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 5, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 1000, Silver: 500, Bronze: 200
- Final notes: Congrats to all
- To judge this contest, you need to have at least as many finalists as you have rewards. You have 3 awards but only 2 finalists.
Contest Winners
Silver trophy winner
Entries [44]
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Watching every move he makes / Slight smile upon her lips / Thinking they'd be great together / Imagining being in his grip. / Aware that she is watching / Knowing every move she makes / Power almost within hby x0xTricia Bugx0x 54 lines, 1 comment, on May 27 7:26 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Peeling off my skin
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Do you controll her... or does she controll you?by AutumnsFlame 36 lines, 20 comments, on Mar 13 4:59 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Oh, my sister / What have you done / Why have you done this / This trouble of yours / This love of yours / Oh, my sister / Was it worth itby writer-of -poems 61 lines, 5 comments, on May 18 4:37 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Judgemental stares cast shadows on the wall / As arrogance makes a hurtful call / One who wears black must want to kill / Murder must giveby Twins 4 me 17 lines, 5 comments, on May 28 12:28 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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I am forever bound to the shattered mirror.
The shattered gleaming blade, once so mesmerizing.
Who knew of the lies, of the sweet elegancby Erin200 9 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 30 6:25 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Staring into the ceiling. / I can't drink enough to escape this feeling. / Empty, forgotten, alone, and hollow, / Could I pop enough pillsby DeathBedLullaby 22 lines, 2 comments, on May 28 1:05 PM 2007. In Dark, Pain, Sad, My own style, Death, Contest, Anger, Hate, Suicide• Commented on by judge.
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Read and you shall understand more than I do.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Piece by piece / My heart breaks, / searching for anwsers / within the breathless walls, / As I pick up my heartless / companion, / In my m• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by be a circle 32 lines, 5 comments, on May 26 9:42 PM 2007. In Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Growing up in a small town many years ago...• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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weak and tired voice
frail in every movementby bleed-it-out 54 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 20 2:02 PM 2006. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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I love you
But enough is enough• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A life of many colors. / Hated by some, loved by others. / A paradise, for a rich man's eyes. / Lust is love in the eyes of lovers. / fake is real in place of mothers. / A violent life till earth's demise. /by yellowrose190 31 lines, 7 comments, on May 29 1:46 PM 2007. In Life, Society, World, Angst, Hate, Thoughts, Rhyme, Song• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Slice / Puke / Slice / Puke / I need to be thin / I need to be beautiful / But I feel there is no way / I slice my body with a blade / in hopes that the things I don't like will justby my-angle 42 lines, 3 comments, on May 30 8:37 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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stab turn
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Who knows who built society / &nbby Hatsuharu32 24 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 28 8:36 PM 2007. In Society• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Sweet, beautiful girl, / Why do you let it consume you? / It feeds off of your soul / Eating it all the way through. / Dear, lonely girl, /by Venusbabi 13 lines, 19 comments, on May 21 7:21 PM 2007. In Eating Disorders• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I thought I could never hate someoneAs much as I hate you
My feelings are of anger and pain Of how I feel Toby trace3grls 16 lines, 10 comments, on Jun 14 5:34 AM 2007. In Dark• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I can see a vast wilderness, completely void of life. The hollow shells of former inhabitants slumber in an infinitely deep sleep. As far as my eyes can see there's desolation and gloom...death a cemetery. Wandering around da• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I'm falling away from the pain / the blood drips silently to the ground / my wrist lays limp upon my side / as my tears create a crying sound. / I hate my life I hate my death but what can I do? / My heartby Fallen Archangel 40 lines, 6 comments, on May 9 11:27 PM 2007. In abuse, dark, life, love, lyrics, other, pain, personal, sad, thoughts• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Hey dad do you remember me, I was once your little girl
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Kicking / Screaming / Crying / Prying / Get your hands off her neck / The vows for better or for worse / didn’t mean you could be her death / Falling / Bleeding / Bloody / Scars / Are all she’lby lost-in-yesterday 28 lines, on Jun 3 1:10 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I'm hurting
I'm cryingby Redtearstains 32 lines, 10 comments, on Jul 22 2:54 PM 2006. In Dark• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Thoughts of death in my mind
darkness surrounds tears flowby umpa lumpa 17 lines, 10 comments, on Mar 22 10:12 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
My addiction
Is as simple as this• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
What have you done, / Did you think it would be fun? / You killed me inside, / but by the rules I tried to abide! / I loved you just like I should, / to take everything back, I wish I could! / Do you k• Viewed by judge.
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Once again he puts me down, / makes me feel like I'm nothing at all, / and so the razorblade becomes my friend, / it helps to take away the• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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how did you feel when you kicked me to the mud
what went through your mind as you hit me so hard you blackened my eyes• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Soon I shall take my last breath,
And take my toll upon death,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
little girl, meek and mild, / always such an innocent child. / But what changed her? / Her mother and father? / The drugs she does? / The guy she loves? / Was it the slits in her wrists, / that ma• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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how many entries are we allowed to enter? <3
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as many as you want.
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Thank you very much for bronze! And congrats to the other winners =)
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Wow, thank you so much for the gold! It was totally unexpected and I am so honoured! 
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