We see these all the time, but I'm convinced that they're never exactly a waste of time.
We've managed to master the talent of compressing words down to a poetry form, but how many out there have the talent to compress all their thoughts into a single sentence?
Rules:
1) NoNe oF ThIs.
2) Swearing and adult subjects are just fine, I'm 18.
3) I like spelling and grammar, but as long as it looks like you tried, I don't care.
4) Please, oh please, enter as many times as you want.
I'll do my best to comment on every single entry, and it'd be nice if everyone could comment on at least one of someone else's works.
I'll definitely be adding more points as things move along.
We've managed to master the talent of compressing words down to a poetry form, but how many out there have the talent to compress all their thoughts into a single sentence?
Rules:
1) NoNe oF ThIs.
2) Swearing and adult subjects are just fine, I'm 18.
3) I like spelling and grammar, but as long as it looks like you tried, I don't care.
4) Please, oh please, enter as many times as you want.
I'll do my best to comment on every single entry, and it'd be nice if everyone could comment on at least one of someone else's works.
I'll definitely be adding more points as things move along.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 28, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: Congrats to all
Contest Winners
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Always be nice to your enemies; nothing annoys them so much.by MerelyMadness 0 lines, 5 comments, on May 24 7:47 PM 2007. In Humor, Personal
Bronze trophy winner
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My soul's carcass is curled within death's womb,• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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I am like dusty coal, being transformed by excruciating pressures over time into something of greater value; my imperfections give me a lower jeweler’s grading, but colors the unflawed stones lack.• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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In the swirling abyss of black oblivion, purpose is discovered.• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Silver trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [42]
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I wonder how long semi colons can prolong this sentence; when a tree falls in the hundred acre wood, will pooh, preoccupied by his killing spree hear it when no one else was around; i love pancakes and anything pan cakkity; sby jimbob06 0 lines, 3 comments, on May 24 10:49 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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by Pink Absinthe 2 lines, 8 comments, on May 16 1:22 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Unable to retreat to the confines of my mind, so paved they are of insanity and uncertainty.• Commented on by judge.
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"One of these days you're going to start bleeding and here's a book on the subject, go read it."by exoticbeaches 0 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 1 6:00 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Endless fearby exoticbeaches 9 lines, 7 comments, on Jan 18 4:49 PM 2006. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Honey I hope you don't mind but I fed your pet alligator the croc's you bought me and the children; seems he prefered them over feasting on your X-wife's lifeless body from the freezer.by exoticbeaches 0 lines, 10 comments, on May 8 5:23 PM 2007. In Contemporary, Humor, Weird, happy, thoughts, funny• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Whoever said, "Being a survivor was a blessed thing to happen to a person", should be shot because It's obvious they have never been a survivor nor have any Idea what the hell they were talking about.by exoticbeaches 0 lines, 4 comments, on May 24 3:38 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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Counsellors look into the mirror of the soul and see their client looking back.by Mickie27 0 lines, 1 comment, on May 24 6:21 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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One can only take so much pain, until the glass shatters, and one reaches her breaking point.by Searith 0 lines, 2 comments, on May 25 8:45 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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I plucked up a four leaf clover, but the stem was bare, if not for caretaker, nobody would care.by Tellingstories 0 lines, on Jun 4 3:56 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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for every action there is an opposite and equal reaction, for every death there is a birth, for every love there is a hate, and for every tear there is a smile.by AngelOfBetrayal 0 lines, on Jun 6 6:11 PM 2007. In thoughts• Commented on by judge.
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Love can never be {just} a simple little phase; if it was, then you'd be able to forget it.by LucyLightning 0 lines, 4 comments, on May 25 10:48 AM 2007. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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The road to glory is paved with blood and broken dreams.by LuciferLight 0 lines, 1 comment, on May 27 9:34 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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It's sad to say but make-up and a smile cover so much these daysby tru-luv 0 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 6 10:24 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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As a piece of heart goes missing we all understand the importance of what was lost.by AngelOfBetrayal 0 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 6 5:35 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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vanity sheds the petals from the rose of self esteem, exposing it to whithering insults until beauty is no longer an optionby AngelOfBetrayal 0 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 6 6:06 PM 2007. In Society• Commented on by judge.
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In a word, I am love.• Commented on by judge.
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Time sores above silver linings, / fate tells us what we should do with our lives, / we all are surrounded by destiny's findings, / and these findings keep us alive. / We take for granted everything beby heartsshadow 28 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 4 6:08 PM 2007. In lifes lessons• Commented on by judge.
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You know your life is screwed when you go to bed wishing to never wake up and wake up wishing to forever fall asleep...by AngelOfBetrayal 0 lines, on Jun 6 5:59 PM 2007. In Sad• Commented on by judge.
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Life is but a dream, but if that is true, am I a butterfly dreaming that I am a man, or a computer mouse dreaming that I am a Jaguar XK?by LuciferLight 0 lines, 1 comment, on May 28 10:40 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You never know what hope feels like living in the shadow of unbearable agony...by AngelOfBetrayal 0 lines, on Jun 6 5:55 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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Love Freely
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thank you for giving 'Misery Loves Company' an honorable mention
i love those green trophies
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