Tell me about your pain. Tell me about your heartache. Let me know how you felt when you were left behind by someone you love whether in death or not. Or tell me the pain you feel for not havin the one you love.
Ok this is my first contest so the rules will be very simple.
Not to much cussin'
And no erotica.
That's it all my rules simple huh.
ok have fun I will try my hardest to comment on everyone of your poems. Good luck!!!!
Ok this is my first contest so the rules will be very simple.
Not to much cussin'
And no erotica.
That's it all my rules simple huh.
ok have fun I will try my hardest to comment on everyone of your poems. Good luck!!!!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 1, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50
- Final notes: This was so hard to judge! All poems were amazing and each touched a place in my heart. Unfortunatly I can only choose 3 winners. I would have loved to choose you all but I could not. My semifinalists all touched me deeply I felt your pain!!! But my winners are the ones who affected me the most with their WONDERFUL poems. I thank all of you for entering my contest I never expected so many entries!!!!! Thank you again!!! And Congragulations Winners, and I want everyomne to know that you all are winners in my heart!!!
Contest Winners
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I’m standing at the podium / All eyes are glued on me / I’m trying hard to take in air / But it’s getting hard to breathe / They’re all expecting something great / Expecting something perfect / I wonder now if sby BeautifullyBroken17 68 lines, on May 23 7:30 AM 2007. In Pain, Love, Thoughts, Other, Loss, Death
Silver trophy winner
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You never saw me crying / Or sitting there alone. / Listeng to suicide music / You never suspected a thing. / Blood stained clothes / You didn't even ask. / Black clothes and Make-up / You tby Tilted-Misschief 43 lines, 7 comments, on May 21 6:22 AM 2007. In Dark, Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad
Bronze trophy winner
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Quietly I sit and listen to the wind pass me by / The rustles of the leaves / The clearness in the sky. / / The emptiness in my heart / The sadness in my eyes / The aching of my mind / Now that wer'e apart.by blondebabe1 58 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 29 11:11 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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I will never forget the days we once had / The days when you were everything to me / My mind used to tell me we'd be together forever / But now I realize that was all a big dream / The feelings I have for youby Figureskater437 18 lines, on May 29 5:05 PM 2007. In Love Lost• Viewed by judge. [remove]
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Gold trophy winner
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Dear Zach, / I know that I've been mean / And I know that I've been avoiding you lately, / But I still love you / Even though to you / We'rby hopes of sorrow 63 lines, 11 comments, on May 19 11:08 PM 2007. In Love, Life, Sad, Thoughts, My life, Friendship, Depression, Longing, Lost love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I am the agnostic son / Of four fathers misdeeds / But a drunk, drone or ditcher / Is the last thing I need / Leave me, lie to me, get in my face / If I were your size I'd put you in your place / But I won't let yby drummerdna 11 lines, 6 comments, on May 17 2:11 PM 2007. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Mistress I took you in / You said you loved me / A bed stained with our sin / I loved you but now I lose you / Actions and words seem untrue / Out of my life you walk / Everything is forgot / My heart breaks andby Sublime Nightmare 53 lines, 2 comments, on May 22 4:15 PM 2007. In sad, pain, other, personal, love• Commented on by judge.
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So hard to lose one
You knew no life without.by Shockerloba 41 lines, 13 comments, on Sep 9 6:16 PM 2006. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
If your friends become monsters, it's their problem.
When you miss their company, it's your problem.by AutumnsFlame 33 lines, 23 comments, on Mar 14 6:31 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Evening walks by the shore / Or at the creek next door / Either would be fine for me / I am not a nightmare come true / Nor am I an angel cby Childsight 31 lines, 4 comments, on May 1 8:36 PM 2007. In Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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tears on my pillow / [sniff sniff] / what's it all go to show / we weren't meant to be? / interesting / in the back of our minds / we knew• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I howl for my beloved
the red-haired lady that forgave me
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I write these words,with tears in my eyes. / Tears of anger,pain,and rage. / It seems that I cannot do anything right anymore. / No matter what I say or do,I am not good enough for you;wrong. / I want out. / Out of• Viewed by judge.
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I haven't been sleeping / I haven't been keeping / I haven't done anything / But think of you / You've been on my mind for many a day / Only thing I do is sit and lay / I sit beneath the tree / An• Viewed by judge.
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We used to talk all day, and all night. / We make eachother laugh, you say that's what you like. / WE BOTH DON'T FUCKING CHEAT, and that's when I felt the heat / No I'm not your girl, but you said you wanted me to be.• Viewed by judge.
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This is to my present bf....i love him so much but i can never tell him the bad things. how he makes me feel. he just dismisses my feeligns• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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It doesn’t seem that long ago, / Skies where blue / And I was seven, / Having a blast with my origami aunt. / Everything seemed so perfectby brightXdarkness 36 lines, 6 comments, on May 22 7:47 PM 2007. In Personal, Love, Life, Death, My life, Sadness, Loss, Dedication• Viewed by judge.
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well you wanted to walk the stars / and I hope you are / for leaving me / alone to see / and remember the times / when you were mine / I wa• Viewed by judge.
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The day you left me, / I knew it would be forever. / You sadly drove away, / in your dusty green truck. / I wished you the best of luck / and looked away. / I look back on that day, / wishing it would just fadeby Broken Machine 7 lines, 6 comments, on May 22 8:25 PM 2007. In Life, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts• Viewed by judge.
