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Ages 13 and Under Only ~ Pick a Title and Roll With it 2

This contest is for ages 13 and Under ONLY (all other entires will be removed without notice)

Pick one of the following titles and write a poem inspired about it.
You must use the title for your poem.


Titles:

 

Jiffy Pop

Mountain Dew Sunrise

Dove Elegance

Cremesicle Charade

Leap Frog

Hop Scotch

Jelly Bean Antics

Fortunately Sane

Champagne Fountain

Insanity Reigns

Cheap Shot

Rhythm of Sadness

Jovial

Demented Rainbows

Unjust Altercations

Hippy Dance

Dirge of the Black Rose

Electric Hollow

Zesty Scents

Misunderstood

Hollow Essence

Nivana



About the judging:

We realize that you all do vary in age. So, your poems will be judged on the following things AND we will also take your age into consideration so that the judging remains fair and unbiased.



1) The form of poetry you've chosen.

2) The length of the poem (was it too short/long to make your point)

3) Capitalization/punctuation/grammar/spelling

4) How well your poem fit with the guidelines of the contest

5) The creativity of your poem

PLEASE TYPE YOUR AGE IN YOUR AUTHOR'S NOTES!  Thanks.


Rules:



1) Please make sure we can read your poem!

  Distracting backgrounds or hard to see fonts are not good.

  We want to see your poem, not your background.



2) Be sure your language is appropriate for young .

We should have to say it, but no profanity or "adult" topics.



3) Dark poetry is fine if you want to write it, but suicide or

self-harm topics will not be accepted.


That's it. Have fun and Good Luck!

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on June 14, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 3 people
  • Final notes:
    Wow! You all did a wonderful job on these entries. It wasn't easy to pick the winners so we've decided to award some Honorable mentions as well. Keep in mine you are all winners in our eyes and each entry was a good one and we hope to see you all next contest

    This time the trophies go to:


    1st - Jellybean Antics
    by fur elise

    2nd - Jovial
    by Jordan Lamarca

    3rd - Fourtunaley sane
    by KonoichiOkami

    Honorable Mentions go to:

    Cheap Shot
    by free2bfly

    Hippy dance
    by whatever girl

    ~Fortunately -- Sane~
    by RIP

    Congrats to everyone on a job well done!

Contest Winners

  1. I got a big bag of jellybeans to eat / From that old candy store, my special treat - / But to my bewilderment and surprise, / The jellybean was dancing before my eyes! / He was doing the twist and the jerk, too,
    by riasme 27 lines, 9 comments, on May 28 3:18 PM 2007. In Jellybeans, Pain, Ouch, Digestive System, Esophagus, Dancing
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Oh! What fun it is to be a child, / to run around and to just be wild, / on happy days, in sunshine mild, / just to be innocent deep inside
    by Jordan Lamarca 9 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 8 2:14 PM 2007. In Childrens
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. I'm / Inside / Asylum / For the insane / But I am alright / Because fortunately / I am altogether sane / I will not be influenced by / The
    by The Reapers Angel 20 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 4 1:19 PM 2007
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. The ticks and the tocks cheap shot, / The pain of the rocks cheap shot. / The ball was in your court, the rod in your hand, / Yet you still
    by free2bfly 59 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 7 8:47 PM 2007. In cheap shot, loser, life isnt fair, life, isn't, fair, love, break-ups, tears, sad, anger, pa
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. My friend was doing a silly dance / I asked what it was called / he said it was a hippy dance / but he was shiny bald / He taught me how it
    by whatever girl 16 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 2 5:43 PM 2007
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. by RIP Whoever 27 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 1 7:12 PM 2007. In Weird
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [15]

1 - 15 of 15
  • He left me there standing / all alone in the dark / blood streaming down my face / His words stung like a poison dart / strait at my heart
    by i love teddybears 33 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 2 7:06 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • I dreamed, last night, / About a young girl, / On a scary flight, / Through the sunrise. / She flew through the mountains, / And below her, she saw, / A mountain dew fountain, / Then she broke the law. /
    by blablablooey12 25 lines, 6 comments, on May 28 9:34 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Rythm of Sadness / Sitten in classes. / Making this Sadness. / Hoping I get out / and be free! / Rythm of Sadness / in my heart. / wishin'
    by Miss Chievous 15 lines, 9 comments, on Jun 7 2:36 PM 2007. In Childrens, Hope, Sad
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Sometimes I act crazy. / I may a little too hyper. / You may think that I act like I need to wear a diaper. / But I'm just being me, me, me
    by XxXNoxiousRoseXxX 28 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 6 7:01 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Weird, Other, Childrens, Humor
    • Commented on by judge.
  • The rythm of saddness is a slow one, / you must move slow when you can't see through your tears. / Even though you want to run as fast as you can; / you want to run away from the pain. / The rythm of sadness is a
    by XxXNoxiousRoseXxX 36 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 6 7:28 PM 2007. In Angst, Hope, Love, Other, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge.
  • The hollow of essence, the air of life that pulls on the strings / From the hollow creatures appear. Things not of this world swirling around through the magic and chaos, swords and fight battles and wars things / Uni
    by Sle3p 5 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 8 2:50 PM 2007. In Weird, Other, Nature, Lost in thought, Contest, Freewrite
    • Commented on by judge.
  • the birds sing in thier birdnest / the animals play and run wild / the deer likes the forest / they cant ever try to smile
    by nelly12 3 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 8 4:39 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • One, two, three, four, / The pebble bounces on the floor. / Five, six, seven, eight / The chalk and tennis shoes debate. / Nine, ten, here we go, / The tennis shoes skip to and fro, / Eleven, twelve, the whis
    by riasme 9 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 9 8:12 AM 2007. In whee, kids, hopscotch, fun fun, yaay, awesome, contest, playground, recess
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Demented rainbows are a terrible thing / So why don't you cheer up and start to sing / After the 'ding' / The rainbows will be deme
    by Judo 35 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 9 3:00 PM 2007. In Sad, Dark, Nature, Humor, Fantasy, Message, Inspirational
    • Commented on by judge.

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  • riasme
    May 28, 2007
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    any chance you can enter more than once? snicker


  • smntha.
    May 28, 2007
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    just because we're 13 and under doesn't mean we want titles like:

    Jiffy Pop

    Mountain Dew Sunrise

    Dove Elegance

    Cremesicle Charade

    Leap Frog

    Hop Scotch

    Jelly Bean Antics

    Hippy Dance


    Titles like this make some of us feel like you think we're still kids and we aren't. That's my take on all this. If I've offended you, I'm sorry. I just wanted to share my point-of-view.


    • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
      May 29, 2007
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      Ah, well I'm sorry you don't like them. But not ALL the poets are 13. We have quite a few that are 10 and under, as young as 5 so we have to try and cater to everyone, not the 13 year olds only. Perhaps we should go back to leaving it to 12 and under poets only??


    • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
      May 29, 2007
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      It's fine to share your point of view. That is why there are other titles there as well.


  • Sle3p
    June 8, 2007
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    hear, you mean here,warrior poet


  • seraphim shock
    June 9, 2007
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    wow.... great prompts.... it's hard to believe that in less than a month, i'll be too old to do this contest. but for now, i'll see if i can drag something out of my writers-blocked mind....

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