This is my first contest, so i don't really expect much of anyone.
I want poems that are really, really violent, gory, dark, murderous.
I want you to dig down deep into your morbid minds and think as if you were the killer.....be graphic and deep......thought provoking
It can be about anything from serial killers to murder/torture to being the victim of murder. Be creative and have fun!
----=NOTE: PRE-WRITES NOW ALLOWED!!!=-----------
Rules:
1) no sticky caps
2) Erotica is DEFINITELY aloud if it fits this genre!
3) doesn't have to rhyme
4) i don't mind swearing
5) have fun!
I want poems that are really, really violent, gory, dark, murderous.
I want you to dig down deep into your morbid minds and think as if you were the killer.....be graphic and deep......thought provoking
It can be about anything from serial killers to murder/torture to being the victim of murder. Be creative and have fun!
----=NOTE: PRE-WRITES NOW ALLOWED!!!=-----------
Rules:
1) no sticky caps
2) Erotica is DEFINITELY aloud if it fits this genre!
3) doesn't have to rhyme
4) i don't mind swearing
5) have fun!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 8, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 900, Silver: 500, Bronze: 200, Honorable mention: 1 people
- Final notes: WOW! This was absolutely amazing and has taken me a long time to judge. Sorry about the wait, all the entries were just that good. I'm very proud of ALL THE ENTRIES! ALL OF YOU WHO ENTERED! YOU'VE ALL GOT SOOO MUCH TALENT! Hell, i'd give you all trophies if i could, if i was aloud to, but congrats to all who entered and don't get discouraged if you didn't win, YOU'VE STILL GOT TALENT! I WASN'T DISSAPPOINTED WIHT A SINGLE ENTRY! Kudos and congrats to the winners of this contest as well
Contest Winners
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Droplets of sour sweat / Trespass along frozen lips / Etching the taste of the beast / Upon innocent tongues / Apelike hands rake anemic riby tony1kanobee 36 lines, 4 comments, on May 22 7:41 PM 2007. In Dark, Horror, Killing, Death, Gore, Depraved
Gold trophy winner
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Bloodlust / He slowly climbed the old splintered steps. / Each one with a piercing• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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My torturer paces restlessly / Not quite knowing what to do / He leaves me chained to the ceiling / But returns with a barbed wire whip / Begging, Pleading, asking him to let me live / The whip tearing into my fleshby Goddess of Sorrow 26 lines, 4 comments, on May 23 10:33 AM 2007. In Abuse, Dark, Pain
Bronze trophy winner
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A killer I will be / But only when the time comes / I look out and see all there is / All I've become / I run away, I'm afraid / Of what cr• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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why do you sit there? / you mock me / every time i breath / i suffocate upon the stench / of your discusting existance / fucking die / why dont you fucking die? / your a rotting corpse, / its always been bet• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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I see you there...So tempting is that of your heart beat...
Slowly I came to you as you sleep so soundby Twisteddolly 90 lines, 32 comments, on Nov 22 10:54 PM 2003. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Mommy and Daddy wished to express their love / Mommy helped Daddy lock me in a room / dank and filled with an unknown smell / Left on my owby ChaosChicklette 52 lines, 2 comments, on May 29 9:13 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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The voices are calling again
telling me this is not the end• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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My wrists bleed on the floor / My body drained of its spirit…. / I can’t take it any more / I’m soo sick of your shit / Pain, my only friend, / Reminds me of where I stand / You said you’d be there till the e• Commented on by judge.
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Lying in a pool of blood / The flow an eternal flood / The razor blades had cut so deep / I must enter the eternal sleep / Murdered my love / The one I called dove / Wild and frenzied stabbed her heart / The paiby Oguh777 31 lines, 1 comment, on May 22 12:53 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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Strangle them as they sleep, / They're the main coarse of this ritual, / Their blood smeared across the floor, / Drag they're bodies out th• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I feel like I’m going psychotic / Where did you put the narcotics? / I can’t find any more / Did you check the drawer? / My girlfriends becoming a fucking whore / All the cheating / And the beating / My mind strby WhenAngelsFall98 54 lines, 6 comments, on May 23 12:39 PM 2007. In Dark, confused, Love, weakness, drugs, Pain• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The thoughts of you make me think / Of the times when I was in a torture room / Where they tortured my shattered soul / It made me feel thby scarletXroses 18 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 2 10:18 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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Where have you gone, / You hide from my side, / Now when you're on, / You will be the one to die, / Nothing to fear, / I still draw near, /• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The hot steamy red liquid spills / on the floor. / Her screams fill the basement, but / there is no escape. / A gathering• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Life Is A Game 19 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 16 2:11 PM 2006. In Adult humor, Dark, Humor, Sad, Weird, sadistic humor, evil-but-funny• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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can I have your heart / and I laugh / no matter your answer / I will take it anyway / you’re mine now / because I want you / you’re mine now / by force / your eyes are beautiful / and you turn themby Dirty and Broken 44 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 4 7:58 PM 2007• Viewed by judge.
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I loved this Bitch till my heart started to ache
She fucked me up all over for God's fuckin' sake• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I shall bookmark this and see if I can step out of the box to produce something worthy
La x
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thanks! Good luck.......this should be itneresting! -
Another contest created specifically for me! Let me know if prewrites are open as I have several that fit this description nicely... Can say this is one of my favourite themes (thus the comment I made above).
Best of luck on judging and to those who enter also!
Bookmarking!
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LOL
hey, i'll definitely let you know! Since it has been requested. I'd love to read them!
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Just IM me when prewrite are allowed (or something) and ill get something cool to ya.
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Sure,
i'll make a note of that and let ya know! Haven't spoken to you in forever. haha, you should message me sometime! My message thing isn't working. -
HEY
I'm allowing pre-writes now!
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Okedy Dokedy
I'll enter after I write something phenomenal. Don't close it for a little while! -
Moo
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*cough cough*
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What fun...definately bookmarking this ~evil grin~
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Are you aloud more than one entry? i want to add another but im afriad it will take mine out of the finalists
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ok
you can now put in more than one entry! GO AHEAD AND POST IT!
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I sit wrong to be excited to see if your deranged writing gets something? haha it sems so wrong to me anticipating it...;0
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haha
by "Deranged writing gets something" i'm assuming you mean all the enteries i get in this contest? Right? Or do you mena my personal writings....lol. Either way, even if it sounds wrong, IT SOUNDS COOL TO ME! LOL
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Thank you very much for the silver and congrats to all the winners.
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I thank you for the shiny trophy...it feels good to win.
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