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Murderous, Gruesome, Sick, Twisted.......

This is my first contest, so i don't really expect much of anyone.

I want poems that are really, really violent, gory, dark, murderous.

I want you to dig down deep into your morbid minds and think as if you were the killer.....be graphic and deep......thought provoking

It can be about anything from serial killers to murder/torture to being the victim of murder. Be creative and have fun!

----=NOTE: PRE-WRITES NOW ALLOWED!!!=-----------

Rules:
1) no sticky caps
2) Erotica is DEFINITELY aloud if it fits this genre!
3) doesn't have to rhyme
4) i don't mind swearing
5) have fun!

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on June 8, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 900, Silver: 500, Bronze: 200, Honorable mention: 1 people
  • Final notes:
    WOW! This was absolutely amazing and has taken me a long time to judge. Sorry about the wait, all the entries were just that good. I'm very proud of ALL THE ENTRIES! ALL OF YOU WHO ENTERED! YOU'VE ALL GOT SOOO MUCH TALENT! Hell, i'd give you all trophies if i could, if i was aloud to, but congrats to all who entered and don't get discouraged if you didn't win, YOU'VE STILL GOT TALENT! I WASN'T DISSAPPOINTED WIHT A SINGLE ENTRY! Kudos and congrats to the winners of this contest as well

Contest Winners

  1. Droplets of sour sweat / Trespass along frozen lips / Etching the taste of the beast / Upon innocent tongues / Apelike hands rake anemic ri
    by tony1kanobee 36 lines, 4 comments, on May 22 7:41 PM 2007. In Dark, Horror, Killing, Death, Gore, Depraved
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Bloodlust / He slowly climbed the old splintered steps. / Each one with a piercing
    by Ktulu Blackwolfe 25 lines, 48 comments, on Jul 25 6:22 PM 2006. In Dark
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. My torturer paces restlessly / Not quite knowing what to do / He leaves me chained to the ceiling / But returns with a barbed wire whip / Begging, Pleading, asking him to let me live / The whip tearing into my flesh
    by Goddess of Sorrow 26 lines, 4 comments, on May 23 10:33 AM 2007. In Abuse, Dark, Pain
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. A killer I will be / But only when the time comes / I look out and see all there is / All I've become / I run away, I'm afraid / Of what cr
    by NickelleteXninja 31 lines, 21 comments, on Jun 1 11:35 PM 2007
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. why do you sit there? / you mock me / every time i breath / i suffocate upon the stench / of your discusting existance / fucking die / why dont you fucking die? / your a rotting corpse, / its always been bet
    by allifrogger 49 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 4 10:22 PM 2007. In revenge, anger, gore, murder
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. I see you there...So tempting is that of your heart beat...
    Slowly I came to you as you sleep so sound
    by Twisteddolly 90 lines, 32 comments, on Nov 22 10:54 PM 2003. In Dark
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  7. by roars-in-public 50 lines, 1 comment, on May 22 2:25 PM 2007. In Dark, Other, Pain, Adult, Abuse, Death, Issues, Killer
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  8. Where is my victim? / Wait, I can smell their fear / Trembling inside out / Oh, how I can't wait! / To taste the blood that runs inside / To hear them whisper / Their secret pleas for life / But will I gran
    by Dovina 36 lines, 2 comments, on May 22 12:35 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  9. This poem dosn't flow well like my others since it took me 2 weeks to write so sorry.
    by Abstract Image 54 lines, 9 comments, on Feb 28 9:13 AM 2007. In Dark, Pain, Death, Longing, Anger, Depressed, Hate
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  10. Mommy and Daddy wished to express their love / Mommy helped Daddy lock me in a room / dank and filled with an unknown smell / Left on my ow
    by ChaosChicklette 52 lines, 2 comments, on May 29 9:13 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  11. by NickelleteXninja 32 lines, 20 comments, on May 30 7:47 AM 2007. In Spiritual, Adult, Life, Other, Death
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  12. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3027238, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  13. by Jehdin tal Darasin 68 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 16 10:13 PM 2007. In Dark, Erotica, Sick
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  14. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2860624, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  15. by Georges 19 lines, 24 comments, on Mar 8 4:55 PM 2006. In Spiritual, Dark, Adult
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  16. The voices are calling again
    telling me this is not the end
    by Brucie 32 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 18 8:46 AM 2003. In Other
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [35]

