Hello people!
I was bored and have points that I'll never use, so here we are! Just give me your best portey. BUT! IT CANNOT HAVE WON ANYTHING ON THIS SITE!!!! Lol, I dont wanna get a poem that has been etnered in 12 contests; catch my drift? ^.^ Sorry, I'm hyped up on coffee. BWAHAHA.
So yeah, write about whatever you want. I encourage you to write something new instead of entering a prewrite. But, its your choice.
The wonderful rules that everyone loves!
1. Please keep in mind I'm 15.
2. Do ThIs AnD i'Ll HaVe YoUr HeAd!
And yeah, thats pretty much it.
Oh, I'll be adding more points as soon as I get em!
Oh yeah... this is an an anonymous contest. I may not comment till after the contest. So yeah. DONT RUIN IT!!!! I WANT TO EB ABLE TO CHOOSE BASED ON THE QAULITY!!! ^.^
UPDATE:
I was a bit overwhelmed by entires, so I'm having my wonderful AP sis Jenralix help me judge. Therefore, if you dont get a comment from me its probably because you got one from her. ^.^ good luck!
I was bored and have points that I'll never use, so here we are! Just give me your best portey. BUT! IT CANNOT HAVE WON ANYTHING ON THIS SITE!!!! Lol, I dont wanna get a poem that has been etnered in 12 contests; catch my drift? ^.^ Sorry, I'm hyped up on coffee. BWAHAHA.
So yeah, write about whatever you want. I encourage you to write something new instead of entering a prewrite. But, its your choice.
The wonderful rules that everyone loves!
1. Please keep in mind I'm 15.
2. Do ThIs AnD i'Ll HaVe YoUr HeAd!
And yeah, thats pretty much it.
Oh, I'll be adding more points as soon as I get em!
Oh yeah... this is an an anonymous contest. I may not comment till after the contest. So yeah. DONT RUIN IT!!!! I WANT TO EB ABLE TO CHOOSE BASED ON THE QAULITY!!! ^.^
UPDATE:
I was a bit overwhelmed by entires, so I'm having my wonderful AP sis Jenralix help me judge. Therefore, if you dont get a comment from me its probably because you got one from her. ^.^ good luck!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 2, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: Okay, this is the 3rd time im filling this out lol. evil wrong button! Anyway! I want to thank you all for your entries. Not only was I suprised by the number, but by the quality of each one. they really were ALL fantastic. If you didnt recieve a comment from me, I'm really sorry. I just havent had the time, or strength to do that for each poem. But I did read them ALL carfully, and thought about each one. I'd like to give a special thanks to my AP Sis Jeneralix, for helping me judge this. I would have been overwhelmed without you!
Incredible job. You're all amazing writers.
Love Always,
Kara
Contest Winners
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You go to sleep at night, and wake up in a dream.
A world so full of fantasy, nothing is as it seems.by goalsv 26 lines, 15 comments, on Feb 12 3:54 PM 2007. In Fantasy, Childrens, Inspirational
Bronze trophy winner
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they say love hurts
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Evil lives in the skin / As the pen burns / Ink into the grain / Of the paper / Words filter through the mind / Passed down to the hand / Iby The Cube 38 lines, 9 comments, on May 20 6:10 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Dark, Other, Spiritual, Abstract, Weird, Inspirational• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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By gifted powers, properly used / let mountains crumble, the Earth left ruined; / with a fragile hand and a subtle glace, / within a woman’s eyes, a devilish dance. / Political influence has scarcely a time, / to peby Alainn 32 lines, 1 comment, on May 23 9:35 PM 2007. In inspirational• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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The rain plays a melody against my window / joining in the song of loneliness / adding to the mood of the downhearted / the heavens open up in solidarity of my pain / Take another sip from my dark red wine / thby martinezjjoe 24 lines, 2 comments, on May 26 11:10 AM 2007. In Lyrics, Nature, Pain, Personal, Sad, Spiritual, Thoughts, Love, Life, Hope, Dark• Viewed by judge. [remove]
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Gold trophy winner
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It scares me to think of / that abused little girl. / You live in your world / and she is tortured in hers. / Today you passed by her, all bruised and scared. / Should I talk to her? Should I help her? / I don't kby allygurl 26 lines, 2 comments, on May 17 12:32 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A poem for understanding hearts.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Glasyalabolas 54 lines, 17 comments, on May 25 5:27 PM 2007. In Personal, Thoughts, Hope, Spiritual, My life, Lost in thought, My own style, Longing• Viewed by judge.
