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SCARE ME TO DEATH

this is my first contest!
I want something bloody, & VERY DARK. Imagery is important in this contest. describe images i can never forget.
I haven't been scared since forever...nothing really scares me anymore. I want you to change that.

make me so scared i have to pee with the door open. lol

(I love zombies) just an idea something to help you try to win.

RULES:
-no erotica!
-keep the cussing to a minimum.
-no dirty pretty..
-write me a small note to me in your author's notes. I'd appreciate that. (Dear Christina,) IF YOU DON'T HAVE THAT FOR ME I WILL DQ YOU!
-maximum 65 lines. I get bored very easily! unless the poem is really good...you can go up to 75.
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the poem can be written in any form. GOOD LUCK!
you can have as many entries as you want. just make sure their good.

NOTE;; I will be deleting finalists as I continue reading them. if they keep giving me chills everytime i read them, then you'll stay on.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on June 6, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 65, Bronze: 45, Honorable mention: 2 people
  • Final notes:
    Thank you everyone who entered this contest! It was VERY DIFFFICULT TO JUDGE OVERALL, because they were all so good! Now i have to pee with my door open after reading all of these! lol. congradulations to all the winner && thanks again to everyone who enter!
    ___thelovesongwriter

Contest Winners

  1. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2979652, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  2. Bloodlust / He slowly climbed the old splintered steps. / Each one with a piercing
    by Ktulu Blackwolfe 25 lines, 48 comments, on Jul 25 6:22 PM 2006. In Dark
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. by Fenrir Rising 44 lines, 16 comments, on Jun 3 10:54 PM 2007. In Abuse, Angst, Dark, Erotica, Fantasy, Love, Lyrics, Other, Pain, Personal, Sad, Rage
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. Ooze like blood slithers, in a drip like motion / Seeping passed dry and cracked, / saliva deprived lips / Absorbing into her inner mout
    by Clinging-to-Life 34 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 24 11:11 AM 2007. In VERY DARK......(twisted)
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. by JeannieD Hunter 45 lines, 15 comments, on Aug 30 11:28 PM 2006. In Adult, Dark, Angst
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  6. Pleasure drips from my twitching lips. / My victim lays in a blood. / He's eyes still begging for life, / As its mixing with the mud. / My heart beats at my ear drums, / As I watch life ebb away. / The blood
    by yellowrose190 21 lines, 6 comments, on May 29 5:45 PM 2007. In Murder, Dark
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [22]

1 - 22 of 22
  • Screaming in anguish for salvation.-Guinea Pig
    by Bethany Rose 23 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 4 4:08 PM 2006. In Sad, Dark, Holocaust
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • scents of the dark moonlight / brush into the depths of my darkening soul / it whispers reasurrance into my bleeding eardrums / i upchuke the sins of my upbringing / enlighting every creature around / fear pick
    by bloodpoet13 40 lines, 2 comments, on May 27 7:43 PM 2007. In dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • This one day I got so pissed it just wasn't funny and this is what happened....
    by mystical illusions 13 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 9 4:46 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • darkest little things, / a torment to those who care, / an embracement of the pain, / our sickest mind cannot understand. / held down by ou
    by Gay-Militant 60 lines, 3 comments, on May 28 5:44 PM 2007. In Droning on about what it really feels to be depressed
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Oh no my sweet
    You won't be leaving soon
    by Trixie08 42 lines, 14 comments, on Dec 16 5:32 PM 2006. In Dark, Angst, Death, Murder
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • The taste of blood / The broken bones / Pacing floors; / Upon all fours. / Terrified and trembling. / Hearts are pounding. / Their broken now; / Pieces scattered all on the ground. / Taken time / It's j
    by joleahe 30 lines, 3 comments, on May 29 3:44 PM 2007. In Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • My bloody hand holds the knife, / the one that caused the death. / My long blond hair is matted, / My eyes prove I'm on meth. / The corpse lay before me, / A simple work of art, / The ashen face turned toward
    by yellowrose190 27 lines, 3 comments, on May 26 7:06 PM 2007. In Murder, Weird, Dark, Crazy
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • this is the hatred in me, cause all the F*cking stupid poeple in my life.
    by KristyBrainsikk 22 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 30 8:57 PM 2004. In Weird, Abuse, Dark
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • the hatred falls
    to my spine
    by KristyBrainsikk 8 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 25 2:57 PM 2004. In Angst
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • by NickelleteXninja 32 lines, 20 comments, on May 30 7:47 AM 2007. In Spiritual, Adult, Life, Other, Death
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • A killer I will be / But only when the time comes / I look out and see all there is / All I've become / I run away, I'm afraid / Of what cr
    by NickelleteXninja 31 lines, 21 comments, on Jun 1 11:35 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • My anger and hate continues to grow / My pulse, my heartbeat only grows slow / My eyes burn a fire so filled with regret / Soon by the end of the day, the devil will be scared, I bet / My heart is hollow / My rage i
    by Vars 11 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 5 5:19 AM 2007. In Anger
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Another episode's starting, another time of weakness.
    A weakness so devastating because she knows she can't prevail.
    by Susie Statutory 35 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 24 5:16 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • The full Moon aura-ed in the very misty, dark, night sky
    Goodness had finally, pompously kissed it's divine, arse, bye, bye
    by Georges 49 lines, 23 comments, on Mar 25 5:34 PM 2005. In Spiritual, Dark, Hope
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Upon the walls / everywhere i see / they are there / i think i'm loosing the control / that situation has smothered my head / it cannot be
    by Twilight Walker 36 lines, 14 comments, on May 7 7:15 PM 2007. In Dark, Spiritual, Death
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite

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  • sweetpearl
    May 27, 2007
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    I wish I were feeling up to writing something fresh because people tell me I'm good with people scary ... well at least fucked up. I don't like entering prewrites.


  • Never-Loved13
    June 4, 2007
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    hope u like my poem

    it's not really scarey but i hope u like it


  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    June 8, 2007
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    Thank you very much for the silver and congrats to the winners