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Awaken my Mind

Awaken my mind

It has been a few weeks since I had the time to hold a contest, but now back in the fold, I have a need to here alarm bells ringing to awaken my mind.

So that is where you lot come in.
I want to see and read your best bits.

Produce something that’s going to make me sit up and pay attention.

It’s as simple as that, make me wake up and see why I joined AP.

Normal rules apply:
1. No bashing
2. No swearing
3. No hitting the wee kids
4. No Erotic stuff, (don’t have the energy)


Well, what you waiting for, I’m sleeping remember…….

Points:  lots of them going if you want them.

Gold 500, Silver 300, Bronze 150
And HM’s by the boatload. (Only if you wake me up)

Zzzzzzzzz……..Zzzzzzzzz…………

UPDATE AS OF 21:15 GMT 16th May 07'

I have removed the anon part of the contest set up.  I have decided that I don't need a hidden name to wake me up. If I wake, refreshed and inspired, then you have done your job.  The fact that your name may be on my fav list makes no difference at all to me. You, my friends, know fine well I say what I feel, and this will be no different.wake me or leave me slumber, the choice is yours.   Zzzzzzzzzzzzz............ 

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on May 28, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 300, Bronze: 150, Honorable mention: 5 people
  • Final notes:
    With eyes open, and mind awakened, I sit here typing a message of Thanks to all those who took precious time and effort to enter this outstanding contest.

    I have seen so many fantastic pieces, and had a few jolts to spark ideas, let alone see why I joined AP, that this has made judging tough, but that to me showed you were all giving it a go, and that I appreciate a lot, Thank you.

    As for the winners, well, just read thier entry and see why they got there.

    1. Olympus - Skaldcraft.
    2. there are times - waydownuponjoy.
    3. world wealth - godslittlegirl.

    HM's go to:
    The Risen Sun
    Sandygram
    Rose of Ireland
    luciferlight
    Cinnarry

    and to all those who followed in no specific order, I say Thank you.

    stay strong, stay focused, stay safe and most of all keep smiling.

Contest Winners

  1. Sometimes you’ll feel like you’re flying / without wings into another’s arms ~ / and sometimes you’ll go away for awhile, / come back later on for / a smile - that seeks release. / So stay on the ground
    by waydownuponjoy 40 lines, 4 comments, on May 17 5:58 AM 2007. In Contest, Life, Feelings
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. A muffled thought, seemingly abstruse, / frivolous and vagrant, has pierced / my complacency and coiled like a noose
    by Raazi 21 lines, 13 comments, on May 16 8:30 AM 2007
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. As shadows crest beyond the moon, / the fading sunset dims. / wisps of tall grass beyond the dune, / bottleneck dolphin swims. / Gulls tha
    by Sandygram 25 lines, 24 comments, on May 15 9:50 PM 2007. In Nature, Thoughts, Life, Beach
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. by Cynthia Gaines 26 lines, 8 comments, on May 19 3:57 PM 2007. In Life, Society, Spiritual, Thoughts
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2970512, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]

Entries [27]