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My fingers to your lips, / The feel they bring to my heart, / As you lean closer to me, / As I melt inside and as I fall apart. / You hands reach to my back, / I don't know what to do, / I smile up at you jokby DestinyGets-Nervous 39 lines, 4 comments, on May 19 9:30 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I lived once / Remember those days? / Back when bikes were cool / So long ago, that was / When dropping the F-bomb / Meant that you were / Grounded for life / It was so long ago / When food was deliveredby Myao 30 lines, 1 comment, on May 25 12:46 PM 2007• Viewed by judge.
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Nature's cold breath rests on window pane
Frosty formations are bornby Twins 4 me 11 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 20 9:35 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
But on that day, something terrible befell me;
A horror so horrible that I would still turn and flee!
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As the children prepare for Christmas and the toys they want
It’s a joy to watch as they help put the tree up and decorate it• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
i like sitting in the kitchen late at night
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the reason that / i bug you / is so that you will / pay attention for a second or two / your beauty / i cannot get out of my mind / withoutby Thesilentwatcher 43 lines, 6 comments, on May 24 3:06 PM 2007. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I opened up my eyes this morning / Didn't know where the hell I was. / Head like the woods on fire, / My brain all wrapped up with fuzz. /by Bad Mojo7 46 lines, 34 comments, on May 28 11:00 AM 2007. In Contemporary, Dark, Life, Lyrics, Other, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Addiction• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Your burning eyes
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"War" is the story of adolescence...• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Standing on the porch when I get a phone call / It's my brother saying he has a problem, but it's smallby Thomas Crow 16 lines, 5 comments, on May 24 11:29 PM 2007. In Family• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Temptress unfurl our melancholy midnight fate• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Hiddenspaces 4 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 18 10:37 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Young in age, / mature at heart, / eyes full of tears, / heart torn apart. / Confessions of love, / feeling replaced, / deathly heartbeats,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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You came in the calm. / Pages of weary, cages of fury; / All you wanted was to have some fun. / You framed maelstrom. / Boughs of conflict, avowed to constrict. / Your presence had me caught in siphon. /• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The waves crashing upon the rocky shore / A princess sits staring at the sea she adores / Her prayer is for Neptune God of the sea / Who is• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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With that sly whiskey sour grin.
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Druggie....
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You dare to look me straight in my eyes,
Flowing out is all of your lies.by Desiree-Valdez 18 lines, 17 comments, on Feb 12 10:30 PM 2007. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Science Vs. God / I sit in a chair, / That becomes less and less ergonomic. / Flipping through pages of textbooks. / I look for the answer to an impossible question. / Why do people act without compassion /by SmileFromGlasgow 45 lines, 4 comments, on May 26 8:47 PM 2007• Viewed by judge.
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My life is often a volume of grief
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The tree, an oak, its bark molested
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The farmer sows seeds
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by Sapphire Rose 30 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 7 9:15 PM 2006. In Sad• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I know entering prewrites is minus brownie points.
But i just want to get these poems out. people need to wake up and realize these things about the world. So even if they dont win, just read them.
And if you decide 1 poem per person, just take out the one of mine you like the least.
thanks. enjoy.
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No problem. Ad you can enter as many as you like ^.^
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Well... ok, maybe 3s the limit lol
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The person below me is my hero, I was gonna say the same thing pretty much. Great contest, and good luck to everyone! :]
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