1 - 35 of 35
  • My wrists bleed on the floor / My body drained of its spirit…. / I can’t take it any more / I’m soo sick of your shit / Pain, my only friend, / Reminds me of where I stand / You said you’d be there till the e
    by P-oEd EmO 28 lines, 2 comments, on May 22 10:51 AM 2007. In Love, Dark, & Sad
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Lying in a pool of blood / The flow an eternal flood / The razor blades had cut so deep / I must enter the eternal sleep / Murdered my love / The one I called dove / Wild and frenzied stabbed her heart / The pai
    by Oguh777 31 lines, 1 comment, on May 22 12:53 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Strangle them as they sleep, / They're the main coarse of this ritual, / Their blood smeared across the floor, / Drag they're bodies out th
    by sinisterkitten 33 lines, 14 comments, on May 14 9:36 AM 2007. In Weird, Dark, Family, Humor
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • I feel like I’m going psychotic / Where did you put the narcotics? / I can’t find any more / Did you check the drawer? / My girlfriends becoming a fucking whore / All the cheating / And the beating / My mind str
    by WhenAngelsFall98 54 lines, 6 comments, on May 23 12:39 PM 2007. In Dark, confused, Love, weakness, drugs, Pain
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Lingering by the fireplace / Lyes a pile of letters / You really shouldn't read them / You ought to know better / They are the letter of a
    by Atrophya 49 lines, 15 comments, on May 26 4:10 PM 2007. In dark, murder, death, sad, horror, gothic, etc.
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Pain, why are you here? / You never go away / You feed off of my fear / Returning everyday. / You slash into my skin / Twisting deeper and
    by Venusbabi 28 lines, 22 comments, on May 17 11:55 AM 2007. In Pain, Emo, Dark, Escape, Suicide, Abuse
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • The lies of a thousand lives, / Fills my raging intellect up with complete revulsion; / For I loathe thee who ever commit such a filthy act
    by perfectsunset 68 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 2 4:27 AM 2007. In Dark, Pain, Murder, Gruesome, Intense
    • Commented on by judge.
  • The thoughts of you make me think / Of the times when I was in a torture room / Where they tortured my shattered soul / It made me feel th
    by scarletXroses 18 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 2 10:18 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Where have you gone, / You hide from my side, / Now when you're on, / You will be the one to die, / Nothing to fear, / I still draw near, /
    by Lord-of-Tiki 13 lines, 6 comments, on May 22 2:59 PM 2007. In Weird, Dark, Other
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Meow...? Tis interesting gore..ish poem
    by WanderingCyclone 68 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 3 9:22 PM 2007. In Dark, Weird, Pain, Horror
    • Commented on by judge.
  • The hot steamy red liquid spills / on the floor. / Her screams fill the basement, but / there is no escape. / A gathering
    by Dark Whispers 27 lines, 7 comments, on May 21 8:38 AM 2007. In dark, gore, for intence gore
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • by Life Is A Game 19 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 16 2:11 PM 2006. In Adult humor, Dark, Humor, Sad, Weird, sadistic humor, evil-but-funny
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • when i gave you my heart,
    i didnt mean rip it out,
    by Life Is A Game 28 lines, 8 comments, on Dec 8 1:17 PM 2006. In pain, lies, deciet, love, revenge, haunting
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • A bit psychotic/violent/bloody/scary...and truthful. My favorite poem. Not for those that scare easy. Try not to fear me when you are done.
    by Sesheta 46 lines, 10 comments, on Jun 3 7:07 PM 2007. In Dark, Fantasy, Pain, Weird, Murder, Anger
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • by Jehdin tal Darasin 13 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 4 12:46 PM 2007. In Dark, Pain, Sick, Murder, Torture, Adult
    • Viewed by judge.
  • by Georges 20 lines, 27 comments, on Mar 9 5:05 PM 2006. In Spiritual, Dark, Hope, Adult
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • by JeannieD Hunter 68 lines, 11 comments, on Feb 7 7:24 PM 2007. In Adult, Dark, Horror
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Look at the man with the strange bulging, crazy eyes
    Watch as the buzzards fly over and follow him in the skies
    by Georges 26 lines, 15 comments, on Oct 5 2:21 PM 2006. In Dark
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • by VisionEmpty 60 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 4 7:44 PM 2007. In Abuse, Adult, Dark, Lyrics, Pain
    • Commented on by judge.
  • can I have your heart / and I laugh / no matter your answer / I will take it anyway / you’re mine now / because I want you / you’re mine now / by force / your eyes are beautiful / and you turn them
    by Dirty and Broken 44 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 4 7:58 PM 2007
    • Viewed by judge.
  • I loved this Bitch till my heart started to ache
    She fucked me up all over for God's fuckin' sake
    by Ashaq 54 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 26 9:09 PM 2006. In Dark
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite

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  • Laura Lamarca gold member
    May 22, 2007
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    I shall bookmark this and see if I can step out of the box to produce something worthy La x


  • Synthetic-Nightmare
    May 22, 2007
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    Ha!

    thanks! Good luck.......this should be itneresting!


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    May 22, 2007
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    Another contest created specifically for me! Let me know if prewrites are open as I have several that fit this description nicely... Can say this is one of my favourite themes (thus the comment I made above).

    Best of luck on judging and to those who enter also!

    Bookmarking!


  • Methusala
    May 22, 2007
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    Just IM me when prewrite are allowed (or something) and ill get something cool to ya.

    ~James


  • Goddess of Sorrow
    May 23, 2007
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    Okedy Dokedy

    I'll enter after I write something phenomenal. Don't close it for a little while!


  • Oguh777
    May 23, 2007
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    Moo


  • Lost Night Shadow gold member
    May 23, 2007
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    What fun...definately bookmarking this ~evil grin~


  • NickelleteXninja
    June 1, 2007
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    Are you aloud more than one entry? i want to add another but im afriad it will take mine out of the finalists

  • NickelleteXninja
    June 4, 2007
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    I sit wrong to be excited to see if your deranged writing gets something? haha it sems so wrong to me anticipating it...;0

    • Synthetic-Nightmare
      June 4, 2007
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      haha

      by "Deranged writing gets something" i'm assuming you mean all the enteries i get in this contest? Right? Or do you mena my personal writings....lol. Either way, even if it sounds wrong, IT SOUNDS COOL TO ME! LOL


  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    June 8, 2007
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    Thank you very much for the silver and congrats to all the winners.


  • tony1kanobee
    June 10, 2007
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    I thank you for the shiny trophy...it feels good to win.

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