Ok, I want you to write me a song. Make me emotional. Make me angry, sad, depressed, anything.
I will raise the points if someone can make me cry. I am not the kind of girl that cries easily...it takes a LOT, so if yo can cry, I'll give you an automatic 50 points.
I am going to list some things that make me emotional to help you out, but kudos to the person that writes about something not on my list and wins!
RULES:
1) NONe oF ThIS!!!
2) swear if you must, but if it isn't needed...don't do it. The most you'll get out of me with constant swearing is a little bit of eye rolling and a lot a bit of ignoring.
3) Don't use this as an opportunity to start hating on someone. it isn't needed.
4)Don't even break my rules in the slightest way.
Emotion:Love
Cause: something totally romantic, Roses, proposals, innocence, Angels, the ocean
emotion: Anger
Cause: Abuse, double-faced people, lies, guys who cheat on girls, girls who cheat on guys
Emotion: pity
Cause: A child getting hurt, an animal getting hurt, a girl cheating on a guy, a guy cheating on a girl, marriage gone wrong, guys who don't show up at their own wedding
Emotion: depression/sadness
Cause: seeing people stuck in a loop of a bad habit that they keep trying to get out of but just can't.
[i.e. my best friend is has been trying to leave her gang life behind for years and no matter how far she gets from it, she never truly wins against it. recently she has given in to it and has decided to stop fighting the things that seem to control her life. This makes me very very sad/depressed.]
Songs that get my emotions going:
**Alyssa Lies-Jason Michael Carrol(love/pity)
American Dream-Casting Crowns(understanding/pity)
Backseat of a Greyhound Bus-Sara Evans(love/pity/understanding)
**Butterfly Kisses-Bob Carslisle(Love/Understanding)
**I Tried-Bone Thugs n harmony FT Akon(depression/sadness)
Yo(Excuse me miss)-Chris Brown(love)
Crawling-Linkin Park(understanding/pity)
Good Directions-Billy Currington(love)
Numb-Linkin park(understanding/pity)
Single-Natasha Bedingfield(understanding)
Sk8ter Boi-Avril Lavigne(understanding)
**Ladies Love Country Boys-Trace Atkins(Love/understanding)
Young Love-The Judds
Whiskey Lullaby-Brad Paisley(pity)
Why Can't I-Liz Phair(love)
There are many, many more songs, so let me know if you want some more...these are just random songs. The ones with the stars beside them are songs that touch me the most.
Write me a love song, write me anything! just move me.
OK, CHANGE IN PLANS. I DIDN'T EXPECT SUCH AN OUTCOME, SO I HAVE PUT A LIMIT ON HOW MANY POEMS MAY BE ENTERED BEFORE I SHUT DOWN.
ONLY 50 ENTRIES MAY BE MADE.
I will raise the points if someone can make me cry. I am not the kind of girl that cries easily...it takes a LOT, so if yo can cry, I'll give you an automatic 50 points.
I am going to list some things that make me emotional to help you out, but kudos to the person that writes about something not on my list and wins!
RULES:
1) NONe oF ThIS!!!
2) swear if you must, but if it isn't needed...don't do it. The most you'll get out of me with constant swearing is a little bit of eye rolling and a lot a bit of ignoring.
3) Don't use this as an opportunity to start hating on someone. it isn't needed.
4)Don't even break my rules in the slightest way.
Emotion:Love
Cause: something totally romantic, Roses, proposals, innocence, Angels, the ocean
emotion: Anger
Cause: Abuse, double-faced people, lies, guys who cheat on girls, girls who cheat on guys
Emotion: pity
Cause: A child getting hurt, an animal getting hurt, a girl cheating on a guy, a guy cheating on a girl, marriage gone wrong, guys who don't show up at their own wedding
Emotion: depression/sadness
Cause: seeing people stuck in a loop of a bad habit that they keep trying to get out of but just can't.
[i.e. my best friend is has been trying to leave her gang life behind for years and no matter how far she gets from it, she never truly wins against it. recently she has given in to it and has decided to stop fighting the things that seem to control her life. This makes me very very sad/depressed.]