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Broken hearted and shivering
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This is a personal poem for me, I'm going through some things, feeling like my heart is totally broken and still facing conflict• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by whitecities 26 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 7 10:42 AM 2007. In jacob• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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If only I could see you / / Just one more time / / To hear you say you love me / / And hold me in your arms. / / To see the warmth in your eyes / / And listen to your words / / Sit and listen toby blondebabe1 56 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 29 8:57 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A song that i wrote when i thought me and my boyfriend were going to break up over my ex.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I have sat here for hours
Just watching you restby Gypsy-at-Heart 38 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 10 12:06 PM 2007. In Sad, Love, Hope, Friendship, Regret, Feelings, Lyrics• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The sun rose up above another night gone by to which I cried. / Dreams of you and her plagued me so I couldn't sleep not even a wink. / They had me wondering is she way better then me. / Is my love for you just not eby DeathtoloveShade 7 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 30 7:28 AM 2007. In Pain• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I can’t hate you for saying goodbye.
I can’t hate you for making me cry.by DeathtoloveShade 40 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 29 7:49 AM 2007. In Sadly I can't right now hate you for hurting me to my ex-lover• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
dedicated to my dad who died when i was a year oldby bleed-it-out 27 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 16 8:55 PM 2005. In Personal• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Have you ever felt the streams of colors, like you were being used, / Like a cold, hard slate gray overused dusty chalkboard… / A cloud of dust, much like confusion, surrounding you? / It hits you as you’re to lonely to• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I moved his listless, cold body out from my grasp, / While I drew back my head to cry out towards the heavens. / I met him in his banal plaby DeepinRage 17 lines, 1 comment, on May 17 12:40 PM 2007. In Lost Love, Broken Love, Pain, Personal, Dark, Sad, Angst, Life• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Night skies pull in suffocating quiet / Darkness lies on my chest like a black sheet / Pushing down on my face and lungs / Labored breathing the only sign of life / Exhaling into a silence of rigor mortby Chris Stienstra 41 lines, 2 comments, on May 22 7:48 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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How come you to this sweet bed, / when once, you were as big as sky, / as heaven, as God to me? / Little mother, how come life to you / to• Viewed by judge.
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well this would knid of sorta be a suicide note besides the last stanza...i hope peolple understand it good enough.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The wind and rain seem to be dancing
Two lovers who can only meet in the sadist of circumstancesby Random Angel 40 lines, 7 comments, on May 31 5:34 PM 2006. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Every day I must live with what you've done, / you took something so precious from me, / a monster is what you have become. / I hate you with every fiber of my being, / I hope you burn in hell! / I hate the way youby killerxwishes 31 lines, on May 26 7:21 PM 2007• Viewed by judge.
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My Beauty is wrapped up in rags, / I'm abandon, beat, and broken, / Life coming apart at the seams, / So many words still unspoken / I have lost my worth, / I have lost my smile, / I am no longer loved, / Iby yellowrose190 29 lines, 2 comments, on May 26 3:15 PM 2007. In Life, Love, Pain, Sad, Depressed, Thoughts• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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On a dark gray day a gust of windpicks up the few leaves by a tree,this little boy by an old gravesidekneels crying, \• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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~o~ / Darling, it's me again, / Open up the curtains wide, / And let me ruin my voice, / Let my vocal chords rust / And keep the windows shby il-postino 149 lines, on May 23 11:49 PM 2007. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I wake at night and look for you.
Just for a wile i don't feel blue.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
There was a person, who was my love
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The world is coming down
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You and i were ride or die, to be with us was head held high. / We had all the wants they didnt, and held each other up in our own prisons. / The laughs the crys was something sacred, others were indeed deeply taken.by Tye680 21 lines, on May 28 2:12 AM 2007. In Friendship, Depression, Sad, Love, Angry, Goodbyes, Loss, My life, Anger• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Dear Lord,
I awoke this morning all ready to goby Beautifully Poetic 59 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 26 5:45 AM 2006. In Sad• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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The stillness within my soul is deafening
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I know you did it out of pity / Every moment to you was hell / You were sweet and you were saintly / I thought I knew you so well / But you've got to tell me, / Why'd you even bother? / With your tricks and y• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Although you left me...
I think of you.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Oh my love / I reminisce you swear you assured / to not to vacate me / to settle down with me for the time immemorial / you retained your b• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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What do you mean to me you make ask. / You are the nothingness in my mind, / The emptiness in my heart. / You are the darkness I have faced, / The friends I have lost. / You are the hospital bills I have paid, / A• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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NEVER FELT LIKE THIS BEFORE HEARING THOSE WORDS ECHOING OVER AND OVER AND OVER AGAIN. IF YOU JUST LISTEN _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LET US PRAY
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I had two poems about dreams. I meant to put in Just a dream and put sleepless dream in your contest instead. Could you please delete sleepless dream. Just a dream is the one I meant to enter. Thank you soo much.
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wow
the judge hasn't looked at anything in like 4 days
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i so sorry i hadn't been able to comment on your poetry. i no i have alot of work to do to get coughtup. But i wont be home this weekend so bare with me. I will have comments for all of u soon. -
I am so sorry i haven't been able to comment on ya'lls poems. I no i said I would but I've had a hard time here latley. Sorry but i can't comment on all ya'lls but i WILL read everyone of them and judge fairly.
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erm. this contest was finished yesterday, right?
well, who won?
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as am i
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ty for commenting...tsk tsk
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sorry
im sorry everone i wish i could've commented on all ya'lls poem but there where so many. It took all i had to read them all and Then judge them!!! I'm sorry 4 not commenting. forgive me.
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