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  • why do people act as they do / thy are filled with pain, and dispare to / most are rich, this is sad / becaus all of them should be glad / thy all find resons to be sad / but but most of the resons are ve
    by eeeseeey 9 lines, 2 comments, on May 15 10:04 PM 2007. In Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge.
  • An over powered rage burns the soul into a deep despair discovered by uncovered darkness / As it's revealed the pain-strickened heart falls in a pit of bloody agony. / Pounding thrusts beats to the outside ear. / Then s
    by crocopine 5 lines, 2 comments, on May 15 10:06 PM 2007. In dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • They say let sleeping poets lie, / Or was that ourangutans.. / Either way, i shall defy, / The laws of this strange land. / Fools rush in where poets fear to tread, / Thought they'd just go and get a pen, / W
    by Onionducks 30 lines, 3 comments, on May 16 3:13 AM 2007. In Sayings, Phrases, Life, Thoughts, Weird, Other, Random
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by Olivias Violin 23 lines, 7 comments, on May 16 7:38 AM 2007. In Nature
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Our sons and daughters serve in harms way / To defend our way of life. / Some are students, some grandparents, / Many a husband or wife. /
    by Tom Zart 42 lines, 1 comment, on May 16 8:51 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Can't you see the throng is gathering? / awaken now or else you'll miss it. / Screaming kids and wailing women, / gathered on the grey, col
    by Perception 5 34 lines, 5 comments, on May 16 9:02 AM 2007. In Society
    • Commented on by judge.
  • it’s listless information / the way I’m feeling / surrounded by this comfortless knowledge / that I can’t be fixed / i feel defeated / like
    by lysdarling 19 lines, 4 comments, on May 16 9:56 AM 2007. In Personal, Thoughts, Life, Sad
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Imperfections of little things, a sliver of glass, a splinter of wood, the cry of an ugly child, the simple, simple little things that dig into our natures, / Carving their miniscule niche, / With broken fervor, / Sweat
    by Deviant Dreamer 15 lines, 2 comments, on May 16 10:31 AM 2007. In Society, Thoughts, Life
    • Commented on by judge.
  • I write in many styles, so / many things inspire my verse / from things close to the heart / to abstract thought / I close my eyes and open
    by katscradle 25 lines, 2 comments, on May 16 6:56 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Contemporary, Other
    • Commented on by judge.
  • A invisible ripple moves through us each day / Its fates way of making its decisions. / Sometimes you can get swept away in a new direction. / Completely changing your life. / Or maybe just ge
    by delightfulmess 7 lines, 5 comments, on May 16 7:01 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Personal, Life, Nature
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Her hair carried by the current / Her tail is flowing fast / She's passing through her sunken ships / She's twirling 'round their masts / She spreads her webbed blue fingers / To let the water cool them off
    by wonderbandalice 44 lines, 1 comment, on May 16 4:21 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Great lumbering giant / a large grey beast; massive / mound of flesh towering above / the other creatures on the plains. / Sounding yo
    by Zephyr Aryn 22 lines, 12 comments, on May 16 8:43 PM 2007. In Other, Nature, Contemporary, Contest, Elephant
    • Commented on by judge.
  • so don't mark me
    with an unbearable irony
    by zetsuie 39 lines, 6 comments, on May 16 9:23 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Personal, Lyrics
    • Commented on by judge.
  • I've been chasing down my dreams / Looking at places that I've been / When there's nowhere else to find / Gentle moments left behind us /
    by myriad-dark 25 lines, 3 comments, on May 16 11:53 PM 2007. In Lyrics, Life, Hope, Personal, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Gentle is the breeze that finds its way...
    by MJ Donnelly 29 lines, 13 comments, on May 21 2:48 AM 2007. In Contest, Inspirational
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Darkness fills the mind, / As the time comes to an end, / Of a life, long lived, long loved. / Grief lays heavy upon the air, / Priests spe
    by Silverblade 10 lines, 7 comments, on May 27 6:01 PM 2007. In Love, Death, Sorrow, Happiness, Sad, Life
    • Commented on by judge.
  • I've been tempted all my life / When times get tough turn to the knife / its the worst option i can think of but / The endorphin rush from
    by Paincalledlove 18 lines, 3 comments, on May 27 10:11 PM 2007. In Angst, Pain, Personal, Sad, Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • There are yellow paper stars, / hanging by pieces of string- / from the sky. / She walks beneath, / red lipstick smeared across her face, / eyeliner on her cheeks. / One step, two steps- / she walks do
    by FlaviusArrianus 42 lines, 2 comments, on May 27 7:59 PM 2007. In sad, personal, spiritual, stars
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Euphoria washed upon me, / as my eyes beheld a sight, / of the sun setting on my youth, / and welcoming the night. / The sky was alive with purple, / and turquoise and blue, / as God sent me an orange sunset
    by KarmasBlessing 20 lines, 1 comment, on May 27 11:31 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.

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  • ScarletO gold member
    May 15, 2007
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    So you need an alarm clock to bash you over the head to awaken your mind? And you don't want erotica? WEll, ok then. lol I don't have the energy either. Guess I will have to use my mind to awaken yours.


    • Silent Cougar Moderators member
      May 15, 2007
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      be gentle, I don't do startling wake ups, and if you do, stand well back, it's amazing how long my arms can be when I wake with a jump.


  • JoyfulWriter
    May 15, 2007
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    I have bookmarked this, Bro...I will be back with bells on


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    May 18, 2007
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    Ingenius!!!

    • Silent Cougar Moderators member
      May 19, 2007
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      ingenius,,,,,

      thats me Sis, I just cant help myself at times, hehe, nice to see your working on your entry,,,, oh, how did I know that,,??

      see, your thinking too now.

  • Cinnarry gold member
    May 28, 2007
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    Thank you for the Hm and congrats to all of the winners!


  • Sandygram
    May 28, 2007
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    WONDERFUL CONTEST!!!!

    CONGRATULATIONS to all the winners. Great entries. This was a wonderful contest Mike. Thank you for the Honorable Mention. Take care, Blessings to you. Sandy

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