Songs that get my emotions going:
**Alyssa Lies-Jason Michael Carrol(love/pity)
American Dream-Casting Crowns(understanding/pity)
Backseat of a Greyhound Bus-Sara Evans(love/pity/understanding)
**Butterfly Kisses-Bob Carslisle(Love/Understanding)
**I Tried-Bone Thugs n harmony FT Akon(depression/sadness)
Yo(Excuse me miss)-Chris Brown(love)
Crawling-Linkin Park(understanding/pity)
Good Directions-Billy Currington(love)
Numb-Linkin park(understanding/pity)
Single-Natasha Bedingfield(understanding)
Sk8ter Boi-Avril Lavigne(understanding)
**Ladies Love Country Boys-Trace Atkins(Love/understanding)
Young Love-The Judds
Whiskey Lullaby-Brad Paisley(pity)
Why Can't I-Liz Phair(love)
There are many, many more songs, so let me know if you want some more...these are just random songs. The ones with the stars beside them are songs that touch me the most.
Write me a love song, write me anything! just move me.
OK, CHANGE IN PLANS. I DIDN'T EXPECT SUCH AN OUTCOME, SO I HAVE PUT A LIMIT ON HOW MANY POEMS MAY BE ENTERED BEFORE I SHUT DOWN.
ONLY 50 ENTRIES MAY BE MADE.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 16, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 3 people
- Final notes: Unless you have run a contest that returned dozens of AWESOME poems [or in this case songs] you can not possibly know how hard this was to judge.
EVERYBODY entered REALLY good poems/songs.
This was not a talent contest...this was whatever moved me the most. It took forever for me to decide though...
Thanks to everybody that entered!! If I had enough points, I would award all yall.
Contest Winners
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Can you see my tears form in black? / Can you see happiness is what I lack? / This is my life by misery it runs / Until my final breath is• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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My nativity my parents repent / For it interferes with their fecund fun. / In liquescent lust / The dissipated dissolutes / Pair up afresh / For passing pleasures. / No bond endures / Save their lewd lby karabi 51 lines, 22 comments, on May 27 6:49 PM 2007. In Childrens, Contemporary
Silver trophy winner
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There was love and a lulluby / A blatent promise to fate defy / There were two lives that fit together / But they were not ready for stormy weather. / and the rain beat down / and floodwaters rose / we give i• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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I was your tear for a day / I was the meaning of your pain / I was reminded that the same / Thing would become of me / Over and over / But before I could see / Your beauty crept into me / And made it's home• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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(verse 1) / She never takes off her wedding ring / Even though he left 5 years ago / She won't come out and spread her wings / Her feet never leave the ground / As the tears start to fall, she stares at the waby Twins 4 me 42 lines, 6 comments, on May 27 6:32 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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I'm sitting here and thinking / Of all the times we shared / Every moment is so crystal clear / Like the photos in the album book / The treasures in the chest / There are times that I just want you• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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Loving you / Is killing me. / But there ain't no other place I'd rather be. / I would die / For you, you see. / Loving you / Is killing me.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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I know it looks long, but it really isn't. It's a song with lots of spacing. (my first lyric)• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Verse 1: / Life goes round and round / These roads all lead back into my town / No matter where I go or where I roam / I have yet to find a place that isn't home / I didn't have much chance before birth / I triedby Brian A 81 lines, 13 comments, on May 27 6:46 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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My darling, my heartbeat, my joy, my all / I'm sending you my love song, hear it's call / I want you to know how deeply I love you / That's why I'm sending• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Honorable mention
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Thousands of stars fill the sky tonight / As thoughts of him fill my mind / And I wonder if I've finally found / what I've tried so hard to find. / We inch closer to one another / and• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Hollow lullabies, / null me to my own sleepless nights, / clutching to my pillow, / as the world revolves around me. / beautiful incantations, / as you speak my name, / twirling stars, / swirling crested wa• Commented on by judge.
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The bitter taste of a love now gone,
Dances on my tongue,by Flightless Raven 48 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 24 5:36 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Our race has been run~ / the countdown's begun; / so little time left, / too late to keep you safe from harm. / It starts the moment you're• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A song that i wrote when i thought me and my boyfriend were going to break up over my ex.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Oh, my sister / What have you done / Why have you done this / This trouble of yours / This love of yours / Oh, my sister / Was it worth itby writer-of -poems 61 lines, 5 comments, on May 18 4:37 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Daniel Hernandez / I entrusted you with the only key to my heart / To watch you open me up so you could rip it apart / And I want you to know / You were the first of us to let go / Now dont come crawlin backby just daniel 40 lines, 3 comments, on May 31 12:10 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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WOW. There are a LOT of songs here!!!!
This is gonna be HARD! -
I know I haven't judged yet, but I am working on it! Please be patient, guys! Thank you.
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Congrats to all winners and thank you for the HM! I'm glad you liked my poem.
Annie 
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Thanks for the Bronze and the points. Well done to all the other winners and hope to see you guys around later!!!
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